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Old 09-19-2015
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Cu Music: Memphis Reigns & D-Mitch's 'Night Before Christmas'.

The Audience sees The Writer's back, his white t-shirt on his shoulder, his neck, his short dark brown hair, and The Writer is sitting on a chair that go side to side. But he is sitting still in front of the laptop that sits upon a fold up black desk.

That's how it begins.

From nothing into something.

CUT TO:

Rap song is cut off. A familiar song is playing now.

Cu Music: Mariah Carey's 'Fantasy' is playing loud over the screen.

We're on a sidewalk. It's daylight but her dress wear tells you all it is colder. She is happy, and the young woman is all into the music that plays into her ears.

She is a star. When she dances. She is Chaos.

JULIE: (singing loud and very well) Oh when you walk by every night! Talking sweet and looking fine! (her backhand to her forehead) I get kinda hectic inside!

The dark, curly hair woman is wearing a purple jacket with white dickie pants, and as she dances, and sings down the sidewalk she doesn't know unseen forces are spying on her.

Flash Back:

Julie is dressed as a Hopi Princess, her hairdo like the Princess from the original Star War movies, and she is dancing, pancing as Native American males are break dancing around her.

CUT BACK:

SERIOUS VOICE: JULIE!

Julie is removing her headphones quickly, and she is turning around, and Julie is expecting someone to be there.

But there is no one there.

JULIE: Okay.

She had just decided to keep the headphone off. Julie is walking back down the sidewalk but she is looking back couple of times.

CUT TO:

Cu-Music: Masta Builders' 'Notice the Spirit' is playing loud.

Cu-The Writer, his backside.

The music is continuing into the next scene.

If The Writer doesn't write she doesn't exist. But he can feel the so called Writer Block striking at him. Giving him Nothing. But there's a spark that becomes something.

CUT TO:

EXT. STREET - DAYLIGHT

I don't want her to run.

Julie is fast walking down the sidewalk.

I've you.

Julie is slowing down.

Face him.

Julie is turning around.

There is no one there.

JULIE: That's it!

She is going into her left pant pocket and removes a small bag.

JULIE: (throws the bag down) Only the real shit from now on!

There is crackles, and then reality rips up in front of her face, and Julie is eyes wide up, and large green hands with yellow claws makes a hole and behind him there is darkness with purple and red separate lines of light that zoom past endlessly.

Julie sees his face.

His mouth is like shark and his tongue is large, and the tongue moves like a snake, and that's all she sees.

Julie is screaming as she reaches into her bra between her large titties, and pulls out a gun, and cocks it, and starting pulling back the trigger.

YOUNG MAN'S VOICE: JULIE!!!

Julie is turning around, and she puts the barrel gun into her homeboy's mouth, and he cries out because the gun broke his front teeth.

HER HOMEBOY: (stuff mouth with blood) JULIE!!!

She takes the gun out of his mouth.

JULIE: SHIT I'M SO SORRY, BUT (She pushes him) YOU GOTTA GET OUT OF HERE - NOW!!

HER HOMEBOY: (splits out his broken teeth out with good amount of blood) THE FUCK IS WRONG WITH YOU?!!

JULIE: What?!!

She is going to point at the whatever the fuck that crazy jaw like mouth belong to, but when she looks she sees nothing there.

JULIE: Oooo...

HER HOMEBOY: FUCK JULIE! YOU BROKE MY TOOTH!

JULIE: I'm Sorry, Eddie!

EDDIE: FUCK! What the hell?!!

JULIE: I..I'm sorry. Really.

EDDIE: And who the hell was you shooting at?

JULIE: um...

EDDIE: I thought Kings were rolling in!

JULIE: No...no, I thought...we're okay.

EDDIE: YOU SURE ABOUT THAT?!

JULIE: Yeaah.

JULIE'S THOUGHTS: God I hope so!

EDDIE: (looking down) That yours?

He looks up at her.

EDDIE: Damn! How much you smok-fuck I'm bleeding!

JULIE: Yeah, you're.

