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Bitch, u just crossed that line
i merked mc's that been at it for a lifetime
neva shoulda intertwined with a mind like mine
shoulda taken the comments from ur last battle as a sign
u aint talented, a pussy who, i'll have u squeelin' like swine.
this the slaughter house get ready to meet u maker...
slam the gavel... ur cold case ready to meet the undertaker
rest in piss... after this round u ll be deceased.
imma south central verbal beast
a buffet of whack mc's is what need to feast
i throw u to the side, u aint want no beef
fucken with me, ya grade'll be incomplete
imma run away in this verbal track meet
next time, make sure u listen to critique....
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your name is freedomnow but done inslaved yourself/
with no knowledge you speakin, done slayed your health/
easily ina raged state i push u down your mouth is movin/
about to make me a teacher to a special student/
i'm prudent ina zone witha flow eatin bitches
heavy on the punchlines your journy is finished/
witha simple call-out you just destroyed your name/
your whole life is thru, you just raised your grave/
you call yourself a vet when you sound only decent/
average at best, this test is your treason/
seasons dont matter your flesh stays cold/
cuz after this battle your death ingraved bold
you couldnt be electric if thunder struck/
this like anal insersion cuz u just got fucked/
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*yawn*
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i been blessed with a curse to devour
u just stepped into ur final hour
apocalyptic type flow embody mah soul
ain't got time for a pimple faced 17 yr old imbecile
i come with the wicked shit and ready to roll
challengers up like a spliff i ve been told
the crown is what i already done hold
imma king ur a pauper ur polls gettin old
up shits creek u den' rowed
u just witnessed a legend dun flowed
my name is a legacy and is known in ya household
ya mom screamin damn that boy dun got throwed...
This shit gonna get u bent out a shape like dislocated elbows...
make people nod heads like ya girls when she blows
after this u should know neva to step to Freedom cuz that boy staight ice COLD!
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its tha moment of truth, killin a bruised mc/
technically with flocabulary, verbal artillery/
injectin freedom's veins tha slave witha seed/
freedoms about to get beat like a teenagers meat/
cuz his flows empty, this veterans weak/
slowly dying, this battles about to put me to sleep/
got tired like hearin kyle say "you killed kenney"/
you bastard your a slave so bow down to your master/
my rhymes circle tha globe like tha rings of saturn/
your patterns offtrack got a weave like a hoe/
prickled pickle dickin tricks n pimps shatterin bones/
no hope for you now you just built your home/
in tha cemetary gates where coffins keep your soul/
like a true slave you die by tha whip/
freedoms shoutin "freedom!" cuz his lifes in ma grip/
held to tha tip, ina onesided battle you just mad cuz i win/
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man the both of you are boring
I'm snoring
this tasteless shit isn't scoring
someone entertain my people
even a possible sequal.
The only joy we get
is laughing at your idiotic equal
get some advice
some points
some help from a joint
if not just quit
all this shit thats no point!
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niyorco just stop, i already finished u off/
you didnt win shit, my flows devoured you soft/
the only reason you got voted n "won" by choice/
cuz i'm the most hated man in history of soy/
i manage your damage your raps are just flaws/
without a sawed off i peirce thru your draws/
your on last call your laughable and weak/
witha simple 5 bars i'll inherit your meat/
your soul collected, i grip your heart in my hands/
with tha sole purpose of settin it in flames for a laugh
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niyorco just stop, i already finished u off/
you didnt win shit, my flows devoured you soft/
the only reason you got voted n "won" by choice/
cuz i'm the most hated man in history of soy/
i manage your damage your raps are just flaws/
without a sawed off i peirce thru your draws/
your on last call your laughable and weak/
witha simple 5 bars i'll inherit your meat/
your soul collected, i grip your heart in my hands/
with tha sole purpose of settin it in flames for a laugh

