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awww datz cute juz started readin i reallii liike iit keep postiin up more plz
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*Next Morning*

Paty woke up and went to her room. She opened the door and saw the Preciosa and Laz were still sleeping. She grabbed her camera and took a picture.

Paty: cute

She walked out into the hallway as Sergio came down the hall.

Sergio: whereís Laz? Heís not in his room.

Paty: heís in my room

Sergio: why?

Paty showed him the picture.

Sergio: bout time

Paty: I know, huh?

Sergio: you wanna have some fun?

Paty: what do you have in mind?

Sergio: water guns

Paty: youíre on

Sergio and Paty filled their water guns and went into Patyís room.

Paty: (yells) WAKE UP!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Laz and Preciosa jumped as Paty and Sergio sprayed them with cold water.

Preciosa: Paty, stop it

Paty: wake up

Laz: Weíre up, weíre up

Paty: (to Sergio) should we stop?

Sergio: I guess

Laz: you guys are wrong

Paty: no weíre not. We just wanted to say good morning

Preciosa: thanks

Paty: youíre welcome

Sergio: youíre welcome

Paty: alright, you guys get changed while I make breakfast

All: okay
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omg goodness!! im like loving this story!! write some more please!!!
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*After Breakfast*

Sergio went to work and Laz took Preciosa home. Paty stayed home and cleaned.

*Patyís cell rings*

Paty: hello

Voice: hey

Paty: who is this?

Voice: itís me, Joker

Paty: can I help you with something?

Joker: I want to talk to you

Paty: well I have nothing to say

Joker: I do

Paty: tell it to the girl who had her tongue down your throat

*Click*

*Cell rings*

Paty: leave me alone

Preciosa: damn, whatís up with you?

Paty: sorry girl, I thought you were someone else

Preciosa: who?

Paty: Joker

Preciosa: he called you?

Paty: yeah

Preciosa: what a dumb ass

Paty: I know, but anyway whatís up?

Preciosa: Laz and I wanted to know if you wanted to go to the park with us

Paty: naw, Iím good here

Preciosa: you sure?

Paty: yeah

Preciosa: aight, Iíll call you later

Paty: have fun

*Click*

Paty watched t.v. for awhile. She ended up falling asleep on the couch

*Doorbell rings*

Paty woke up and got the door

Paty: hey
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daum i just cought up... this story is getting good...
*gosh joker is a slut....*

well girl keep on writing down your lines...

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come on write some more. i just read the update. im dying to find out who it is.
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Who is it?!?!?!?!?!? Keep posting cuz it is getting real good!!
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oh my who is it?? i wanna know please write some more when u get da chance!
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Guy: (hugs her) hey, you home alone?

Paty: yeah come in

Guy: whereís Laz and Sergio?

Paty: Laz is with Preciosa and Sergio is at work

Paty went into the kitchen.

Paty: Guillermo, so you want something to drink?

Guillermo: yeah, Iíll have a pepsi

*Guillermo aka Memo- 18 yrs old, short black hair, dark brown eyes, tall dark, built.*

Paty walked back out and handed him the pepsi.

Paty: so what brings you by?

Memo: just thought Iíd see how you were doing

Paty: y ese milagro that youíre not with Pamela?

Memo: we broke up

Paty: why?

Memo: caught her with a homeboy

Paty: damn, Iím sorry

Memo: naw itís cool

Paty: how long were you guys together?

Memo: 7 months

Paty: wow, sheís messed up

Memo: yeah, but whatever

They sat and watched some movies. Laz and Preciosa came home around 6.

Laz: damn Memo, what you doing here?

Memo: hanging with your sis

Laz: whereís Pamela?

Memo: gone

Laz: finally, good riddance

Memo: yeah I know

Preciosa: letís do something, Iím bored

Laz: Iíll keep you busy

Preciosa: shut up

Paty: sheís right, letís go out or something

*Lazís cell rings*

Laz: hello?

*pause*

Laz: yeah aight

*pause*

Laz: laterz

*Click*

Laz: you guys want to go to a party?