EDDIE: (walks away, going towards a house) Fucking bitch! Muthafucking fucking bitch.

JULIE: Whatever. (looks back) That shit was real. (Pause) I think. (Pause) Probably not. Huh? Damn po po. Better go. (walking towards the house Eddie went into) Fuck I get high too much.
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CU-OFFICER GOMEZ
is at the front door. His face is way too serious.

OFFICER GOMEZ: it was you. Tell me. It was you. (looks into the house) What are you hiding? Tell me. (pause) Tell me.

CU-SMILEY
a big, dark skin pelon vato is in front of the cop. He is much taller than short, fat copper.

SMILEY: He already told you. He heard a gunshot, ran, tripped, and busted his mouth. (looks down, right)

Eddie is holding a cloth to his mouth.

OFFICER GOMEZ: ...

SMILEY: (calm voice) Are we done?

OFFICER GOMEZ: (hesitate) Yes.

SMILEY: (SHUTS THE DOOR) Bye.

CUT TO:

LIVING ROOM (SMILEY'S HOUSE)

SMILEY: Where is she?

Eddie is standing next to Smiley, who asked the question to three people in the living room who are sitting on two separate sofas while on tv screen a game is on pause.

Two of them are a couple, Luna and David, and Mousie, a chola also.

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Cu-Music: Pimp C's 'Love Song (screwed & chopped)' is playing.

Julie is sitting on a bed, legs up, and she is drinking a forty ounce bottle as she raps and sings along with the song.

The bedroom door is opened.

Smiley is standing in the doorway.

JULIE: Oh here we go!

Julie takes a big drink.

SMILEY: The fuck was that all about?

JULIE: What?

SMILEY: You know what! JULIE!

JULIE: Yes?

SMILEY: You brought the cops to my house! MY HOUSE!

JULIE: I know.

SMILEY: Eddie told me some shit but that shit make no damn sense.

Smiley shuts the door and walks over to the bed.

SMILEY: (looking down on her) So I need you to explain to me exactly what happened with you out there.

JULIE: "I need you to explain"! (giggles) Uh huh yeah. NO.

SMILEY: No.

JULIE: Noooo! (burps) Nice.

SMILEY: Damn it. I've been to easy on you.

JULIE: No. (her finger pointing up at him) You did exactly what you had to do. Hold on. (burps) Because you wanted too.

SMILEY: Julie.

JULIE: Mmhmm.

SMILEY: You didn't explain what happened. Who was you shooting at?

JULIE: Your mama.

Smiley punches her, Julie is knock off the bed, and lands on the floor.

Julie is laughing hard.

Smiley walks over and sees her holding onto the bottle, and beer has spill on her shirt, and pants, and Julie lies on her back, laughing with the biggest smile.

JULIE: CAN YOU FEEL THAT? OH MY GOD! SOMETHING HAS HAPPENED!

SMILEY: (undoing his belt) Crazy ass bitch.

JULIE: (squeezing her titties) Oh what? These titties made you hard, huh? Come and get it.

SMILEY: (dropping his draws and pants) Crazy ass bitch.

JULIE: (smiley get on top of her) Oh you know it!

Smiley kisses her mouth hard, and then biting on her neck, and then Julie cocks back her gun.

SMILEY: (eyes looking left) Oh shit!

JULIE: U know what?

SMILEY: Julie, get that gun out of my face.

JULIE: I wanna know what's it's like.

She leans in and whispers into his right ear.

JULIE: To be a boy.

Smiley looks at her, Julie has a big smile on her face.

SMILEY: Julie, listen to me-

JULIE: Listen to you

SMILEY: Yes, please.

JULIE: Ooh baby.

SMILEY: I'm...I'm sorry I hit you.

JULIE: Are you?

SMILEY: Yes.

JULIE: How sorry are you?

SMILEY: Very.

JULIE: Yeaah?

SMILEY: Baby, I love you.

Julie laughs.

JULIE: Get off of me.

SMILEY: (moving away from her) Okay.

