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Old 07-28-2009
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Default Macy's flow...

...cuz I wrote it behind the counter at Macy's today. Boring day, mall is dying, and business is ALWAYS slow....

Had this beat in my head the whole damn day too... so this verse is basically rapped to it. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LAUj1iPxlZo



Woke up early this mornin, got dressed, on my way to work this/
new money out the old hands of hustlas that done lost they purpose/
let their iDeals sell-out so guess I'm here to purchase/
the piece of the game they forgot, might as well call em merchants/
But I ain't on that discount-shit, I gotta pay that full-price/
that way when I arrive no hater can say I was rollin' cheap-dice/
All-in with mine, pull no punches, if I do it I'm riskin' everything/
Tryna match the chances I take'll leave em soul-searchin n scatterbrained/
see when u come from nothin the only thing they can touch is the family name/
But I carry that across my back like Nando's jersey in his Dodger days/
while he was throwin curve-balls mom and pop was pickin all the grains/
scorching field-days engrained in me the will to see my crew through the flames/


only got to 12 of 16... finish it soon.

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Default Re: Macy's flow...

now get back to work scrub u got sum shit to sell!

nah good drop tho, specially tha 5th bar
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Old 08-18-2009
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Default Re: Macy's flow...

preciate it...

I've written probably 2 more, the mall is super-dead and run-down in that area of Austin, which is why i always have time to kill... but the only thing is I can't seem to finish any of them... I'll get up to a good 10 bars and either get super bored or go blank. I'm sure they would be good if I could finish.


maybe i'll revisit this one
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Old 09-17-2009
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Macys Flow #2

Same beat.

People passin judgement off just one look at me/
Got blinders on like brown skin, brown eyes is all they wanna see/
Its takin hard years for me to get where I'm tryin to be/
these haters run they mouth but they knowin that they cant match my speed/
Keep runnin mayne/
words travel a mile-a-minute but thats the rate that I'm tryin to get this money mayne/
I'm on another plane/
not speakin 757, talkin bout another level on which you could never hang/
Tried to keep it trill but it seems like these suckas always caught up on another lame/
they try to call it rap but I swear these boys should try their hand in another game/
Before they do this one another shame/
and if its you listenin to the wack then on your shoulders is where I put the blame/
cuz how u gonna ignore what the whole world know/
lotta dudes rappin now but aint none really got the flow/
thats the reason my mind stay locked up in the studio/
perfectin my technique, tellin em im the truth but patiently waitin for my cue to show/
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Default Re: Macy's flow...

Macy's sucks for the most part. They have a whole bunch of nothing. Nordstrom is a step up.
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Macys Flow #2

Same beat.

People passin judgement off just one look at me/
Got blinders on like brown skin, brown eyes is all they wanna see/
Its takin hard years for me to get where I'm tryin to be/
these haters run they mouth but they knowin that they cant match my speed/
Keep runnin mayne/
words travel a mile-a-minute but thats the rate that I'm tryin to get this money mayne/
I'm on another plane/
not speakin 757, talkin bout another level on which you could never hang/
Tried to keep it trill but it seems like these suckas always caught up on another lame/
they try to call it rap but I swear these boys should try their hand in another game/
Before they do this one another shame/
and if its you listenin to the wack then on your shoulders is where I put the blame/
cuz how u gonna ignore what the whole world know/
lotta dudes rappin now but aint none really got the flow/
thats the reason my mind stay locked up in the studio/
perfectin my technique, tellin em im the truth but patiently waitin for my cue to show/
I was listening to the tune you posted and read the lyrics above. I liked how this sounded more better than the first one.
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