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Old 10-16-2008
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I Won't Call I Won't Write I Won't Stay Up At Night
Hoping You Come Home
I Won't Think, I'll Never Blink And See You There
When I'm Alone
I Won't Lose One Wink Of Sleep
I Won't See Days That I Can't Eat
No I'll Carry On
I'll Never Cry, No That's Not A Lie I Swear It
It's For Real
I Don't Care No I Truly Don't Care
How You Feel
But I Won't Lie
At Least I Try
I Won't Stare At Pictures In My Mind
Just To See Your Smile..one More Time
I Won't Lay On Your Side Of The Bed, My Face In Your Pillow
Just To Smell You, And If I Do I Won't Tell You
No My Pride Is Too Important, I'd Rather Hold On
Instead Of Telling Anyone I Was Wrong...that I Was Wrong
You Hurt Me And I Won't Forgive, No I Can't Forgive
We Had Plans Oh We Had Plans And You Lied...you Let Me Lie
You Broke My Heart You Tore My World Apart
And I Won't Give You Another Chance
So You Were Sick, You Say You Were Ill
Excuses Build Mountains Out Of Small Hills
And I'm Sick Just Like You
But I Never Lied To You
I Cried For Your Hand, I Cried For Your Help
But You Didn't Understand And You Put Me Through Hell
So How Does It Feel?
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nice.. hope things are better
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bravo
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I Won't Call I Won't Write I Won't Stay Up At Night
Hoping You Come Home
I Won't Think, I'll Never Blink And See You There
When I'm Alone
I Won't Lose One Wink Of Sleep
I Won't See Days That I Can't Eat
No I'll Carry On
I'll Never Cry, No That's Not A Lie I Swear It
It's For Real
I Don't Care No I Truly Don't Care
How You Feel
But I Won't Lie
At Least I Try
I Won't Stare At Pictures In My Mind
Just To See Your Smile..one More Time
I Won't Lay On Your Side Of The Bed, My Face In Your Pillow
Just To Smell You, And If I Do I Won't Tell You
No My Pride Is Too Important, I'd Rather Hold On
Instead Of Telling Anyone I Was Wrong...that I Was Wrong
You Hurt Me And I Won't Forgive, No I Can't Forgive
We Had Plans Oh We Had Plans And You Lied...you Let Me Lie
You Broke My Heart You Tore My World Apart
And I Won't Give You Another Chance
So You Were Sick, You Say You Were Ill
Excuses Build Mountains Out Of Small Hills
And I'm Sick Just Like You
But I Never Lied To You
I Cried For Your Hand, I Cried For Your Help
But You Didn't Understand And You Put Me Through Hell
So How Does It Feel?

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pretty good has alot of strong feelings
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damn, thats how i feel right now.
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nice poem.!
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great!!
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