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Old 01-07-2007
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Default Im hot!! Check me out!! I'm the realist

My eyes begin to see so they cut the tongue from my face,
they cant let me tell so I'm removed from this place,
he whips my mind I'm his slave so I must rebel,
generations speak so i know mine is a living hell,
history is unforgettable so i forget about truce,
i know most accept their place feeling like whats the use,
my community is shrouded in capital despair,
we havent enough capital so we grasp the air,
racism is my father so i know he dosent care,
my mother is dependent on the drugs he places everywhere,
like elm st my life becomes a bloody nightmare,
so how can you dismiss my homicidal stare,
my barrio is the product of your enviroment,
so im simply the by product of your racist government,
the police patrol to kill not to protect,
cowboys in cars abusing power given this the real suspect,
children can barely read so its easy to decieve the youth,
we turn on MTV and BET to fantasize about your truth,
never taking the time to see through this smoke screen,
we pursue this fantasy with the eyes of the unseen,
young men stand on corners trading cash for death,
turning their own people into zombies they make crack breath,
the liquor store out numbers super markets,
our demise has become his super target,
red dots gleam from police glocks death is a black market,
the president blames terrorists so he can tap my phone,
now he can hear everything i say the FBI waits for a bone,
wouldnt you be afraid if you lived atop a volcano,
one day darkness will come to light like a day glow.
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wow powerful lines!!
real nice..
hope to see more...
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Ditto!

nice read
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wow... you have some good talent .. to write.....

keep on droping them lines....


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