JULIE: (sits up, looks right at his face) You love me huh?

SMILEY: Yes. You know I do.

JULIE: Oh shit, I do?

SMILEY: Julie, please.

Julie is smiling.

SMILEY: What happened to you? (Pause) Baby?

JULIE: Mmm?

SMILEY: Are you okay?

JULIE: At first. Nope. Now.

She is getting up.

JULIE: I don't feel shit.

Julie aims the gun at Smiley's face.

JULIE: Turn around.

SMILEY: No, Julie-

JULIE: Turn-the-fuck-around-before-I-

SMILEY: Okay, okay I'll.

He is turning around.

JULIE: On your hands and knees.

SMILEY: (crying) Okay.

JULIE: Jesus! Are you crying? Really?

He is crying hard and loud now.

JULIE: Wow. So this is what it's like to be a boy. Hmm. Kinda nice.

SMILEY: What are you going to do?

JULIE: (knees down behind him) Well!

She shoves the barrel the gun into his mouth and he screams painfully loud like a girl.

JULIE: haha! Sorry I was about to tell you what I was going to do. Hmm, but it is obvious now, huh? Yep!!

She is pulling back the trigger.
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CUT TO:

Cu Music: Masta Buildas' 'Ascension' is playing on the screen.

CU-THE WRITER
his back to you all. The chronic smoke he blows out his nostrils are blue and red.

CUT TO:

INT. BEDROOM (SMILEY'S HOUSE)

Smiley is yelling at Julie, who is sitting on the bed, and Smiley calls her names "dumb ass" "stupid bitch".

Julie didn't murder Smiley. It was her fantasy, playing out but Julie can't make a stand, and because of that Julie is a prisoner to her own life.

After the long verbal abuse Smiley handed out to Julie, she is left alone in the room, and she looks over at the curtain, touches them.

JULIE'S VOICE: Why the fuck do you take that shit from him?!

Julie turns left and sees Julie 2, standing over her.

JULIE: You ain't real.

JULIE 2: You fucking sure about that?

JULIE: I'm losing my mind.

JULIE 2: Bitch, I asked you-

Julie 2 punches Julie across the face.

Julie kicks her away and gets up.

JULIE 2: YES!! That! I want that! We are that!

JULIE: That fucking what?

JUILE 2: Tell me, how you feel.

JULIE: Ain't you me? Shouldn't you know?

Julie 2 laughs and takes off her shirt, and pulls down her bra and starts licking her right nipple.

JULIE 2: You wanna kill. (walks over to Julie) It makes you hot.

JULIE: Who are you?

JULIE 2: I am you. You're me.

JULIE: (sits down on the bed) No! This is crazy!

JULIE 2: So?

Julie 2 knees down between Julie's thighs.

JULIE 2: Being normal gets you no where, sweetie. You know this. Look at you. You're no one right now.

JULIE: (depressed) I am.

JULIE 2: It doesn't have to be like that.

Julie looks at her self.

JULIE 2: Do what you wanted to do, Julie. Do it. DO IT.

Julie wraps her hands around Julie 2's throat.

JULIE 2: (choking) Yess!

Julie screams as blood squirts out of Julie 2's eyeballs .

CUT TO:

INT. KITCHEN (SMILEY'S HOUSE)

Smiley is at the table playing cards with five homeboys.

Julie walks into the kitchen, stands there behind Loco, and then reveals a knife and slits Loco's throat from ear to ear before he even knows what happens.

Blood shoots out of Loco's open throat.

Julie shoots the vato on Loco's right, he took a bullet to the face which took off his bottom jaw, and the vato on Loco's left got a knife in the hand, and Julie takes it out and stabs the knife on his nose and upper mouth.

The two other vatos get up and start running while Smiley is up and reaching for a drawer.

Smiley was going for the gun in the drawer, but Julie shoots his hand, and he cries out in agony while Julie goes over to him, and she starts pistol whipping Smiley.

