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Old 12-13-2004
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this shyt is just a test ta see if i can write a sotry i mean i can write a poem in ten seconds flat so tell me how this goes ( this shyts a true story i just changed da names n shyt cuz yea pero jus tell me if i did a good job) always Queen Sad Eyez

Characters

Lil Traviesa AKA LT
Gigglez AKA G
Lady Joker AKA JL
Sir Joker AKA SJ
Chistosa AKA C
Group of Ese AKA Grupo
Ese Loco AKA EL
Ese Smokey AKA ES
Traviesa AKA Trave
Angel AKA A
Loco AKA L
Shorty AKA S
Maria AKA M
Sad Eyez AKA SE
Joker AKA JK
Smokey AKA SM
Lokito AKA LK
Lil One AKA LO
Tontito AKA TT
Opening

Lady joker Stasnding Over ESA Giggles
She fires and ESA Giggles takes her last breath

Fade to black

Fade in

It’s a month later and Lady jokers at her house sitting on her bed cleaning a guete
The celly rings she looks at the caller ID and answer

LJ: Aye Gigglez Q Pasa
G: nada pero aye u know where Chistosas at I need ta talk con ella bout sum tin
LJ: naw pero aye I gotta get ready cuz I gotta go meet mi baby
G: aye mija b careful sum tins funny en las calles des past few noches watch it mija
LJ: I promise alrato
G: Alrato

Cut to Chisotosa in her room

She dances around to the music and then she strts to think about Sir Joker

In his creased black dickes and the gold flag hanging out his back side how his abs make that lil v towards his pants line the way his balck hair hangs in his eyes n the way he looks just damn! She reaches for her cell phone

Cut to Sir Joker In His Room
Sir Dyno’s La Chola pounding in his chest
Ironing his creased dickes cuando his cell rings
He digs in his pocket and gets out da cell

SJ: q-pasa
C: aye baby u coming thru tonight?
SJ: aye puta get this st8 me n u r thru that shyt shoulda neva happened
C: aye puto u get it str8 u chose me forget dat puta Lady Joker she aint good enough para ti. Tu es para mi y mi solita!
SJ: puta thas enough Lady Jokers ma baby I been wit her till the end of time ill b wit her till we die don’t call me no mas.

He snaps he phone closed and as soon as he does it rings agin he checks the caller id n answer

SJ: aye baby come estas
LJ: bien bien y tu baby
SJ: mija im iorning my dickes ill be at ur house in 20
LJ: okay baby see you alrato
SJ: Alrato

Cue lady joker
Pulling her dickes over her hips and a tank top over her breasts she looks in the mirror she tucks her guete in her back and heads out the door. When she stands there a two young men see her walk out the house

EL: Aye vato you see that shorty she is DAMN wit dat long ass black hair and the swing of her hip the swell of her tit and the curve of her lips DAMN
ES: aye she gotta be 5’5 wit sum shyt they gotta be at least D’s and damn look at that ass
EL: damn vato you should go talk to her
ES: Maybe I will

Ese Smokey walks across the street to lady joker

ES: aye mija was your name im that vato they be calling ese smokey
LJ: Lady Joker
ES: So mija you wanna kick it wit me and ma homie?
LJ: looks away and nods down the street

Cue Sir Joker

Loud music can be heard coming up the main drive
Sir joker parks and gets out

SJ: aye ese what you doing talking ta ma old lady
ES: shyt ill talk ta who I want when I want you cant say shyt
SJ: puto you best back off come on Mija lets bounce
LJ: okay baby

They walk towards the car
Lady joker bends down to get in and her shirt rides up showing her guete and the tattooed black rose
ES (looks at her): Oh shyt?
EL: aye vato was wrong
ES: that hyna had a guete
EL: en serio?
ES: yea
EL: you think she a chula?
ES: yea was her name ese?
EL: Lady Joker
ES: shyt you think das dat bitch Lady Joker that killed you baby sis?
EL: Fucker don’t even joke it cant be shes just to damn fine ta be a killa
ES: aye ese did she have a black rose tambien?
EL: yea so?
ES: She killed mija I memba seeing that damn tat

Cue to the car

SJ: Mija what were they asking you bout?
LJ: nada mijo dey was just trying to spit game asking me ma name
SJ: you tell em
LJ: yea
SJ: wats his name mija?
LJ: Ese Smokey
SJ: mija listen here we gonna go get ur shyt and your moving in wit me?
LJ: mijo was wrong
SJ: mija dat puto is Ese Giggles big brother and no doubt that vato he was wit was her old man
LJ: u mean dat puta giggles I dealt wit last month?
SJ: yea mija
LJ: okay baby ill move in wit you

Cue to the street

EL: aye spooky we gotta deal wit her she took ma hyna and your baby sister tambien
We cant let her get away wit dat shyt
ES: aye man I know dat but shes damn
EL: fuck it Smokey shes gonna die
ES: call up the crew
EL: ok

Cue to Smokeys house

ES: we gotta deal wit dis puta
Grupo: con who?
ES: da bitch dat killed Giggles
Grupo: where she at ill call da hynas and she will be gone tonight
ES: call me we know where she lives but shes out wit her vato that fucker Sir Joker
Grupo: Sir Joker?
ES: yea him
EL: I know weve had shyt wit him before but aye she killed one of ours
ES: and now we gonna kill her
Grupo: pero aye ese her vato be ryding hard you think it’s a good idea
EL: you punking out on me?
Grupo: naw naw naw

