Niyorco vs aPerson

[Dazed]

clearly biased?..
i honestly thought it was better than yours.
jump off my ass foo. damn.

[aPerson]

jump off your ass? i'm not on your ass tho lol...

your the one who called me an idiot for no reason and i'm on your ass? *looks up at tha ceiling* geee mate, i see a wall!

[Dazed]

no reason?..lol alrighty
you're funny..mkay well enjoy your saturday on soy
:\

[aPerson]

^ why thank you dazed

[Observer]

Originally Posted by Calmanani

Man, where is the 'neither' option?
Both were horrible and embarrassing. If I had to pick, I'd give it to aperson for being younger and not knowing any better.

Yeah me too, but it's be more of a affirmative action vote--not many mentally challenged are represented in freestyle.

[Niyorco]

Originally Posted by Observer

Yeah me too, but it's be more of a affirmative action vote--not many mentally challenged are represented in freestyle.

well, it's about time your dry humor ass answered. Shit youv'e been keeping me waiting long enough.

[aPerson]

lol @ observer

atleast we even put in some effort in an attempt to drop something...

i dont see you, or anybody else "freestyling", like i said, if yall want to show us what a "good freestyle" is then please, by all means, drop something... infact, you should drop something if your just gonna sit there and clown on us for our very first freestyles, and not even drop anything... shit for all we know your prolly worse than us... and that still aint sayin much...

[Observer]

Originally Posted by aPerson

atleast we even put in some effort in an attempt to drop something...

i dont see you, or anybody else "freestyling",

It would seem that, unlike you, I know my limits.

[da_payaso]

Originally Posted by Niyorco

Yeah this wasn't a battle. It started off in the freestyle board just for fun. Then aperson put it here with a poll and all. My thing was that it needed to be more organized.

Da_payaso.............you battle?

Yeah, whenever someone worth battling shows up on the boards, just go in the Battling section and you'll see my stuff...

As for aperson, whatever comments you are given..just take them, if people think what you wrote sucked, doesn't mean they think they can do better, they just think you sucked! Deal with it dude...

[Niyorco]

Originally Posted by da_payaso

Yeah, whenever someone worth battling shows up on the boards, just go in the Battling section and you'll see my stuff...

Yeah I just saw some of your stuff. It's alright. Not bad. Better then me I know that. Freestyling can be fun but it's not really my cup of tea. I'll stick to my literature pen instead.

[aPerson]

Originally Posted by Observer

It would seem that, unlike you, I know my limits.

I'm not sure I wouldn't know... all i'm saying is, if yall think our little rookie-raps sucked, show us what you got and "teach" us how to write something that aint whack than... its a simple gesture, specially if you do actually freestyle every now n then like payaso...

it would be entertaining to see you drop something

[Niyorco]

Originally Posted by aPerson

I'm not sure I wouldn't know... all i'm saying is, if yall think our little rookie-raps sucked, show us what you got and "teach" us how to write something that aint whack than... its a simple gesture, specially if you do actually freestyle every now n then like payaso...

it would be entertaining to see you drop something

Is aperson calling out Observor?......................TUN TUN TUN!!!

[aPerson]

lol its no call-out really, but i wouldnt mind battling him tho.... like i said, i'll battle anyone i dont give a fuck... becuz it takes a lot of balls to "text-battle" anyone

[Observer]

Originally Posted by aPerson

I'm not sure I wouldn't know... all i'm saying is, if yall think our little rookie-raps sucked, show us what you got and "teach" us how to write something that aint whack than... its a simple gesture, specially if you do actually freestyle every now n then like payaso...

it would be entertaining to see you drop something

I wish the President reasoned in a similar fashion. "You all think I suck as President? Then you see if you can do a better job."

I think country music sucks, but if Willie Nelson were to tell me "C'mon, show us you can do better" I'd tell him to STFU too.

[aPerson]

Originally Posted by Observer

I wish the President reasoned in a similar fashion. "You all think I suck as President? Then you see if you can do a better job."

I think country music sucks, but if Willie Nelson were to tell me "C'mon, show us you can do better" I'd tell him to STFU too.

Being the president of the united states of america, and dropping a freestyle are two completely different things

lol i get where your coming from tho, but i still think the critiques should teach us rookies "how its done"

so anybody reading, feel free to drop some flows, give a tip and a pointer or 2.


oh and actually, on a side note, i shouldnt even call you guys "critiques", cuz not a single one of you examined our drops correctly... you just keep coming back to say we "suck" and that we're "pathetic", and yet you dont even point out any valid flaws to our drop... you dont point out any specific punchlines or rhymes that you thought were flaw'd, you just say we completely suck without even providing us reasonings as to why you come to that conclusion... so really, you guys aint even rellevent to this thread not as "judges" or "critiques"....

[Cal]

Man you fucking suck really bad.

[aPerson]

lol i agree with you actually.

[Observer]

Originally Posted by aPerson

so anybody reading, feel free to...give a tip and a pointer or 2.

Suck Niyorco's d!ck until your tongue falls off. That way you'll never have to hear how bad you freestyle.

[FreedomNow]

uhh....

yeah...

i ll battle either one of you gentlemen...

it's been a while.

[da_payaso]

Originally Posted by aPerson

Being the president of the united states of america, and dropping a freestyle are two completely different things

lol i get where your coming from tho, but i still think the critiques should teach us rookies "how its done"

so anybody reading, feel free to drop some flows, give a tip and a pointer or 2.


oh and actually, on a side note, i shouldnt even call you guys "critiques", cuz not a single one of you examined our drops correctly... you just keep coming back to say we "suck" and that we're "pathetic", and yet you dont even point out any valid flaws to our drop... you dont point out any specific punchlines or rhymes that you thought were flaw'd, you just say we completely suck without even providing us reasonings as to why you come to that conclusion... so really, you guys aint even rellevent to this thread not as "judges" or "critiques"....

Your a nerd

[aPerson]

Originally Posted by Observer

Suck Niyorco's d!ck until your tongue falls off. That way you'll never have to hear how bad you freestyle.

lol i'd rather not, but i'll be sure to keep your "tip/pointer" in mind

(no pun intended)

Originally Posted by da_payaso

Your a nerd

lol you were playing? well i hope so... because i dont think it should matter if it's a spanish sky... or an english sky or anything else...

and i am a very proud nerd

[FreedomNow]

so... yeah... aPerson... if u want... i ll battle u...

[Niyorco]

damn this thread is still going. Shit kill it already ehh.

[aPerson]

Originally Posted by FreedomNow

so... yeah... aPerson... if u want... i ll battle u...

aright drop yours then

[FreedomNow]

Originally Posted by aPerson

aright drop yours then

alrighty then...