Memo: Gerardoís

Laz: yeah

Paty: letís go

Preciosa: yeah

Laz: go get ready and weíll leave

Paty/Preciosa: ok

*An Hour Later*

The girls had changed and were ready.
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Oh damn girl, i didnt know u had another story up. sorriez!

and yea this story is comin out pretty good, keep it comin.
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come on it's getting good. write some more.
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VERY GOOD..you are a gifted writer.. keep it up
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*At The Party*

Laz and Preciosa were dancing. Paty was hanging out with Memo. She wasnít paying attention when Joker walked towards them.

Paty: letís dance

Memo: aight

Memo got up and pulled Paty up. When Paty turned around she found Joker standing in front of her.

Joker: Paty, can I talk to you?

Paty: no

Paty grabbed Memoís hand and walked away.

Memo: whatís up with you and Joker?

Paty: nothing

Memo: tell me

Paty: he was trying to get at me and I was starting to like him, but then I found him with some girl on his lap and her tongue down his throat.

Memo: what did she look like?

Paty: I only saw her from behind

Memo: oh

Paty: hey, thereís Lisa, Iím gonna go say hi

Memo: aight

Paty: Iíll be right back

Paty walked away and Joker walked towards Memo.

Joker: hey man

Memo: sup?

Joker: nothing

Memo: whatís up with you and Paty?

Joker: Iím really feeling her and I thought she was feeling me

Memo: who was the girl she saw you with?

Joker: I donít know. She just started to kiss me and I pushed her off

Memo: damn

Joker: I tried to explain, but she wont talk to me

Memo: I know

Joker: how do you know her?

Memo: sheís my homegirl, I grew up with her and her brothers

Joker: ayudame

Memo: Iíll try man, pero te advierto, hurt her and you live to say sorry

Joker: noted

Memo: aight, Iím gonna go find her

Memo walked away and found Paty talking to Shorty.

*Lisa aka Shorty- 16 yrs. Old, 4í9Ē, blonde brown hair, light green eyes, chubby, but still very pretty*

Memo: hey

Both: hey

Memo: Shorty, you mind if I borrow Paty for a dance?

Shorty: I guess so, but I better get one

Memo: promise

Memo grabbed her hand and took her out on the patio. A slow song came on and Memo held onto Paty.

Memo: Paty, be honest, do you like Joker?

Paty: I donít want to talk about him

Memo: Paty come on, tell me

Paty: I was starting to

Memo: you donít anymore?

Paty: I donít know, can we talk about something else

Memo: is it becuz of Chulo?

Paty: not what I wanted to talk about

Memo: mija, I know he hurt you. But no all guys are like him

Paty: I know that

Memo: soÖ

Paty: I justÖdonít know

The song ended and Memo was still holding her.

Paty: can we get out here?

Memo: sure

Memo and Paty walked out and left in Memoís truck.

*Patyís cell rings*

Paty: hello

Preciosa: where did you go?

Paty: I left with Memo, I donít want to be there

Preciosa: you okay?

Paty: yeah, I just needed a breather

Preciosa: okay, are you going home?

Paty: I donít know yet

Preciosa: well call me whenever you get home so Laz knows

Paty: ok

Preciosa: take care

Paty: you too.

*Click*

Memo: so where do you want to go?

Paty: anywhere

Memo: your wish is my command

Memo started up his truck and took off.
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awwwwwww, does memo like paty? seems like it. hoe cute!
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keep writin girl

this stroy is getting good...
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*Half hour later*

Paty: where are we?

Memo: anywhere

Paty got out of the truck and saw they were on a cliff. It overlooked the mountains and ravine. You could see the stars shining brightly in the dark sky.

Paty: Itís beautiful out here

Memo: I know, this is my favorite spot

Paty: is this where you come when youíre having a bad day?

Memo: yeah howíd you know?

Paty: Raquel told me, she would say how you would disappear after fights you had with her or your parents.

Memo: yeah, Iíd come up here to clear my head

Paty: I miss her

Memo: yeah, me too

They sat down at the edge of the cliff.

