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View Poll Results: who won tha battle?
1rst round definitely niyorco 3 15.00%
1rst round definitely aPerson 2 10.00%
2nd round goes to niyorco 2 10.00%
2nd round goes to aPerson 0 0%
overall i'd say niyorco takes both rounds 7 35.00%
overall i'd say aPerson takes both rounds 6 30.00%
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okay so i'm really not sure how this is gonna work to be exact becuz we individually wrote a different amount of bars... i'm not sure who wrote "more" or "less" but i dont think it matters since niyorco doesnt mind... and i sure dont mind... so all u need to do is cast ur vote. i will close this poll by say... friday... whoever gets the most votes by friday wins...


~*EDIT:*~
i dont know how to close the poll, but today friday June 1rst is final vote day, Niyorco won.

WINNER: Niyorco


~ROUND ONE~

Niyorco

Poor thing/
Poor poor thing/
Sometimes I wonder, what tha fucks in your brain/
are you insane?
or is it just plain stupidity?
ahh i see now.
your desperate for your virginity.
Calling out the girls
talking bout cum/
sounds like your begging
for your fantasy threesome/
kid lay back, chill take a second./
don't come at the ladies
sounding horney and naked./
just learn your role/
don't even try hard/
you see no one responded
their laughing real hard/
and smoking in their yard/
a big swisha or blunt/
call it what you want/
the point is "get fucked up"/
but back on topic/
do you wanna get laid?/
son I suggest
you focuss on your brain/
think for a second
and be willing to listen/
or you'll loose your virginity
in the fucking state prison!!/
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aPerson

this was supposed to be all fun and games/
but Niyorco, boy, u just spawned your grave/
i liked u too, but i guess you was false/
your 2Faced but Bruce Wayne wont get tha call/
i'll finish you, your a simple plate of breakfast/
i would donate u to africa, but to them u just lettice/
tryina write a rap you couldnt even write a Hook/
matta-fact, u just mad cuz i threw away your Book/
"an adultery lust" more like "a fag in a club"/
a rack of a slut, niyorco you just mad cuz you suck/
fuck this to easy, i might aswell just END/
but i'm havin fun killin a bumb who is already DEAD/
man i liked you too, truely from the start/
but its okay, cuz i welcome "beef" with open arms/
you couldnt hit night if you swing in tha dark/
i'ma call u "Steve Irwin" cuz this a sting to YOUR heart/
i deliver tha harm to ya scars, with a verse of a curse/
then i'll put my dick in your ear so i can fuck what you heard/
your gettin slayed you LAME, dont even reply/
thats like tryna stretch out your arms and reach for tha sky/
your below me homey, your only groupie is dazed/
and she just mad cuz i got her "dazed" after i cum'd on her face/
but its okay, come try me, i'm laughing my dear/
just like your books, when i read them i laugh till i tear...
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~ROUND 2~

Niyorco

First off fuck you and your faggot crew/
homie you think you the shit but in this game your new/
You talking all your shit like calling me gay./
yet your the one about dicks in guys ears but anyway./
Now you wanna sound big and bad/
when you gonna grow and learn lil fag?/
Hommie you was begging
and pleading
and hoping to be receiving.
A copy of my book
you even thanked me that one evening.
"Oh it's so great Niyorco and your an ispiration."
Remember that lil bitch. You playing temptation.
and your rhyme is lame
your skill the same
your will to kill fake just like you play insane.
son why you trying hard
acting like you have greatly spoken
remember that poll "vote for the best of aperson"?
you wanna hook,
i'll give you a hook
not right nor left
but this one to a fake crook.

come step into this pencil mess
with your mouth on my girl dazed
yet you cry for her wicked bless
and dare to crawl in her phaze.

come step and try your best
bring something good to the table
and try if you can pass the test
cause to me i dont think your able.

come crawl on your lil knees
like you was born to do
and kiss Niyorco's pinky ring
While I wipe the floor with you!

you tried your best
i got to give you credit
and with the rest here on soy
Ima call you pathetic.