He falls to the ground, and Julie starts stomping on his head, and she doesn't stop even when his head cracks open and spills brains. She smash the brains too, splits on his body and then she takes a piss on him.
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CUT TO:

EXT. FRONT PORCH (SMILEY'S HOUSE) - DAY EVENING

Julie sits on the steps of the front porch, and she drinking a fresh 40 ounce bottle, and the red sun light is on her face.

JULIE'S VOICE: You stupid bitch!

Julie takes a swing off the bottle.

JULIE'S VOICE: You didn't do nothing!!

CUT TO:

INT. KITCHEN (SMILEY'S HOUSE)

Earlier.

Smiley and the five vatos look at Julie, and she looks back at them. Then she goes over the fridge and heads for the front door, without saying a word.

Couple of the vatos including Smiley start laughing.

CUT BACK TO:

JULIE 2: (yelling in Julie's face) JULIE!!! WHY DON'T YOU DO WHAT YOU DREAM?!

JULIE: I'm afraid.

Julie 2 starts cussing while she beats on Julie, but soon stops and stands over Julie.

JULIE 2: You know who you're!!! You've always know it!!! (kicking dirt at Julie's face) Stop embarrassing us!!!

JULIE: (using her hands to cover her face) Stop!

Julie 2 is cussing and kicking Julie's back.

JULIE: (on the ground) STOP IT!!

Julie 2 jumps over Julie and kicks Julie's face.

Julie's screams loud, and grabs Julie 2's right ankle and she starts slamming Julie 2 around like a rag doll, and then Julie 2's body smashes so hard her body bust into pieces like she fell from the sky.

Cu-Music: Son of Saturn's 'Mysterium Cosmographicum' is playing.

Julie is standing.

She looks at her hands.

Her fists closed.

Julie looks up at the moon.

CUT TO:

INT. KITCHEN (SMILEY'S HOUSE)

Julie goes over to Smiley, sitting on a chair at the table, and not pay attention til Julie hits the side of his head with her fist, and she starts swinging, and Smiley falls down to the floor. One of the vato is about to attack her from behind, but she turns, and pushes him down. the vato falls on top of Smiley and Julie uses the counter to jump and slam back of her shoe on the back of the vato's head.

VATO: Agh!

JULIE 2'S VOICE: WHAT TO DO WHAT WILL WE DO-

Julie sees Julie 2's face on Smiley, and she yells and starts stomping on his face.

JULIE 2'S VOICE: OH WHAT ELSE WILL DO WHAT ELSE WILL WE DO-

Julie is grabbing a dirty kitchen knife with dry, hot sauce and she fast fall kneel down while holding the knife down, and stabs Smiley's open mouth.
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FADE TO BLACK

MAN'S VOICE: Oh, that's just nasty.

Dripping sounds with splats.

FADE IN

A cop in white cowboy hat looks up as entrails fall from the ceiling fan to the floor, and the short, fat cop next to him look at the pool of guts and almost throws up.

COWBOY COP: Smell that, Pugly?

PUGLY: I think I'm going to be sick.

COWBOY COP: She didn't just shit and piss on them, she dump-oh that really is jus nasty.

PUGLY: (sounding sick) She, sir?

COWBOY COP: I never understood how a woman can bleed that much and not die.

PUGLY: (sounding sick) Oh my god that blood is (puts both of his hands to his mouth)

COWBOY COP: We're dealing with a sick ass bitch, Pulgy.

Pugly throws up vomit.

COWBOY COP: Pugly, on the evidence? Really?!

PUGLY: Uggh!!

CUT TO:

EXT, STREET - NIGHT

Julie, naked, is walking, twitching down the street.

JULIE: I know I am! (Pause) You gotta tell me! (pause) Oh yeah! (looks down) look, look!

Julie is bending over.

CUT TO:

Cu-Music: 112's 'Only You (remix)' is playing

INT. FOUR DOOR BROWN CAR (MOVING) - NIGHT

The young man is behind the wheel, smoking a joint, and he is rapping along with the song.

He looks towards his right, and sees someone, naked, and he slams on the brakes when he sees her shaved pussy.