Cue to Lady Joker

Her celly rings

SJ: yea reina?
G: shyt homita watch you back tonight da calles are talking
SJ: whats going down?
G: the eses know wh you are and where you live?
LJ: yea we know im moving in wit Sir Joker tonight
G: Ok
LJ: will you go by ma place n get ma shyt?
G: no problemo
LJ: alrato
G: Alrato


Cue Chistosa
Her cell rings


C: hello
T: Prima?
C: yea its me Trav Wassup
T: do you know where dat Puta Lady Jokers At Ta Night?
C: maybe why? You got sum tin against da puta?
T: she killed da homie las month
C: Damn wassup?
T: u got sumtin against her tambien aue no?
C: yea I want Sir Joker but he wont Leave the bitch
T: gimme her addy we gonna deal tonight
C:5145 N Hennesy Ave
T: Bien Alrato
C: Alrato

Chistosa closes her cell and it rings again

C: Yo?
G: aye puta whats this I hear bout u n Sir Joker?
C: bitch its nun ya bzness so back off
G: u know das Lady Jokers Man y u gotta fuck that up?
C: I aint gonna do shyt I aint gotta

Chistosa hangs up on giggles

Cue giggles driving down the calle
Arriving at Lady Jokers House

She walks up the drive and opens the door and goes inside and goes down the hall way and calls Lady Joker

G: homita what all you need? I in your room right now
LJ: get me all the shyt outta ma top 3 dresser drawers their a laundry bag in da closet on da left side haing up

Giggles throws everything in the bag not bothering to fold it or anything

G: im in the bath room what do you need from in here?
LJ: get me the blk make up kit and the caja frm under the counter
G: got it
LJ: n get the pic of me n Sir Joker at prom of da living room wall I need that bad
G: got it homita be there in a while

Giggles walks out the house and hears a noise
She runs for her car and leaves as quick as she can

She calls sir Joker

SJ: yea?
G: aye Joker its me Giggles
SJ: yea shorty whats going down u got mijas shyt/
G: yea I got it pero I think sum one seen me
SJ: don’t come to my place
G: I wasn’t gonna
SJ: ill send some one for her shyt
G: ok that’s what I was thinking
SJ: angel woill be there in 20
G: angel?
SJ: yea hes da homie from back east
G: u trust da vato?
SJ: con mi vida
G: ok send him ta da laundry mat and bring sum clothes we will ill add her shyt ta his so nobody will notice.
SJ: you got it

Sir Joker and Angel On The Phone

SJ: aye homie u need ta go to the laundry mat on 5th ave n pick up ma ladies shyt
A: no problem homie
SJ: look for a hyna called giggles
A: what she look like?
SJ: no doubt she gonna b in a short ass blk jeans skirt n homie shes fine she gonna b rocking a red tube top n su black strp heels she got giggles tatted onda top of her left tit u can see it ova her top no doubt
A: you sure she gonna be there?
SJ: don’t trip shed die for Lady Joker
A: so she lookin firme?
SJ: u know it n aye homes she single
A: das firme well im headed towards there now
SJ: alrato
A: alrato

Angel walks in the room heads turn
He looks just like his homie Sir Joker the blk hair drk eyes and that build like damn
He sees giggles sitting in da corner

A: giggles?
She pops her head up hella quick
G: angel?
A: yea u got dat shyt?
G: yea no doubt she strt to throw stuff in his bags
A: mija u looking good
G: mijo u look firme tambien pero today aint da day ta spit game
A: sorry
G; no problem da me sus mano
(angel gives her his hand)
G: call me sum time (drawas GIGGLES 1-773-360-1418 on his hand)

she grabs a bag of extra shyt and heads out the door
he just stares at his hand and heads back towards his car

A: yo?
SJ: yea u got it?
A: u know it im headed over now
SJ: ok ill be waiting
A: so do I get to meet this lady whos got da homie trippin?
SJ: yea shorty will be with me
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A: cuz damn homie u trippin ova her I neva seen u trip like that b4
SJ: shyt has changed homes in da 5 yrs you been gone
A: I know homes pero why you trippin ova da hyna?
SJ: dis shorty aint like no other she been down for me since da first time she seen me she aint left ma side when I was in da pinta she wrote me every day and came to see me every week she stayed in school and did her best.
A: damn u got a straight soilder on your leash
SJ: she aint on da leash homes I am
A: damn she dat good in da cama?
SJ: she don’t even do dat
A: damn its like that?
SJ: yea pero aye homie I gotta get going I gotta go get sum shyt
A: ok homie see ya in a few
SJ: just knock shorty will let u in
A: orale bien
SJ: Alrato
A: Pues

Cut to Chistosa and Gigglez en la parque
Gigglez throws a bottle at chistosa but she ducks and charges

C: puta stay outta this
G: get of Jokers Dick
C: he put me there
G: he was drunk they had a fight
C: so
G: let them be puta
C: he is mine
Giggles throws a punch and knocks her out
G: he is Lady Jokers vato PUTA!