Ima chill for now.
perhaps one day I'll show you how.
till then go out.
and find your own fucking style!<<<<<<<<<<<<< literaly for real!
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aPerson

today is a sad day 4 its tha loss of a writer/
i slayed niyorco so badly, you'd think i'm a liar/
niyorco dont worry i'll fund your funeral-its truth/
and i'll make sure to burry you with your story-books too/
again let me repeat, YOU LOSE, "court is ajourned"/
even your dad said that you was just a waste of sperm/
ima burn your flesh and open your head, and take out ur brain/
then mail it to your "wife" on valentines' day/
niyorco dont front your a chump with a pen/
writing your fairy-tales about gettin fucked by 2-men/
this the freak-show and this mans the number 1 freak/
cuz he deepthroats his fellow bumbs, he wears they cum on his cheek/
its DONE boy, c'mon stop lying to yourself/
just like your books you need to be put back on a shelf/

you loot 4 a "comeback" but your mission is failed/
you aint got nothin else left thats why dazed is for sale/
its simple really, this thing we call a "battle"/
cuz i'm an ocean, and your trying to sail me with no paddles/
ima true story, niyorco is fiction/
destroying weak hoes like you is my addiction/
its runnin thru my blood stream i thrive on defeat/
but this battle is to easy, done put me to SLEEP/
watch me consume this peice of fruit fugly/
ima crow in your shadow, and you just a dumpling/
i told you aint no mercy when you step 2 a God/
your like a gun with no clip, with me you aint got a shot/
dont try anymore your a sad situation/
blinded eyes to the fact that my time YOU wastin/
with your whack rhymes your comebacks are FLOPPED/
go practice till then i'll let soy vote you off...


aright there it is... please vote... again i know this is unorganized but aint none of us mind so like p diddy says... vote or die...

Edit: by tha way you cant vote for yourself...
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you must of just added that last drop in the second round cause it wasn't on the freestyle board.............LOL!
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^yea i told you that i was gonna respond to u here instead of in the freestylers section...
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Edit: by tha way you cant vote for yourself...

In that case..........Vote for me!
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lol i would vote for you but i literally dont feel ur drop... tha first one anyway
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man im bout to drop some too..........





















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lol i would vote for you but i literally dont feel ur drop... tha first one anyway
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^^dont worry i was feeling 'em
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^^dont worry i was feeling 'em

Then...........VOTE!!!!! LOL!
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ohhh yeah...jeje..i knew that
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Lol!
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looks like niyorco gots tha win so far, just 2 days away before i close tha poll so please cast ur votes ppl.
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he gots my vote..gotta support the sancho...
j/k niyorco
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hey hey...........shhhh!
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hey hey...........shhhh!
my bad oops....
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lol well if u think his flows beat mine by these points...

+Cleverness/wit
+Punchlines
+wordPlay
+good visualizations (this basically means he was able to paint a picture in ur head with his rhymes)
etc...

if u think his drops out pointed mine with all of those, i dont know what freestyles you were reading... but i respect your opinion tho
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1) dam this 1's hard...niyorco..lol...homito...ur 1st one wasnt all that good...2 simple...just retailting words...u gotta have an imagination 4 it...just like poetry....i def think aPerson took that 1...

2) I think the 1st part of Niyorco's flow feel off....but he came back on the last part...aPErson the whole flow was on lock...great stuff man...

Now I WILL NOT cast a vote...because I feel it was boths great effort...both tried their best...so its a tie......aPerson ( and idk y but I feel weird calling u that...but that sur sn...) like I said great stuff...keep it up...Niyorco...work on it mayne....i see some good potential in there that could b developed...now I dont know if this is ur 1st or 1 of ur 1st times battling....but we all start out not so good...lol...so work workk on it...cause u of alll ppl should know practice makes perfect...

props 2 both and ...1 LOVE
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Man You Are Both Lame.
None Of You Got Any Game.
$hit All Sounds The Same.
This Thread Wasnt $hit Till I Came.
And You Are Both To Blame.
Your Good Or So You Claim.
Bring Out My Gun And Aim.
Straight At Your Dome.
Crying Clapping Your Heals So You Can Go Home.
This Aint Kansas Any More Dorthy.
So Get On Your Knees And Bow Before Me.
And I May Let You Free.
Wait A Second Whats That On Your Chin?
Looks Liek This Rhyme Took A Little Spin.
Maybe Someone Been Slappin Them Skins.
As Forealzchola Would Say Aint That A Sin.
I Will Leave You Both Now So I Can Visit Your Mom.
And Leave You A Suprise.
Yup Thats Right Its You Next Of Kin.