YOUNG MAN: No fucking way.

CUT TO:

EXT. BROWN CAR (PARKED) - NIGHT

Julie, bent over, is moving her middle finger up down on the crack at the sidewalk she stands on.

The brown car is parked on her right, and front passenger window rolls down, and the young man leans over.

YOUNG MAN: Hey!

Julie perks her head up, straighten her back, and looks left.

YOUNG MAN: (serious) You all right?

JULIE: I am the lady bug!

She said with her arms spread out.

YOUNG MAN: Uh huh. Ain't you cold?

JULIE: You!

She goes over the car and goes halfway through the open window.

INT. BROWN CAR (PARKED) - NIGHT

The young man is staring at Julie's tits that hang down in front of him.

JULIE: You've to take me the island! Now!


YOUNG MAN: Um...

JULIE: Go - now! Zoom! Zoom, Zoom!

YOUNG MAN: Ookay. How about you get in-well you already in, kind of, um look, how about you sit down first, okay?

JULIE: Hmm...should I? Huh? NO ONE ASKED YOU!!!

YOUNG MAN: Wow.

JULIE: You know what?! I will sit down!

YOUNG MAN: You talking to me.

Julie gets in more through the window as she puts her hands on his head, and her tits are right in the man's face, and he smiles and almost laughs.

YOUNG MAN: Alright.

Julie props down on the seat.

JULIE: FLY, CAPTAIN, FLY!

YOUNG MAN: Haha! (puts his car into drive) boy, I know how to pick them!

JULIE: I SAID FLY!!!
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The Writer Block is the Architect, the Ego, and he is my joke.

Cu-Music: Righteous Da Goddess' 'Mermaid Oath' is playing.

CUT TO:

Chris is sitting indian style on the floor, and his hands are making sixes, resting on his knees and his eyes are closed. Underneath, painted in red is an ancient symbol and there are 13 lit candles around him, making a david's star.

Two men have walked into the room, a door is shut by one of them.

Chris doesn't make a move nor does he open his eyes or twitch his eyelids.

The two men are looking the obvious Goons look, they're tall and very heavy set. The "skinnier" one is Benny and next to him is Benny's larger than life little brother Flea.

FlEA: What's he doing?

BENNY: Shut up.

CHRIS: "No. You're. Get out of myarrggh."

BENNY: (mouthing) What the fuck?

CHRIS: (opens his eyes) It is all right, Benny. I am done. Do you have something for me?

BENNY: Yeah-

FLEA: What was that about? What was you just doing?

BENNY: Flea, not now!

CHRIS: Well Flea. I was away from my body.

FLEA: No. You wasn't.

CHRIS: No?

BENNY: Flea, leave now.

CHRIS: Tell me, boy. Have you ever left Earth?

Flea looks down at the smaller Chris.

FLEA: What are you talking about?

BENNY: Oh no.

FLEA: What, Benny?

CHRIS; You wanna try it?

FLEA: Dude, how about you pay me so I can stop being nice to you.

CHRIS: I will show you.

FLEA: Whatagg-

Chris kicks and breaks Flea's knee, and when Flea drops down to Chris' level, we see Chris put his hands on both sides of Flea's head, squeezing it.

Benny is looking away, and that's last thing Flea sees before Chris caves his middle face and the crack is a bolt down Flea's face.

Chris' face is dripping Flea's blood, Benny is looking at the psychopath.

CHRIS: He was your sister's son.

BENNY: He was stupid.

CHRIS: Yeah. But his purpose.

BENNY: ...you remember that whore from last Friday.

CHRIS: Booberella. (looks at Benny) What about her?

BENNY: (uneasy) She killed Eddie. Hell. She killed five p's too.

CHRIS: mmhmm. So?

BENNY: ...

CHRIS: We got new breeds. Used them.

BENNY: And Julie?

CHRIS: You go find her and bring her back to me. Don't kill her.

BENNY: Ok.

CHRIS: I'm serious. You kill her I'm do to you what I did to her bitch in Spain.

BENNY: Ok.