Gigglez walks off
Chistosa wakes up and reaches for her cell

C: Trav?
T: yea prima?
C: get that bitch
T: no doubt u get at me if u find her she wasn’t at the house
C: was her shyt still there?
T: naw her clothes n shyt was gone
C: she knows yall after her
T: you know where shes at prima?
C: yea pero ill tell you when im sure
T: good
C: Pues
T: Alrato

Lady Joker laying on the couch watching Looney Toons
She giggles quitley to her self sir joker comes out in his boxers n lays down next to her kissing her neck and then her lips when the bell rings

He jumps up and crouchs beside the door
And looks out da lil window
He sees angel

SJ: mija get the door while I go get dressed
LJ: ok mijo

Lady Joker walks to the door

LJ: who is it?
A: its me Angel
LJ: u Jokers homie?
A: yea

Lady Joker Opens the door and lets him in
It had been raining and he was soaked
She closes n locks the door

LJ: angel wait right here ill be right back gonna go get a towel
A: ok thanx

Angel looks at the floor and shrugs of his jacket
Sir Joker comes round the corner in dickes and no shirt

SJ: was up homes
Sir Joker shakes his hand n pulls him close giving him a tap on his back and they thump their chest
A: nada shyt wet as fuck
SJ: lemme go get ya a towel
A: nada homes your shorty went to go get one
SJ: so what u think homes
A: shorty fimre and she look like she down
SJ: she is
Sir joker notices giggles tag on his hand
Angel moves his hand outta view

SJ: ha giggles got you on lock already
A: naw its just a numba fool
SJ:homes don’t play u know you like what you seen
A: yea so
SJ: and trust me she just as down as ma shorty
A: en serio?
Si: you

Cue lady joker
She walks in with the towel

LJ: you boys playing nice?
SJ: yea mija
Angel nods his head
LJ: you a quite one huh
SJ: lemme introduce yall asses right then mija u aint gonna b able to get hi ta shut his mouth
LJ: (giggles) ok?
SJ: Mija Dis da homie Angel. Angel dis ma baby Lady Joker
LJ: nice to meet u
A: nice to meet u
SJ: damn homes u shy or what?
A: yea
LJ: shyt don’t be I only bite sir joker
Sir Joker bluhes
SJ: Mija!
A: (laughs) shorty got u on check
Sir joker moves around n gets Lady joker infront and warps his arms round her
A: yall look cute together
Lady Joker Blushes
Angel laughs quitley

LJ: shyt where are my manners?
SJ: huh?
LJ: angel u wanna sit down or sum tin ta drink
A: ill just sit n maybe sum water?
LJ: no problem she clears off the couch she was laying on and tells him he can sit there
Sir Joker sits down on the love seat
SJ: mija can u get me sum OJ ut da fridge tambien
LJ: No problem mijo
Lady jo,ker goes to the kitchen and comes back with the juice and water
LJ; here ya go angel n here ya go mijo
A: thanx
SJ: thanx mija
Lady joker sits down on the floor
SJ: mija get ur nalagas up here
Lady Joker looks up at him and laughs and gets up and sits down next to him
Sir Joker Pulls Her Close

Cut to Chistosa en la parquet

She dials a number in her cell and lets it ring

Cut Back To Angel Lady and Sir Joker In Sir Jokers House
Sir Jokers cell phone rings
Without thinking Sir Joker asks Lady Joker to go get it
SJ: mija can u get ma cell
LJ: okay baby

Lady Joker gets up and goes to his room and gets his cell
She opens it to see who it is it reads “Private”

LJ: hello?
C: aye mijo I love you plz leave that bitch so it can be just me and you I been thinking bout that night 3 weeks ago plz mijo leave her I love you I keep thinking bout they way u looked when u were on top of me

Lady joker snaps the phone closed
And walks into the living room in tears

Sir Joker runs up to her mija whats wrong
She slaps him in the face you

LJ: lying cheating little bitch

She starts to swing and he tries to hold her back
Angel jumps up and picks her up round her waist and holds her against a wall
Shorty calmate
She pushes him and he stumbles back
She reaches for her guete
Sir joker stands infront the barrel and looks her in the eyes
SJ: mija I fucked up we were in a fight I deserve to die for hurting you pull the trigger mija end ma misery
Angel sits on the floor looking at them wondering if she will pull the trigger
She drops her hand and slides down with her back to the wallshe crpuches by the wall and cries
SJ: mija I never meant to hurt you
LJ: get the fuck away from me joker
SJ: mija I love you
LJ: if you did then y did u fuck that bitch huh? Mad cuz I don’t wanna fuck
SJ: no mija I was drunk and high im sorry mija I love you
LD: then who is the bitch Joker was her name im gonna deal wit her just like I dealt wit ESA giggles
SJ: mija don’t make me tell you
LJ: Joker now tell me prove your love if you don’t tell me then youd rather be with her
SJ: mija don’t say that
LJ: then tell me and I want the truth no more lies
SJ: mija it was….. Chistosa
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Thiz is a good story mija yea you can write stories so keep goinn con esta cuz i wanna read the rest you left me in suspense hurry up y ya finish it forealz!
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awww...damn i love love stories...de cholos...girl ur a really good writer keep on writing...and hurry up with the story...lolz..iight well alratoz
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Default Lady Jokers Last Stand Continued

LJ: that puta when how why?
SJ: mija it was all a mistake me and you was fighting and……

Fade back to a memory
Lady joker and sir joker fighting in the car

LJ: you are one sad excuse for a vato I don’t know why I ever fell in love with a puto like you
SJ: mija!
LJ: its over you puto
SJ: no mija please no we can work this out
LJ: no we cant mijo

Lady joker gets out the car and slams the door and runs to her front door

She sits down on her couch and cries and starts to sing

LJ : mijo I love you with all my heart and never once has it failed to love you every minute of every day I love you but you can never lover a killer mijo I took her life even though it was to save yours oh mijo I love you with all my heart and ill never stop but you cant just love a killer I cant let you love a killer!