Yo You To Did Pretty Good And Its Hard To Decide With You To Hmm.
aPerson FIRST ROUND
Niyorco SECOND ROUND

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Man You Are Both Lame.
None Of You Got Any Game.
$hit All Sounds The Same.
This Thread Wasnt $hit Till I Came.
And You Are Both To Blame.
Your Good Good Or So You Claim.
Bring Out My Gun And Aim.
Straight At Your Dome.
Crying Clapping Your Heals So You Can Go Home.
This Aint Kansas Any More Dorthy.
So Get On Your Knees And Bow Before Me.
And I May Let You Free.
Wait A Second Whats That On Your Chin?
Looks Liek This Rhyme Took A Little Spin.
Maybe Someone Been Slappin Them Skins.
As Forealzchola Would Say Aint That A Sin.
I Will Leave You Both Now So I Can Visit Your Mom.
And Leave You A Suprise.
Yup Thats Right Its You Next Of Kin.

Yo You To Did Pretty Good And Its Hard To Decide With You To Hmm.
aPerson FIRST ROUND
Niyorco SECOND ROUND
One word that I'll preach
homie keep it unique.
the momma jokes that you say
are things many speak.

Your momma this and your momma that
your momma dis like your useless dad.

Im tired of you so im bringing my own
let pause on you a sec and enjoy the show.

Now look whoes kicking look whoes coming
live in your fucking mouth
it's that boy Niyorco
that people speak
represeanting tha dirty south.

the one and only
soy's writer of original
representing the raza clan
and supporting it's people

Repping I'm burning
and holding my own.
entertaining the world of chaos
from the keys in my home

I'm chilling and flipping
straight leather wheel gripping
when im out rolling my lanch
not sweating whoes tripping.

In the land of Texas
Ima straight represent
The brown people stay strong
and hold thier respect.

From southeast to the mid
to the west and down coast
birth of screw and the chopped
lovely ladies of course.

aint shit changed Im the same
represent P.A.T
just dropping lines like I do
the true poetic papi.

......................................ha ha! this my first time rapping. It's fun!!!
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Lmao Tight Tight!! Lmao Begginers Luck Lmao
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Lmao Tight Tight!! Lmao Begginers Luck Lmao

ahh shit stop being nice ehh!!!!..........LOL!
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One word that I'll preach
homie keep it unique.
the momma jokes that you say
are things many speak.

Your momma this and your momma that
your momma dis like your useless dad.

Im tired of you so im bringing my own
let pause on you a sec and enjoy the show.

Now look whoes kicking look whoes coming
live in your fucking mouth
it's that boy Niyorco
that people speak
represeanting tha dirty south.

the one and only
soy's writer of original
representing the raza clan
and supporting it's people

Repping I'm burning
and holding my own.
entertaining the world of chaos
from the keys in my home

I'm chilling and flipping
straight leather wheel gripping
when im out rolling my lanch
not sweating whoes tripping.

In the land of Texas
Ima straight represent
The brown people stay strong
and hold thier respect.

From southeast to the mid
to the west and down coast
birth of screw and the chopped
lovely ladies of course.

aint shit changed Im the same
represent P.A.T
just dropping lines like I do
the true poetic papi.

......................................ha ha! this my first time rapping. It's fun!!!
haha this nigga....LOL...U know how we do round TX...LOL...it is huh....i was trippin out when i 1st "battled"...LOL....ey Niyorco u 4rm P.A.T.??
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born and raised in the P.A.T bro.
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born and raised in the P.A.T bro.
huuuuuhhh.....LOL....UGK Land huh...LOL...this 1 lil nigga I wa slocke dup with was 4rm up there...never been there myself though...good looking out though...
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Yeah man home of U.G.K, Jimmy Johnson, Janis Joplin, Robert Frith, Stephen Jackson and a few others..

Oh and your truely..............me!
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