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Old 10-08-2008
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I laid her body beneath a grave,
a grave I dug so deeply hidden.
A smile appeared as the dirt fell over
fell over her body, in hopes of ridden.

Her beauty’s still a haunting sight,
a haunting memory
that creeps in fright.

And yet I knew that she was dead,
or so I thought one night in bed.

Her voice would whisper,
replaying words
within my ears
in threatening tones.

And I would wake,
turn on the lamp
and she was gone
this devil vamp.

And so I woke
that night and prayed
that I was mad
and approached her grave

And it was empty
for she had rose
and vanished where?
nobody knows.

And so she haunts
and I know she will
this vampire creeps
and sits not still

Until I’m drained
and drained so empty.
That I am weak
she’ll feel no pity.

For my last words
to “Carla’s spell”
That is her name
May she burn in hell.

And she will haunt
and I will wait
She comes for me
with no escape

And I will wait
And wait
And wait
For I am bait
with my soul at stake.........

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nnice...=]
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^^^ Thank you!
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that was really good...talented you are!
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^^ Thanks! Good to know you enjoyed it.
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Very Vampire-well bit.
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^^^ Thanks!

........ Some bites are cool.........
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you always impress me =D
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you always impress me =D
Damn Girl where you been! Good to see you're still around. Thanks for reading. Hope you got some drops too.
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Bwahahahahaha! questions, anguish tied in with the macabre! Sweet! Thanks for the early All Hallows eve treat!
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^^^ A wicked bite to you.

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^^^ A wicked bite to you.

Thanks for viewing.
You knew I would! I love your vicious little blood dripping drops! Keep on !
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Ha ha ha...Nice & Hoakey...But I like it...perfect for the season...
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My favorite holiday, man.

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berrrry nice mister......but again give credit were it is due "MP"


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LOL... i thought this thread said dead rising. i was homing to get some gametips for that xbox 360 game...
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berrrry nice mister......but again give credit were it is due "MP"





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LOL... i thought this thread said dead rising. i was homing to get some gametips for that xbox 360 game...
You still play video games?
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justforthehellofitbump........
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freakin wicked dude
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Been a while since I've seen this one. Thanks for the bump Nina.

You think it's wicked eh?...............
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yes!!!!
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