I suppose you have spoken
your jokeing
the shit you say holds nothing of fortune
who won the poll
son check again
I was voted over you
though a not to brag win
your not a good participate
in fact your a sore looser
and you cried and begged for
a helping hand
and was clowned in your own future
Now you wanna come wicked
and dark
try and mock me real hard
the style of dark rhymes
lives and beats in my heart
Heres a taste
to your waste
your body slowly decays
as the laughter of carnivors
surround the hole I dug for your grave
Your soul rots as your faith
and yet you cried for escape
while my girl dazed
laughed as she slit open your face
drip by drip
your blood did drip
I slit your ribcage in half
sent you to the bottomless pit.
while I simply just laughed.
Goodbye aperson
it was nice to know you
thanks for the effort
of your entertaining view!
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niyorco you try to hard n still fail, your no-one/
i'm tha godfather of "dark" shit just read my poems/
i dont even need to diss u you diss urself/
with them whack ass raps, u need to slap yourself...
tryina step to a monster, your a skeleton wheeping/
with your style so generic keepin everyone sleeping/
your beeping with your fingers typing crap again/
like i said, you didnt win shit, them polls was fixed/
cuz i'm the most hated individual and sick in tha head/
your just mad cuz i slaughtered and retired your led/
like a peasent in tha mist of acid burned and impaired/
your gonna die and not even your family-members gonna care/
your a waste of liquids your sole purpose to lose/
ina denial state your blood leaks like ooze... smooze you lose...
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Ummmm..........*yawn*
accept that you've been pawned.

This thread is about you and freedom
and it looks like your done.
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lol pwned* you say n spell it wrong...
the only one pwned is the one who "won"

that fixed shit you and i both know i conquerd
man just stop comin back, your replies are slaughtered...

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Im back..........LOL!

get back at freedom now.
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y u always hijackin other battle threads niyorco?

not cool, bro...
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niyorco doesnt mean any harm, he's just tossin his name into tha hat and trying to show us what he gots

but anyway, i might aswell just forfeit our lil battle, you won i know that for sure, not just becuz i know you'll have more supporters (if i even have any) but because your drops were clearly better than mine. true that, so here is a nice and slow applause *claps*
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y u always hijackin other battle threads niyorco?

not cool, bro...

OK. OK. Ok.........................ya me voy.

*walks out the door and whistels for his ride*

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niyorco doesnt mean any harm, he's just tossin his name into tha hat and trying to show us what he gots

but anyway, i might aswell just forfeit our lil battle, you won i know that for sure, not just becuz i know you'll have more supporters (if i even have any) but because your drops were clearly better than mine. true that, so here is a nice and slow applause *claps*
i appreciate ur graciousness... but who knows i actually felt ur second drop a lot....


U actually did a lot better in this battle than the one u had with niyo....

I ain't nothin special at this but i can put words together... when i m not drunk as hell i m actually a decent freestyler out in parking lots with homies and fools we meet....

i like that word Flocabulary u threw in there... never heard that before....

thing is bout ur second drop against me i felt u threw my name in it too much.... too me, when dudes do that it kinda throws shit off... just my opinion...


neways... good shit man.
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i been blessed with a curse to devour
u just stepped into ur final hour
apocalyptic type flow embody mah soul
ain't got time for a pimple faced 17 yr old imbecile-Freedomnow


DAMN!!! lmao, that shit was fresh! However I don't want to waste my time voting on this battle. I mean both of ya'll wrecked, unlike aperson's last battle don't know what the fuck you were thinking there, but it's pointless to vote if both of ya'll are already naming the other as the victor and shit, I mean WTF?! we voting or not?
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i think i'ma start checking these battles out... they make me laugh..
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[QUOTE=da_payaso;644076]i been blessed with a curse to devour
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ain't got time for a pimple faced 17 yr old imbecile-Freedomnow
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LMAO!!
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apocalyptic type flow embody mah soul
ain't got time for a pimple faced 17 yr old imbecile-Freedomnow


DAMN!!! lmao, that shit was fresh! However I don't want to waste my time voting on this battle. I mean both of ya'll wrecked, unlike aperson's last battle don't know what the fuck you were thinking there, but it's pointless to vote if both of ya'll are already naming the other as the victor and shit, I mean WTF?! we voting or not?
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i been blessed with a curse to devour
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LMAO!!

Glad ya'll like that.... i thought it was pretty funny when i was typing it, too.
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Glad ya'll like that.... i thought it was pretty funny when i was typing it, too.
yea what makes it a good punchline is that its tha truth... i do have a pimple face and i am 17 lol... my acne is actually clearing up tho but yea that was a good personal punch... thats why i know you won this battle imo, becuz i had no personal punches cuz i really dont know shit about u lol, i just tried to get some dirt on your name but thats it... all i could do, anyway this was fun, thanks ojitos for putting me in tha "good" catagory
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