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Old 12-04-2006
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oh shit... i think its joker tring to play with paty... i hope he don't get wat he wants.........


well girl keep on writn
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oooo, hows the people at the end?

DUN DUN DUN...

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thats messed up if the guy is joker and paty gets hurt. anyways cant wai t for the rest.
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dam... watz gonna happen!!! keep posting this story is real good!!!!
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post more i wanna know wuts gonna happen.
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*Monday*

Paty work up and got ready for school.

Paty: LAZ!!!!

Laz: what?

Paty: ready?

Laz: yeah, letís go

*At School*

Paty and Laz get to school and went to sit at the table.

Laz: hey let me see your math

Paty took it out and handed it to him.

Paty: hey baby

Paty turned around and saw that it was Joker.

Joker: wow, I liked the sound of that

Paty: donít get used to it. What do you want?

Joker: I wanted to talk to you

Paty: Iíd rather not

Joker: come on Paty, I just want a minute

Paty: for what?

Joker: I want to explain the last night

Paty: why? Iím not your girl, what you do is your business

Paty was about to get up and walk away when Joker grabbed her hand.

Joker: Please Paty, just let me talk to you

Paty: fine

Paty turned to Laz.

Paty: if Memo comes, tell him Iíll be right back

Laz: aight

Paty walked away and followed Joker over to a near by tree.

Paty: okay, now what do you want to tell me?

Joker: look Paty, Iím sorry. I know it looked like I was playing you last night, but I wasnít. I didnít even know who that girl was.

Paty: well she seemed to know you

Joker: I didnít want her, she kissed me and I tried to push her away, but then you saw us.

Paty stayed quiet.

Joker: I never wanted to hurt you

Paty: what makes you think you did?

Joker: I could see it in your eyes

Paty stayed quiet

Joker: Iím sorry Paty, perdoname

Paty looked at him.

Paty: alright, I forgive you

Joker: yes

Joker picked her up and swung her around. When he put her back down, he pulled her close and leaned in to kiss her.

Paty: (backing away) Joker stop

Joker: why?

Paty: I have a boyfriend

Joker: (surprised) since when?

Paty: last night

Joker: oh, can I ask who it is?

Paty: Iím going out with Memo

Joker: (mad, but tried not to show it) oh thatís cool

Paty: we can still be friends though

Joker: yeahÖ.sure

Paty saw Memo sitting with Laz at the table.

Paty: Iím gonna go now

Joker: alright

Paty: see ya laterz

Joker: bye

Paty walked away and Joker just stood there.
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Awww Poor Joker
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i thought joker would be mad!! poor him!! write some more when u can!!
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ha pa ke sele kite a joker... thats what he gets for tring to hurt her........

keep on droing them lines...

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aww.. thatz sad
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dam somethins gonna go down w/joker n memo huh? that sux. hopefully memo dont play her but whats up w/ the guys on the phone? that got me confused. keep on postin girl
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wow, pobresitos...
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come on write more
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cant wait for more..
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post moreeeeeeeeeeee plz
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post more i wanna see wut happens next.
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*At the table*

Paty: hey babe

Memo: (kisses her) Hey, where were you?

Paty: Iíll tell you later

Memo: alright

*Bell rings*

Memo walks Paty to class.

*At Lunch*

Memo was waiting at Patyís locker when she got there.

Paty: hey (kisses him)

Memo: otro

Paty kisses Memo again

Memo: (smiling) so where we going for lunch?

Paty: I donít know, wherever

Memo: how abut Sabarro?

Paty: yeah, I want bread sticks

Memo: letís go then

*At Sabarro*

Memo and Paty were in a both eaeting.

Memo: so where were you this morning?

Paty: I was talking to Joker

Memo: (frowning) why?

Paty: he wanted to explain himself

Memo: what did he say?

Paty: it wasnít what I thought it was. That girl was all up on him.

Memo: oh

Paty: he apologized and I forgave him

Memo: oh

Paty: thenÖ

Memo: what?

Paty: I donít know if I should tell you

Memo: why?

Paty: cuz youíll never overreact

Memo: I wont, promise

Paty: he tried to kiss me

Memo could feel his anger rising inside him

Paty: I pushed him off before anything actually happened

Memo took a deep breath and started to relax

Paty: I told him that we were together

Memo: what did he say?

