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Old 03-10-2010
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I had been so excited to see you,
it had been so very long.
I thought it would be nice to surprise you,
But I learned how much I was wrong.

I was going to knock on your door,
but I used my key instead.
As I got to your room, I fell to the floor,
when I saw you with him in your bed.

That day when I left your home
I ran away so fast.
God how I felt so alone,
I had thought we were going to last.

You insisted on ringing the doorbell,
but you are not who I want to see.
You already have sent my heart into hell,
so why can't you just let me be.

What you have done to me
has left me in such great pain.
My friends say I act crazy,
and I feel like I'm going insane.

I cannot see how you could lie,
and how you could ever stray.
But when I told you goodbye
I meant what I said that day.



This Was One Of My First Poemas That I Wrote In Jr High....
El dolor es perdonado pero nunca será olvidado........

I hope to hear from ya'll... Gracias.
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Old 03-13-2010
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why did you run when u saw her in bed with another guy??.....
but yeh u were young in jr high, you couldnt have expected to have something serious.
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As we die, both you and I
With my head in my hands
I sit and cry


¤°iM A LOVER.iM A FiGHTER.iM A RAPPER.iM A WRiTER°¤SEE,RELATiONSHiPS YOU GET WAT U PUT iN,AND YOU GET WAT U DESERVE.SEE i GOT WAT i DESERVED AND i MADE iT LiKE DAT
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Old 04-18-2010
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Default Re: Sad Surprise

i really like this one..
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Old 04-28-2010
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gRACIAS... aND yEAH.... i wAS oNLY iN jR hIGH... peRO eL dOLOR qUE tENIA eN mI cORAZON wAS nOT tHAT oF a 13 YEAR OLD... eSO eDA dOLOR qUE i'D nEVA wISH oN aNY 1....
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