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Old 03-10-2006
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Everynight You Pray For Him,
For God To Forgive Him For His Sins,
And Ask Him To Please Watch Over Him,
And To Please Help Him Make Good Decisions,
But Instead He Out There Slangin N Bangin,
N Its Got Yo Mind Str8 Trippin,
N Your Wishin That He Would Listen When You Say,
To Stop Tha Bullshit With His Friendz,
Cuz They Wont Be There Alwayz,
But Everythang You Say Goes N And Out Tha Other Ear,
But You Still Stay By His Side,
Cuz You Love Him So Dear,and Even Tho He Makes You Shed Tearz You Still Love Him,
But It Hurts That He Aint Around When You Wanna Kiss N Hug Him,
N You Know Deep Down
That He Really Wants To Change,
But He Tell You Its Impossible,
Itz Somethin He Cant Escape,
And His Gangster Wayz Hurt You So,
He Sees Your Tearz Fall,
But He Just Turnz Away Actin Like He Dont Know,
And It Hurts You So Much
That He Acts Like He Dont Care About Life,
And Late At Night Ya'll Argue, Tellin Him To Act Right,
And You Hope One Day That He Can Change Hiz Wayz,
But Until Then Your Still And Forever Gonna Love Him,
And Stay By Your Vato's Side,
Cuz No Matter What Happenz,
Your Down For Him For Life,
And Everynight You Pray To God
To Please Protect Your Gangster Guy,
Prayin That Someday He'll Be Done With Tha Crazy Life:.
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DAMN THIS SHET MADE ME CRY...*TEAR*
CAUSE das how i felt for my first love......
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yep,you are right, everything you said is true...serio. but q-se le puede hacer, that's what you have to go thru because of being a cholo's hyna.
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true that....why cant there be a "chola`s vato"????
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I pray for the day when Chicanas will stop calling themselves PIECES OF ASS. It's bad enough when the males use the word "hyna," but when Chicanas refer to THEMSELVES that way, it's just pathetic.
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I pray for the day when Chicanas will stop calling themselves PIECES OF ASS. It's bad enough when the males use the word "hyna," but when Chicanas refer to THEMSELVES that way, it's just pathetic.
HUH?? DOESNT HYNA MEAN GURL??....

ANYWAYZ I LIKED UR LIL POEM THINGY PAYASITA TRISTE ITS SOO TRUE
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Originally Posted by Paya$ita Trizte
Everynight You Pray For Him,
For God To Forgive Him For His Sins,
And Ask Him To Please Watch Over Him,
And To Please Help Him Make Good Decisions,
But Instead He Out There Slangin N Bangin,
N Its Got Yo Mind Str8 Trippin,
N Your Wishin That He Would Listen When You Say,
To Stop Tha Bullshit With His Friendz,
Cuz They Wont Be There Alwayz,
But Everythang You Say Goes N And Out Tha Other Ear,
But You Still Stay By His Side,
Cuz You Love Him So Dear,and Even Tho He Makes You Shed Tearz You Still Love Him,
But It Hurts That He Aint Around When You Wanna Kiss N Hug Him,
N You Know Deep Down
That He Really Wants To Change,
But He Tell You Its Impossible,
Itz Somethin He Cant Escape,
And His Gangster Wayz Hurt You So,
He Sees Your Tearz Fall,
But He Just Turnz Away Actin Like He Dont Know,
And It Hurts You So Much
That He Acts Like He Dont Care About Life,
And Late At Night Ya'll Argue, Tellin Him To Act Right,
And You Hope One Day That He Can Change Hiz Wayz,
But Until Then Your Still And Forever Gonna Love Him,
And Stay By Your Vato's Side,
Cuz No Matter What Happenz,
Your Down For Him For Life,
And Everynight You Pray To God
To Please Protect Your Gangster Guy,
Prayin That Someday He'll Be Done With Tha Crazy Life:.


thats crazy chic pero its true que no?
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HUH?? DOESNT HYNA MEAN GURL??....
"Hyna" does not mean "girl." When someone is calling you his hyna, he is calling you his PIECE OF ASS.
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Girl I Liked You Peom It Was Bad Ass Keep Droppin Them Lines Mija Good Job Damn I Didnt Know Hyna Ment Piece Of Ass
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"Hyna" does not mean "girl." When someone is calling you his hyna, he is calling you his PIECE OF ASS.
yeah i didnt know nither
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OKAY, HOW DO u KNOW?
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OKAY, HOW DO u KNOW?
The first person who told me what "hyna" really means was my mother. She told me to NEVER let anyone call me that.

A few years later, this word came up in a discussion we were having in a Chicano Studies course at my university.
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propz on your poema mija... its hella firme... very tru too. keep it up ehz. much love n respect.. take care.. alrato!
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... now that was touching!!!.....
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The first person who told me what "hyna" really means was my mother. She told me to NEVER let anyone call me that.

A few years later, this word came up in a discussion we were having in a Chicano Studies course at my university.

yeah my homegirl told me that too.....
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I know how u feel. gurl i gotz to give u propz! keep writin. u got talento. am i neva knew that hyna meant piece of ass. im lost
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I READ iT AGAiN DAT SHiTS FUKiN TRUE.
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that was a really good poem. it really is true...
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watafuck WHATS SO FUNNY
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damn ma.. that poema brought bakk alot of memories.. mah vato is on lock down right now.. waitin for him to get because of everythang in that poem!! that shit was soooo true!! madd propz!!
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am i neva knew that hyna meant piece of ass. im lost
some guys don't know that either.
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nice drop chica. keep it up. i like the chola's vato idea.
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am i neva knew that hyna meant piece of ass. im lost
yea but is that what they mean when they say it?
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