Paty: nothing really. He seemed kinda mad, but I think he was trying to hide it

Memo: heís probably pissed at him

Paty: why?

Memo: cuz he told me about that girl last night and what had happened

Paty: why didnít you tell me?

Memo: I was going to, but then we got into that moment and I didnít want to ruin it

Paty: itís okay, but why would he be pissed at you?

Memo: I kinda told him that I would help him out in getting at you

Paty: why?

Memo: I thought you liked him and I had already given up on ever being with you. ThenÖ

Paty: last night happened

Memo: and I was the happiest, luckiest vato ever

Paty: youíre so sweet

Memo: I love you

Paty: I love you too
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whats gonna happen to joker? well it seems like memo n paty really into one another. keep on postin!!
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awww thats cute memo iis sweet....pero stiill poor joker
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*Somewhere in Arizona*

*ring, ring, ring*

Voice: hello

Guy: sheís with some one

Voice: who?

Guy: Memo

Voice: get rid of him

Guy: aight

Voice: wait, major no

Guy: what are you thinking

Voice: payback is a bitch

Guy: so what should I do?

Voice: keep watch, Iíll be there soon

Guy: aight

*Click*

*Paty*

Paty and Memo went back to school and made it to class before the bell rang.

*Anatomy Class*

Paty sat down and got out her notebook

Voice: mind if I sit here?

Paty looked up and saw Joker

Paty: what are you doing here?

Joker: Iím new remember, Iím in this class now

Paty: oh, thatís cool

Joker sat down next to Paty.

Paty: whereís your stuff?

Joker: donít have any

Paty: youíre gonna need a notebook

Joker: what for?

Paty: it helps to take notes for this class

Joker: Iíll just steal yours

Paty: yeah sure

*After Class*

Joker and Paty walked out together. Memo was standing there waiting for Paty.

Paty: hey baby (gives him a kiss)

Memo: hey babe, hey Joker

Joker: (pissed) hey (so Paty) Iíll see ya

Paty: bye

Joker walked away

Memo: heís in your class now?

Paty: as of today

Memo: anything happen?

Paty: we just talked

Memo: about what?

Paty: class

Memo: ok

Paty: youíre funny, come on letís go

Memo: aight

Memo and Paty left the school and went back to her house.

*Patyís house*

Paty and Memo were making out in her bed.

*cell rings*

Paty: is that yours or mine?

Memo checks his phone

Memo: yours

Paty looked for her phone.

Paty: hello

Voice: where you at?

Paty: at home with Memo

Preciosa: did you forget bout practice?

Paty: oh damn, I did

Preciosa: get over here, sheís freaking out

Paty: aight, Iíll be right there

*Click*

Memo: whatís up?

Paty: I have practice

Memo: for what?

Paty: Liaís Quinceís

Memo: Skip it

Memo starts kissing her again.

Paty: I canít, sheís freaking out

Memo: Fine, Iíll take you

Paty: thank you

*Practice*

*Emilia aka Lia- 14 yrs. Old, about to be 15, long dark brown hair, light brown eyes*

Lia: where have you been?

Paty: Iím sorry

Lia: you canít be skipping practice with only two weeks left

Paty: Iím sorry, but Iím here now

Lia: well, we have a problem

Paty: what?

Lia: Adolfo quit

Paty: what? Why?

Lia: he got in a fight with Luisa and quit when they broke up

Paty: damn

Lia: so now you donít have a partner

Memo: Iíll do it

Lia: really?

Memo: yea

Lia: that would be so great. You can dance Salsa, Cumbia and Waltz right?

Memo: yeah no prob. I was in my sisterís and my cousinís quince

Lia: thank you so much. Letís get started, Paty you work with him and teach him, while we run through it once.

Lia walked away

Paty: thanks babe

Memo: itís cool

*A couple of weeks*

*Somewhere in Arizona*

Guy: hello

Voice: update

Guy: nothings changed

Voice: aight, Iíll be there in a couple of days

Guy: orale

*Click*
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who are the people on the phones?
is it joker?
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What Who Are Thoes People Talkin Gurl You Have To Hurry Ok I And Evryone Else Want To Know Who They Are
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I like it...pero what happen to tu amiga??????
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I like it...pero what happen to tu amiga??????
what amiga are you talking about?
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