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Old 03-13-2010
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Default i wrote this to you .

I dont know why things are this way now...
how did we come to this?...after 5 years and a kid?
I told you forever and I meant it.I saw me growing old with you.

"I wanna be happy,but only with you" is what I'd always tell you.
And thats what I truly wanted. Why do you think I stayed around for so long?
I wasn't looking for a quick fix.
I was looking for a beautiful soul,and I found it in you.

But things turned upside down.
& it wasn't completely your fault or mine.
It was the 3rd person we became.That person who we were together.
I dont know if you understand, but it makes complete sense to me now.

Mayble we could've made it work if we had known how handle us.
Maybe if we would've sat down and talked & listened to each other.
Maybe just maybe that would have helped.

You said you needed time...for what?
Im not 100% sure of why or what you needed the "break" for.
But hey I love you enough to respect your wishes.
Whatever you think makes you happy, go for it.

We're just stuck in total different dimensions.
I'm probably just stuck on stupid mode,still feeling for you.
Loving you,hoping things were different...

And sometimes I miss you so much.
In a-
I think Ima go crazy if I dont hear your voice,I got a nervous nasty feeling in my gut, I feel empty without you,desperate to call you,always thinking about you,when I hear your name I get a knot in my throat,kinda way-.

And its sick,I feel sick.
Sick to my stomach that I wanna puke,whenever that thought sneaks up in my brain.
The thought of you moving on,finding someone new.
But I can promise you,who ever she will be,she wont love you more than me.

Te quiero.I miss you.Wanna hug you.Wanna kiss you.Wanna love you.
And make love to you over and over and over again...to make up for all the time we've wasted.
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As we die, both you and I
With my head in my hands
I sit and cry


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Old 04-28-2010
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Default Re: i wrote this to you .

gUERA... u hAVE a gIFT... i lOVE tHE pICTURE u paINT wITH uR wORDS...

"And sometimes I miss you so much.
In a-
I think Ima go crazy if I dont hear your voice,I got a nervous nasty feeling in my gut, I feel empty without you,desperate to call you,always thinking about you,when I hear your name I get a knot in my throat,kinda way-...."

i lOVE tHIS paRT.....
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