Sir Joker sitting in his car tears streaming down his face he pulls down his sun visor and looks at the pictures him and Lady joker huggin and kissing smiling on their 4th year aniversiry

SJ: Mija we can do this I love you and I always will if I could take all of your paini would im so sorry that you have to go through this but you don’t have to go through it alone

He put the car in gear wipes his tears and pulls out her drive way

Lady joker watches his car pull away and she tries to call to him but she dosent make a sound

Sir joker cruises down the calle his left hand on the streering wheel watching theroad but staring at her name tatted on his wrist when his celly rings

SJ: yea whos this?
L: aye its me loco wanna come through a party tonight?
SJ: sure I guess you gonna have Drink?
L: yea aye joker why u drinking was wrong?
SJ: nada don’t worry bout it just have me a bottle ok
L: no problem be here at 10
SJ: what time is it now?
L: 9:30
SJ: ok ill drop by my house take a shower n ill be on my way

Fade to the party

Sir joker walks in his eyes darker then ever with hidden pain

L: aye homes you made it aye where Lady?
SJ: I don’t wanna talk about it
L: well homes heres your bottle

Loco thumps his chest twice n thrown s a sign Sir Joker replies with the same and takes the bottle and goes to the darkest corner of the room the music thudding in his chest as he start to chug on the bottle

Cue the door

Chistosa walks in in blk leather thigh high boots a mini skirt and a blk leather tube top

Vatos heads turns but she scopes out the one that she wants she sees him in a lonely corner

Sir joker looks up and sees thighs encased in black leather and puts his head up the liquor affexting his brain made him think it was Lady joker

SJ: mija I missed you im so sorry forgive me?
C: mijo its ok

Chistosa hands him her hand and he takes it she takes him to a back room and starts to kiss him and undress him

SJ: mija no you said not till you graduated
C: I changed my mind mijo
SJ: ok
Sir joer starts to undress her and lays her on the bed

Fade to black
Fade in sunlight on the bed

Sir joker wakes up and rolls over to give who he thinks is lady joker a hug n a kiss n say he loves her and he sees chistosa beside him instead

He lets out a cry that wakes her
She tries to kiss him but he pushes her off and pulls his pants and and runs for the door

He get in his car and starts to beat the streering wheel

Cut back to Lady joker in his house listening to his story

LJ: I don’t know if I can ever trust you again
SJ: mija I swear I thought it was you
LJ: I know but mijo you should have told me
SJ: I know mija im sorry
LJ: I love you mijo but I need some time

He tries to give her a hug and She pushes hi away

LJ: aye angel toss me my cell I got shyt ta do
A: you sure?
LJ: just give me the phone this bitch gonna die
She takes her car keys and walks out the living room and makes a call

Giggles in her bed when the phone rings

G: homita que pasa?
LJ: wheres that bitch Chistosa?
G: mija what are you gonna do
LJ: the bitch is gonna die
G: shes some where in 15th ave
LJ: thanx
G: be safe!
LJ: always keeping it trucha
G: amor!
LJ: amor!

Lady joker walks back in the main room

LJ: mijo im going out I got bzness to handle
SJ: Im coming with you
LJ: stay here
SJ: No!
LJ: yes! And im not fucking playing its your fault we are in this shyt

Lady joker walks out the door

Cue chistosa
Her cell rings the id reads private

C: yea?
LJ: bitch meet me at the parque at dusk hours
C: whos is this
LJ: don’t worry just be ready to die

Lady joker hangs up

Chistosa dials a number

C: aye trav?
T: yea prima was poppin
C: the bitch wants ta meet me in da park at dusk you down ta ride?
T: we will be there

Cue to giggles in a restraint her back to Traviesa whos on her cell

T: aye you guys ready to ride and dusk Lady Jokers gonna meet Giggles there at dusk to fight…………….. yea bring every thing we got…………….nobody is gonna find this bitch ever

Giggles heads for the door and gets in her car and dials sir joker

G: aye Joker
SJ: yea whos this?
G; its me giggles
SJ: whats up?
G: wheres Lady at?
SJ: I don’t know she bounced she knows
G: Chistosas in on da shyt shes gonna give Lady up to da Rats
SJ: fuck!
G:They gonna be at the park at dusk
SJ:…….. ok
G: im gonna get the crew together
We gonna ride now and take care of as many as we can before it goes down
SJ: keep it trucha!
G: I will
They hang up

Angel walks in the room and hears part of the Conv

A: wassup vato?
SJ: they gonna ride on Lady Tonight
A: whats we gonna do
SJ: we gonna ride tonight you down?
A: always
SJ: lets go! Get the guetes out the locked room at da end of da halway
A: wheres da key?
SJ: don’t know break it we aint got time to look
A: ok

Angel busts the door and gets 4 loaded duffle bags and 2 boxes of ammunition
A (taking to his self): damn this fool rides hard
SJ: throw it in the trunk
Ak

Cue to giggles
She pulls up out side of a homies house
She looks down da calle and sees all da homies more than 50 she pulls a 38 and lets off 5 rounds and you hear cars start she gets out and yells loud enough so they can all hear her

G: they gonna ride on our queen tonight we ride first they all gonna die!