CHRIS: Don't you want to know how you going find her?

BENNY: I will find her.

CHRIS: Listen me. You won't find her looking with those eyes.

Chris was pointed at Benny's eyes.

BENNY: What do you mean?

CHRIS: Shut up. To find her. You've to become your dream.

BENNY: Okay.

CHRIS: I'm serious.

BENNY: I know. and I will find her.

CHRIS: You better or else (points at Flea).
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EXT. CITY STREETS - NIGHT

Benny is walking out of a bank building, turns west, and starts walking the LONELY sidewalk.

BENNY'S THOUGHTS: The fuck he'd talking about?! Flea! My Lord. Why didn't I-??! I got no choice. Flea is gone and I am alive. I can't find her with my eyes?! Stupid mutha-fuck-a. What did he say? "become-".

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CU-CHRIS: (his eyes closed) "-your dream".

Chris opens his eyes, they're glowing red.

CHRIS: Now to bring her to you.

CUT TO:

INT. BROWN CAR (MOVING) - NIGHT

The young man is looking at the silent, staring straight Julie.

YOUNG MAN: Are you okay?

Julie doesn't move.

The Young Man is looking back at the road.

YOUNG MAN: It is getting hot in here.

The Young Man is turning down the knob on the heater.

JULIE: Wait!

Julie is whipping her head around to look at the Young Man.

JULIE: WHERE I AM?!

YOUNG MAN: Huh-

JULIE: What's that? NO! YOU'RE! GET OUT OF MY MIND!!!!

Julie is combusting into fire that explores around her.

CUT TO:

EXT. CITY STREETS - NIGHT

Benny can't light up his cigarette because of the cold wind.

A brown car drives pass him, and then it blows up into fire and stops at a light pole.

Benny is turning around to look.

BENNY: Hol-y sh-it.
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FADE TO BLACK

Cu-Music: Sick Since's 'ConScience' is playing.

The Writer is in front of the laptop.

The Writer Block wants to rule my house.

FADE TO WHITE

BECOMES FLAMES

We can hear her endless scream.

Julie is in the fire.

CUT TO:

EXT. CITY SIDEWALK - NIGHT

The Young Man got blasted out of the passenger seat, but lucky for him the passenger door mystery opened when the event happened, and he is sitting up, rubbing the back of his head, and Benny is running to him.

BENNY: HOLY SHIT! ARE YOU ALL RIGHT?!!

YOUNG MAN: Yea-OH NO!

Benny hears her screams too.

BENNY: FUCK!!

The young man gets up, and smashes the passenger window, and drives in.

BENNY: WAIT,YOU CRAZY SON OF BITCH!!

ON THE OTHER SIDE OF THE BURNING CAR
the front door opens, and the young man is holding onto Julie as they fall out and hit the street.

The Young Man is dragging Julie away from the burning car.

He lies her back, and looks at Julie, and she is unharmed.

YOUNG MAN: No fucking way.

Benny has appeared behind the young man.

BENNY: Is she alive??! Hey! She...she doesn't have a burn on her!!!

The young man is touching side of Julie's face.

YOUNG MAN: Hey.

BENNY: Wait a minute. She looks familiar.

The young man is letting go of Julie.

BENNY: You know her, kid?

YOUNG MAN: Kid, huh.

He is standing up and faces Benny.

YOUNG MAN: I look that young to you?

BENNY: (put his hand on Young man's chest) Don't be stupid, whatever your fucking age is.

YOUNG MAN: I'm taking her to the hospital.

BENNY: No.

YOUNG MAN: Excuse me. But who are you?

BENNY: Look kid, what you need to know it took your whore ass mother nine months to carry you, but me (takes out his gun), boy, it only take my nine once to bury you.

The young man takes Benny's gun out of his hand and shoots Benny's dick off along with his balls too.

Benny is hopping up and down.

BENNY: "Stupid muthafucka!"

BLAM!

The young man has just shot Benny in the face.

Julie is waking up as the young man is turning to her.

ANU: You see what you got Anu doing for you?