Paty: have you heard from her?

Memo: not since she left with him

Paty: I wonder what sheís doing

Memo: who knows? Sometimes I wonder if sheís still alive

Paty: thatís sad

Memo: I know, but you know how he was

Paty: yeah

*Silence*

Paty: itís getting cold out

Memo put his arm around her and held her close.

Memo: better

Paty: much better

Paty snuggled close to him and put her head on his shoulder. They sat there watching the stars for a while.

Memo: Paty?

Paty: mmmÖ

Memo: how come we never dated?

Paty looked up at him and stared into his eyes

Paty: you never asked

Memo looked at her for a moment

Memo: what if I asked you now?

Paty leaned forward and kissed him lightly. She pulled back a little and stared at him. Memo pulled her back and kissed her hard and passionate. When he finally pulled back they just stared into each otherís eyes.

Memo: will you be my lady?

Paty: yes

Memo kissed her again and just held her tight.
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yeah ... they together now... i wonder whats going to happen now when joker finds out....

well i hope nothing gets them separeted.............


keep on droping your lines girl..


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*An Hour Later*

Paty and Memo were still sitting on the cliff.

*Patyís cell rings*

Paty: hello

Laz: where you at?

Paty: Iím with Memo

Laz: oh let me talk to him

Paty: here itís Laz

Memo took her phone

Memo: hello

Laz: hey you guys coming home soon?

Memo: Idk, why?

Laz: Preciosa and I are bored. Weíre at the house with nothing to do

Memo: alright man, weíll be there soon.

Laz: awesome

*Click*

Paty: whatíd he say?

Memo: they want us to go back to the house

Paty: why?

Memo: hang out

Paty: arenít they still at the party?

Memo: no they left. Now theyíre bored at home

Paty: do we have to go?

Memo smiles and gives her a kiss.

Memo: we should

Paty: alright I guess

Memo stood up and pulled Paty up with him.

Memo: I love you

Paty: I love you too
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aww damn and he was supposed to be helping joker to get her. oh well still they both seem happy. post more please.
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awww how cute,.... but what about Joker? he's gonna be mad at Memo.... ooooo. lol keep the story goin girl!
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*Back at the house*

Preciosa: where are they?

Laz: they didnít say, but theyíre on their way back

Preciosa: alright, letís go get some movies and food

Laz: letís go

Laz and Preciosa left to Hollywood video 15 min later Memo and Paty got to the house.

Paty: Laz? Preciosa?

Memo: I didnít see Lazís car outside

Paty: I wonder where they went

Memo: call them

Paty got out her cell and called Preciosa.

Preciosa: hello

Paty: whereíd you go?

Preciosa: to get some food and a couple of movies

Paty: oh ok, well weíll be here when you come back

Preciosa: cool

*Click*

*Half Hour Later*

Paty and Memo were snuggled up on the couch watching t.v. when Laz and Preciosa walked in.

Paty: damn took you long enough

Laz: blame Lydia

Preciosa: donít blame me just cuz you didnít want to pick a movie

Memo: so what did you get?

Preciosa: Fast n Furious 3, Madeaís Family reunion, and Lake House.

Memo: chick flick

Paty: shut up

Memo: what itís true

Laz: donít even say anything man, cuz thatís how we got to fighting

Paty: did you get popcorn

Preciosa: what you think? Come on help me with this stuff.

Paty: alright

Paty got up and followed Preciosa into the kitchen

Preciosa: spill it

Paty: what?

Preciosa: donít play dumb

Paty: what?

Preciosa: whatís up with you and Memo. You two looked really cozy on that couch

Paty: (smiles)

Preciosa: tell me

Paty: he asked me out

Preciosa: serio?

Paty: yeah

Preciosa: aww..thatís cute

Paty: no sabes. He took me to this spot in the hills and it was so romantic

Preciosa: thatís really sweet

Paty: I know

Preciosa: so what about Joker?

Paty: what about him?