Every one in the black Hondas

G:take down every scrap bitch from Traviesas group that you see
Giggles gets back in her car and takes off

An hour later you hear gun shots on every block and sirnes begin to wail but with in 45 mins its all stopped the cops know a war is brewing and to stay away or else they too will die

Giggles makes a call

G: joker?
SJ: yea
G: its begun
SJ: ok
G: my place 20 mins
SJ: bien

Giggles meets up with sir joker at her place

G: Its 30 mins till dusk I bet they figured we ryding by now
SJ: no doubt
G: lets call da crew n see how many are down there are 6 cars riding ill call loca and tiny you call Junior and Death and angel call Loco and Smoke

Cut to 10 ,mins later

G: loco and tiny each got 1
SJ: Juniors crew got 3 and Deaths got 4
A; Locos got 1 and smokes got 2
G: ok that means total we took out 11 outta 20
SJ: they got 9 left you think the still gonna ride?
G: no doubt rats are dumb
SJ: you been able to reach mija on her cell yet?
G: shes not answering
SJ: well im heading to the park now have every one do the same
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APURALE mija i gotta know whats bout to happen left me in suspence again damnz hurry up and write the rest thins story gettin better!
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Cut to lady joker in her car rosary in hand

LJ: odios mio please give me thyn strength to defeat thouse who oppose me whom threaten my growing familia thouse that wish to stand in the path of my love

Lady joker looks at her cell 45 missed calls
All from joker and giggles
10 new voice mails

she checks her voice mails deleting most then she hears one in Jokers voice fear filled and voice shaking she stops and listens to it

SJ: mija ill die without you chisotas ryding with the rats and they gonna kill you I cant lose you this way ride with us and lets show them we are not to be fucked with mija I love you and I wish I had never hurt you
LJ: a tear in her eyes dials his number

Sir jokers cell goes off reading Lady jokers number

SJ: MIJA!
LJ: mijo I love you!
SJ: mija I love you too please don’t do this alone the crew is ready to ride ready to die
LJ: ok meet me at the park now im in the bushes under the willow
SJ: mija stay there please
LJ: I will I put it on my love for you!
She hangs up and sits in the bushes and kisses the rosary about her neck

Sir joker in the car with Angel

A: was that her?
SJ: yea we have to meet her some where call the crew I want them on foot in full gear
A: ok im on it

Angel starts making call after call giving the kings orders

Sir joker calls giggles

SJ: giggles I know where shes at
G: ok we are here we got your orders and we are ready to do this
SJ: do you still got her gear?
G: yea
SJ: im gonna cruise by throw it ta me n ill go to her I want her geared befor she walks outta my eye sight
G: ok
SJ: shorty?
G: yea was up Joker?
SJ: I cant lose her
G: I know you cant
SJ: without her ill die every breath I take is for her
G: you wont lose her I promise

They hang up

Travaviesa on the cell

T: What When?
S: just not
T: them putos know whats going down don’t they
S: I think so
T: how many are gone?
L: 11
T: 11 fuck they took half of us out
L: they rode first are we gonna lose?
T: NO
L: do you want us to stand down
T: NO
L: its suicide
T: you agreed till death! And we will ride tonight and she will die!
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Why you stop so soon damnz i need to know what happens mija write the rest come on dont be mean to us plz hehe!
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yall this shyt is based on truth i just changed names and shyt other dan dat da shyt went down
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Cut back to giggles and sir joker in the car

G: aye joker have you called Sad Eyes?
SJ: naw I don’t have her number why
G: you know shed want to be a part of this
SJ: I barley know da hyna
G: lady saved her life and shed give hers if she had too
SJ: no lie?
G: no lie I may be hella close ta lady but sad eyes makes me look like a enemy
SJ: like that?
G: yea heres her number
SJ: wait let me get my cell
Sir joker times in sad eyez
SJ: ok ready
G: 773-427-1418
SJ: got it
G: call her now
SJ: ok calmate its not dat serious
G: yes it is
SJ: what you mean?

Cue the rear view mirror and a midnight blu impala riding close to their bumper
Angel notices her looking and he looks back

A: oh shyt we got company
G: I know they been back their for da past 15 mins
A: joker call lady tell her ta call chica or what ever in the hell her name is and make this shyt for midnight
SJ: no doubt
Sir joker dails lady

SJ: Mija?
LJ: yea mijo wassup you still on your way?
SJ: yea mija but we need more time call her and tell her midnight so there will be no witnesses and get the fuck out da park
LJ: ok mijo
SJ: mija?
LJ: yea?
SJ: I love you and I don’t know what ill do if I lose you
LJ: I love you mijo and I feel the same way

Giggles steps hard on the breaks crashing into the car she leans back in her seat angel knows whats going down and he ducks she starts to fire out the back window hitting 3 of the people in the car

