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Old 08-25-2009
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Default poetry's dead

When the pen is dry,
and the thoughts are dead.
like a physcho,
lost in bed.

is when I feel that,
poetry's dead.

and slowly it will,
cave inside.
and I know that I have,
finally died.

no more thoughts,
and no more pain.

all is healed,
except the pain.

slowly life is,
fading away.

and slowly it will,
simply erase.

yeah I know,
the Poetry's dead!

Mock my words,
to what I said.

thoughts are lost,
and poetry's dead.

I see my soul,
laughing loud.
it has left my body,
and it wears the crown.

crawling emptiness,
brings the shivers.

and i will write,
all that quivers.

if poetry dies,
then I will go.

and wander this world.

beneath my soul.
suffering to survive.

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^ i like it
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ooh geez niyorco....i loved it but...it made me feel so lonely.
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ooh geez niyorco....i loved it but...it made me feel so lonely.
Good to know you enjoyed it, didn't mean to make you feel lonely. lol.

Can't wait to read your drops again.
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Poor suffering poets!!! hmmm, hawt.. *winks*
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nice drop niyorco. this poem is sad but true.
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