Preciosa: I thought you like him

Paty: I did, but he messed up

Preciosa: yeah I know. So when did this thing with Memo start? I thought you didnít like him like that

Paty: I never said I didnít. Heís always been there, I just thought he didnít see me as anything more then a friend

Preciosa: obviously not

Paty: I canít believe that he asked me though. I never expected it

Preciosa: well maybe now you can finally be happy

Paty: yeah, but Iím not so sure about that

Preciosa: why not?

Paty: itís this gang life you guys live. Iíve always worried about Sergio and Laz. Then you jumped in. Now I have to deal with the fact that my boyfriend could be shot down by some gang banger

Preciosa: I know what you mean

Paty: I just donít want to lose my mind every time I donít hear from him

Preciosa: Paty, have you ever thought about jumping in?

Paty: hell no, I donít want to mess up my future by getting caught up in that shit

Preciosa: no one said you had to give up your future. Look at Luisa sheís in the gang and sheís in college

Paty: I guess, I donít know

Preciosa: think about it. I think youíd make a great leader, but itís your decision

Paty: Iíll think about it

Laz and Memo walked in

Laz: we have to go

Paty: why?

Memo: somethingís went down at the party

Preciosa: what happened?

Laz: drive by

Preciosa: anyone hurt?

Memo: no, but we have to hit them back

Preciosa: do you need us?

Laz: no, but Iíll call if things get bad

Preciosa: aight

Laz kisses her.

Memo: weíll be back as soon as possible

Paty: (kisses him) cuidate

Memo: promise

Paty: you too Laz

Laz: you got it sis

Memo and Laz left.

Paty: I hope to god theyíll be ok

Preciosa: theyíll be fine. Come on letís watch Lake House while theyíre gone so they donít have to suffer

Paty: (smiles) but thatís all the fun of it

Preciosa: weíll give them a break. Just this once

Paty and Preciosa go back out into the living room and watch the movie.
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Pobresitas, id hate having to worry about my baby if he was in a gang... pues keep droppin those lines.
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that sux. girl keep writin its good. it aint right that memo didnt tell her bout what really happened con joker.
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*2 a.m.*

Memo and Laz came home and found Preciosa and Paty sleeping on the couch.

Laz: Iím gonna take Preciosa to my room

Memo: Iíll take Paty

Laz: you spending the night?

Memo: yeah

Laz: alright Iíll see you later

Laz picked Preciosa and took her into his room. Memo picked Paty up and carried her to her room. He undressed her and left her bra and panties on. He laid down next to her in only his boxers. He pulled the blanket over them and fell asleep holding her tight.

*8 a.m.*

Paty woke up and saw Memo lying next to her.

Paty: (thinking) Thank god

Paty kisses him softly, Memo wakes up and kisses her back.

Paty: good morning

Memo: great morning

Memo kisses her again and starts to go down to her neck. Then goes lower still and traces his tongue along her bra line. He trailed kisses down her stomach and back up.

Memo: I love you

Paty: I love you too

Paty kissed him as he ran his hand across her back and unhooked her bra. He threw off the bed and started to massage and stuck at her breasts, making Paty moan. He moved down and slowly took her panties off and threw them. He kissed her inner thighs and slowly moved in and started to eat her out. Paty was moaning and screaming his name. He continued to eat her out until she came like 3 times. He moved back up and kissed her as he slowly entered her. He went very slow and hard, paty was going crazy, he started to speed up until they both came.

Memo: (out of breath) I love you so much Patricia

Paty: (kisses him) I love you too Guillermo

*Memo and Paty always had this thing that when they were being serious they used each others full names. So saying that was a big deal.*

*Somewhere in Arizona*

*ring, ring, ring*

Voice: hello

Guy: itís me

Voice: what you get?

Guy: she fell

Voice: and?

Guy: I almost have her, but something happened

Voice: what?

Guy: a problem

Voice: well fix it and keep watch. Itíll be anytime now

Guy: alright

*Click*
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aww thats so cute!! but let me guess joker is gonna get mad & say memo stole her from him! but whos guy & voice? hurry & write some more when u can!
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