Cut to the car

T: oh fuck da bitchs got a guete
Maria slams on the gas hoping to knock her over before she can fire
Traviesa returns fire
S(scrams out in pain): the bitch shot me
M: mija its gonna b ok hang…..
A bullet enters the left side of marias head and blood splatters the right side of traviesas face the car swerves outta control and goes into a ditch
T: Shorty can u walk
M: yea hold up help me up
T: damn shorty you cant walk don’t move

Traviesa sees the blood gucking from shortys chest and sees it spraying her arm as she talks to her

S: am I gonna die?
T: name maria you aint gonna die
Traviesa sits down beside her an smooths back her hair
S: traviesa im gonna die aren’t I?
T: naw just lay down n relax
S: im getting sleep
T: its okay just go to sleep
S: im gonna b ok?
T: yea don’t worry
S: it don’t hurt no mas
T: see I told you now just go to sleep

Shorty puts her head on traviesas chest and closes her eyes takes her last breath and travies sheds a ear

T: THAT BITCH KILLECD MY SISTER SHES GOING TO DIE!

Cut back to the car

G: call sad eyes now
SJ: calmate
G: either y ou do it or no doubt lady wont be alive tomorrow
A: Gigglez!
SJ: wat the fuck you mean
G: listen here im down ta die for lady but let it be known they know what we are up to and more then one of us gonna die today and I know they gonna be looking for her for ever unless we deal with this tonight
SJ: and we can do that alone we don’t need nobody else
A: giggles what are you talking about?
G: this one they call sad eyes she makes Joker seem like a pussy
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SJ: what you mean a pussy have you seen the trunk latey?
G: how many straps u carry daily
SJ: 1 maybe
G: this bitch carries 4-6
A: Damn
G: yea and she will ride to death
SJ: wont you?
G: yea but I already know im gonna die today
A: what the fuck giggles don’t talk like that
SJ: mija your scaring us are you ok

Giggles pulls the car over
Nobody noticed her holding her side or how she winced when she moved
She takes her hand away

G: they hit me
A: no no giggles its gonna be okay joker get the wheel we gotta take her to the hospital
G: naw its to late
A: no no now
SJ: yea it is
A: what the fuck dis your home girl
SJ: look at the color de la sangre
A: no
SJ: yes shes been hit in the liver
A: no giggles I love you
G; you’ve only know me one day
A: I knew it the moment I seen you
G: me too
A: That bitch will die before sunrise

Giggles opened the car door and got out took two steps and fell angel was there to catch her
He helps her in the back seat and she lays down in is lap
She lifts her hand and they share their first and last kiss joker puts the car in gear

SJ: we will leave her at the hospital
A; no she rides with us her spirit will see the bitch die tonight!
SJ: ok but the blanket on her so gente think she is asleep
Angel covers her up and gets in the front seat
A: you gonna call this one they call sad eyes?
SJ: no
A: what u mean no
SJ: you are
A: me
SJ: yea I gotta drive
A; gimme your cell
SJ: here

Joker toses it at him

Angel dials the number

Cut to sad eyes asleep in her bed a laoded gun in her hand even as she sleep another beinhd her and one in her hand under the pillow the phone rings and she answeres gun still in hand

SE: who the fuck is this
A: this is Angel
SE: and who are you to me
A: your home gurls vatos homie
SE: what home gurl
A: the one they call Lady Joker
SE: ok and?
A: ppl afta here shyts gonna go down tonight
SE: I want to talk to giggles
A; you cant
SE: why not
A: shes dead
SE: what the fuck when?
A: 10 minutes ago
SE: who did it
A: the same ppl after Lady Joker
SE: let me talk to Sir Joker?

Angel puts the cell on speaker

SE: aye Sir Joker
SJ: yea
SE: you don’t remember me do you
SJ: no I don’t hyna
SE: think back ta the times of Tigresa and Traviesa
SJ: yea traviesa died and tigresa disappeared
SE: what did you think of Tigresa
SJ: She was One Down As Shorty I Remember She Always Kicked It Wit Ma Lady to bad she died
SE: naw she didn’t she just moved away and chaged a lil
SJ: of shyt Tigresa
SE: in the flesh wheres this gonna go down
SJ: south hood park
SE: how many in yall crew?
SJ: Enough
SE: im gonna bring a few of mine n ma vato
SJ: your still wit dat fool?
SE: naw im wit a vato calld guess what
SJ: no don’t tell me another smokey
SE: Naw Joker
SJ: what?
SE: his name is Joker
SJ: damn we we ride at 12 can you make it here?
SE: no problem
SJ: ill call Lady n tell her
SE; naw I wanna I miss her you got her numba?
SJ: same numba
SE: ok ill call her up you got me a ride?
SJ: no bout umake it here ill get u a car
SE: where u want me too meet you
SJ: ill leave da car at 5145 N henessy ave
SE: no doubt

Cut to Lady Joker asleep in a car in a old tunnel
Cell phone rings

LJ: yea?
SE: aye homita miss me?
LJ: whos this
SE: think back way back
LJ: oh shyt sad eyes
SE: you know it
LJ: we all through you were dead
SE: naw I just moved away
LJ: y ou coming home?
SE: im coming home cuz I heard you got in some shyt
LJ: yea
SE: so midnight que no
LJ: yea
SE you wait till I call ns ay its clear
LJ: no I need to fight this bitch chistosa
SE: ill give ma men da order ta keep her safe n outta da way den you can deal wit her one on one but imt aklking out des rats now!
LJ: ok
SE: keep ur head up
LJ: I will

