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Old 03-11-2006
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Smile Donde Estas?

Donde estas?

Aunque nunca te he visto pienso en ti…
sabiendo que no te puedo acariciar
Te imagino como un lindo amanecer
En mi mente estas como una sombra que me hace sonar….

Imagino que tus ojos son espejo
Y en ellos quiero ver mi futuro
Quisiera que tu boca me besara
Y a tus brazos convertirlos en mi escudo

Pintaria tu sonrisa en mi cuerpo
Y tu rostro dibujaria en mi almohada
Resaria para que no corriera el tiempo
Con tus besos sembrados en mi alma

Donde estas que no te encuentro?
Cual camino has tomado?
Quisiera cruzarme en tu sendero
Y caminar contigo paso a paso

Quien eres tu que me haces reir?
Por que brillan mis ojos al pensarte
Cuando estaras frente a mi?
O es que acaso ya pasaste?

Sin mover mis labios grito tu nombre
Nombre imposible de adivinar
Que me perdone mi dios del cielo
Por ser tan devil y quererte amar..

Pero mientras te imagino y te pienso
Dime como llegar a ti?
O es que acaso no existes?
Si es asi, ya no quiero vivir..


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i liked it it was nice! and whats wrong with you ppl cant even comment on a nice poem!!
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nice
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Outstanding!
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one of the best that i've heard.....keep it up i wanna hear more...
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