Cut to outside Lady jokers place 3 hours later
10:30 pm
a jet black impala rolls up with gold rims and out comes 5 dude and one hyna
all the meen dressed in black creased slacks and gold shirts look like straight soilders and the hyna gets out first in tight flares that hug her ass and every curve a black tank top that clings to her skin like wet paper her hair blk and gold hangs to her ass when she turns they see her eyes dark as night

from across the street the eses watch


EL: ese whos dat?
ES: I dunno
EL: wait no of fuck no
ES: what ese?
EL: I think das Tigresa and her crew
ES: dey aint shyt ders only 6 of em
EL: naw ese you aint from here dis aint good

They drive off

EL: call da crew on speaker
ES: calmate
EL: naw wait listen
ES: ok
Ese smokey calls the crew
EL ask dem bout Tigresa

Grupo: aye was happening
ES: whos Tigresa
Grupo: a bitch ya need ta watch she don’t trust nobody you cant get behind her and she don’t care iof she dies
ES: en serio
Grupo: yea even junior runs from her
ES: junior?
Grupo: yea why
EL: shes in town
Grupo: fuck no I though she was dead
EL: guess not
Grupo: were are fucked
EL and yea shes ryding wit her crew
Grupo: we are fucked
EL: call trav n her crew n tell dem
Grupo: its just trav
EL: what you mean?
Grupo: maria n shorty are dead Lady Jokers home gurl giggles killed them 4 hours ago
EL: fuck
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Cut to lady jokers house

Sad Eyes walks into lady jokers house and tells her men to sit and wait up for a few
Joker Smokey Lokito Lil One and tontito all sat down and waited sad eyes walked to the room at the end of the hall she tried the knob

SE: still locked like I left it
Sad eyes pulled a key from beneath her tank top and unlocked the door she stepped in she closed the door behind her and gets a duffle bag from under the bed

SE: MIJO!

Joker comes running

JK: que v-ole mija?
SE: take this and yall get dressed in the main room tonight we ride
JK: whats wrong with what we are wearing
SE: do as I say!
JK: I asked you a question sad eyes
SE: and im your leader right now not your lady do as I say!

Joker hangs his head and walks out the room
He tosses the duffle bag in the main room we are supposed to get dressed
They pull out 5 amored vests they all put them on and put their shirts back on

Sad eyes closes the door and lights the candles she drops to her knees and prays

SE: oh dios mio give me the strength to save my friend and the strength to stand beside her against all odds

she kisses the rosary about her neck and turns around on her knees pulling 2 black metal cases from underneath the bed she picks them up and lays the on the bed she takes the same key from her neck and unlocks the boxes before her are 4 fully loaed shiny custom gold plated 9 mm. Glocks she peals off her tank top revealing a black silk bra and and 3 dark scars on her chest she changed it for a gols silk top and she puts on a holster around her arms and hangs one off her hip and loads up putting extra clip in her pockets on her hip holster she ties her hair in a high pony tail and re lines her eyes in a midnight black and walks out the room

JK: mija you look different
SE: because you’ve never seen me ride before
JK: yes I have
SE: no you haven’t you have seen me cruise this time its serious
JK: guys have you seen this before
SM: yea not in a long time
LK: not since green eyes
LO: not since before it happened
TT: not since she left this place
JK: theres a lot I don’t know isn’t there
SE: yea there is but this isn’t the time
JK: mija wheres your vest?
LK: she dosent wear one ever
JK: mija this aint funny go get yours
LK: I told you she dosent wear one your new to this back off it she makes sure we live but if she dies she doesn’t give a fuck
JK: mija is this true
SE: yea it is
JK: why
SE:…………………
JK: mija?
LK: she wont talk about it she hasn’t talked about it in years
JK: years?
LK: years

Cut to the car
Everyone climbs in to a blk Honda wit gold rims and gold neon sad eyes is the last one in

Cut to sad eyes on the phone as night falls

SE: Sir joker we are ready
SJ: how many ryde with you?
SE: five
SJ: ok 24 ride with us
SE: okay I want us all too meet I want them to see who they are taking orders from
SJ: what you mean
SE: im in charge
SJ: no I am
SE: no offence joker but war was never your thing
SJ: puta!
SE: you promised never to use that word against me again do you really want to to get you again
SJ: sorry its just this is my lady
SE: you know id die for her
SJ: true
SE: meet me at your old place wit da crew
SJ: ok
They hang up

Cut to angel and Sir joker on the phone

SJ: we all need to meet at ma old place…………………..naw some one is in from outta town……………..youll see when you get there……………….. they r gonna be in charge from now on………………… I trust them with my life

He hangs up

The 7 cars pull up to find the blk and gold Honda already there the five vatos step out and stand along side the car looking down on the rest
Then the driver side door open and the vatos take a breath and u can hear damn…. Sad eyes gets up and looks at her men

SE: what the fuck yall this is our familia we aint better then them take that look off yall faces before I do!

SJ: damn gurl u still as hard as eva
SE: yea I am
SJ: well this is the crew
SE: ok

She steps outta the way and looks at them
Her guns glinting in the plae light of the rising moon

SE: listen up many of you don’t know who the fuck I am as sad eyes but close your eyes and think back to bout 2 years ago memba dat hyna dey called tigresa?

Everyone: yea why?
SE: the bitch is back in town!
Everyone: tigresa?
SE; yea its me boys don’t you memba these nines?
Everyone: oh shyt it is her
SE; now this aint the time ta reminisce we got work ta do now this is ma crew my man Joker n da homies yall thought we dead tambien Smokey Lokito Lil One and Tontito
Everyone: oh shyt the crew
SE: I want every one in 3 cars or less that means 9 in a car I don’t want them to think we are as deep as we are my crew is riding solita we got sum thing to do now listen here I want that bitch chistosa caught and held the one who harms her or kills her answers to me!
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Damn girl hurry it up and put the rest damnz i need to know what da hell gonna happen shitz. Plz me good with ur tus carnalas adn write the rest serio. Damnz this is getting good alratoz....
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homita this story is good but sad kinda reminds me of sumethin that went down wit one muh homegurlz forrealz hurry up -n- finish
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man i just thought id put this down n let it be known this shyt is true in the most part after im finished with this part ill go abhck and tell the sotry from the start
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Sad eyes hangs up the phone and gets out of the car
She walks a little ways into the clearing and stand up the moonlight glaring down on her she looks to the skies Reina Traviesa I might come home tonight wait for me at the gates

Traviesa comes running at her from the edge of the clearing

T: who the fuck are you puta this is our fight
SE: im Sad Eyes and whom the fuck are you
T: im Traviesa
SE: I remember you
T: I don’t know who the fuck you are
SE: its been a while so who you been fucking to get were you are today
T: bitch!
SE: exactly
T: who are you!
SE: im the bitch that gave you that scar
T: naw tigresa is long dead
SE: no she aint
T: since when
SE: since she came back to town with a new name
T: what ever
SE: now im gonna give you a sar to remember the new me
Traviesa gave her a dumb look but didn’t move fast enough
Sad eyes swung and her fist made contact with theleft side of her face traviesa fell to the floor her jaw broken hanging in her mouth at a weird angle bleeding bad sad eyes bent down and wiped the blood of her fist on traviesas shirt and kicked her before she walked away

Sad eyes went to the center of the clearing who else wants a a piece of TIGRESA!
Her crew started to chant TIGRESA TIGRESA
Someone fired a shot it missed her by inches she moved so quick you didn’t see her pull she pulled and fired hitting ese Loco in the head killing him and reholsterd before he hit the floor.

SE: the bitch is back and shes taking out everyone das on her list ya fucked wit ma sista now yall gonna die

She throws up a hand sign that orders her men to circle around and pull the eses into the clearing
Tontito see the order and starts to circle drawing closer as do the other 4 in the crew soon 15 eses appear and they begin to fire her men protected by their vest fire backshe fires 5 rounds into the air and the others in her crew comes out by then traviesa is a wake stumbling to her crew

SE: Traviesa?
T: huh
SE: say goodbye!

Sad eyes fires and hits her dead center in the chest she falls back and lays still sad eyes walks up and pops her in the head but first she says

SE: bitch you killed my sister so now you gotta die

Sad eyes kills traviesa

SE: Loca!

Loca comes running

LA: yea Tigresa?
SE: do you know what this one they call chistosa looks like?
LA: yea
SE who else knows what she looks like?
SJ: I do
Sir joker steps forward
SE: ok tontito split em up dos grupos
TT: ok
SE: Sir joker go wit da let Loca go to da right
Sad eyes walks wit sire joker

Every hyna dat he says isn’t chistosa she fires at and hit in the leg she does the same with locas group cept the last girl who is Chistosa

SE: so you are chistosa
C: yea who the fuck are you
SE: im tigresa
C: the bitch they talk bout the one they fear?
SE; no doubt
C: so your gonna kill me?
SE: no you aint gonna get hurt till later but none of us that stand here r gonna touch you
C: then who is
SE: youll see mijo get your ass ova here

Joker comes running

SE: get her ass in da car n lock her in da trunk ya hear
JK: yea
SE: go

Sad eyes dials Lady Joker

SE: still alive
LJ: yea
SE; you hear the fight
LJ: yea
SE: we are gonna clean up here then bring her through
LJ: ok
SE: where you at mija
LJ: the old tunnel
SE: ok
LJ: be safe

Sad eyes hangs up and fires one shot to get their attention

SE: I want to survivors this click is dead I want them all dead and buried tonight Sir joker and my men come with me we got bzness

They load into the car and drive down to the tunnel
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SE: Sir Joker Call Up Lady n Tell Her To Come To The Entrance
SJ: ok
SE: and tell her to be ready to fight
SJ: what you mean fight
SE: shes going head up wit chistosa
SJ: why
SE: why else would I spare her vida?
SJ: are you serious?
SE: yea tell her to tie her hair and have her jewelry ready to hand me
SJ: seriously
SE: either you do it or I will
SJ: ok fine ill call her

Cue Lady Joker Laying In her Car Listnign to her breathing

LJ: oh dios mio I am afraid something seems wrong I have all faith in sad eyes ablities but I fear in my own give me the strength to defeat chistosa and to continue on with mi vida

Her cell rings

LJ: yea?
SJ: mija you ready?
LJ: you’re here?
SJ: yea mija
LJ: where?
SJ: come to the entrance and tigresa says to tie up your hair and have your jewelry off and she will hold it till its ova
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