JULIE: Whaat? Who the fuck are you?

ANU: First. (points at dead, lying Benny) Who the fuck is that? Second. Earlier, in the car. You literally became a bomb. What the fuck?

BENNY: "What the fuck indeed!"

Anu is whipping his head around, and Julie is frighten, as Benny gets up while cracking and popping, and he puts his heads on side of his face, and pushes in.

ANU: Fucking G, those shrooms took forever to work.
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FADE TO BLACK

YOUNG MAN'S VOICE: There is three steps.

FADE IN:

INT. LIVING ROOM - DAYLIGHT

We see a 10 year old Mexican girl, dark hair, dark skin, and she sits in Indian style, and her eyes are closed.

In front of her, a man with familiar back head, is sitting on a couch, and the girl is sitting on the light brown carpet.

THE WRITER: First. Focus. (he is pointing to his brow charka).

The girl is battling the darkness.

CU MUSIC: Sick Since's 'Sirius Starseeds' is playing loud over the screen.

THE WRITER: Second. Feel the yin and yang.

At the island the girl feels the backward and forward tug of the universe.

THE WRITER: Third. Become I am.

The camera is on the girl, and a rainbow light that circles and sparkles starts glowing from her forehead and then it over comes the screen.

FADE IN:

EXT. CITY STREETS - NIGHT

Anu is shooting his gun at Zombie Benny who is eating the bullets, and behind Anu we see Julie is walking backwards and then running away.

Zombie Benny is jigging over to Anu who just ran out of bullets.

Anu has just smack Zombie Benny's face with the butt of the gun.

CUT TO:

Julie is speedy Gonzales down the alleyway.

JULIE: WHY I AM NAKED??!!!

Julie runs into someone's chest that felt like a stone wall, and Julie bounces off of him and her poor butt hits the cold, wet gutter.

JULIE: OOOW!!! (she looks up at the Hispanic man) ASS-HOLE!!

HISPANIC MAN: Calm down, baby! You ran into me! But I will keep that fine ass of yours warm!

The Hispanic Man undo his zipper.

CU-JULIE

Julie 2 has appeared on Julie's side

JULIE 2: ooo! HE WANTS YOU TO SUCK HIM, JUL-IE! HE IS CALLING YOU A DOG, BITCH!

The Hispanic Man is stroking his dick.

JULIE 2: BOW WOW!

JULIE: (raising her fist) AAGGGH!!!

Julie hits his ball back, and his zipper caught hair, and he is screaming, falin backwards as Julie is pouncing on him, kneeing his balls as the zipper is pound into his flesh.

Julie is getting up, huffing and puffing, as the Hispanic Man is lying there crying.

Julie is looking around, and she goes right and looks around, and finds nothing. Now she is heading left, and steps over the man who mourns.

Julie is kicking his face twice.

JULIE: Dude, shut up.

She is looking around, and finds a beer can, and she is twisting and breaking it into half, and she is now heading back to the down man.

HISPANIC MAN: NO please don't.

JULIE: I said - SHUT UP!!!!

She is cutting the man's face.
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EXT. ALLEY - NIGHT

In the darkness of the alley we are hearing Julie's cries.

ANU'S VOICE: There you're.

the light pole that is above Julie's head is flicking on and then the light stays on, and it's not too bright, just enough as Anu walks out of the dark, holding a blanket, and he goes over to where Julie sits, and covers her.

JULIE: I remember you from the car.

ANU: Yeah, that be my ride. I'd pick you up. you remember that?

JULIE: I...I don't know. (she wants to start crying again) I think i'm dead!

ANU: Why would you say that?

JULIE: Because...

She just sits there in silence.

ANU: So you think i'm projection?

JULIE: a what?

ANU: A image you created.

JULIE: I...I DON'T KNOW ABOUT THAT.

ANU: Ok.

JULIE: ...HOW LONG HAVE I BEEN NAKED?

ANU: I don't know.

JULIE: You said you picked me up, right?

ANU: yeah.

JULIE: from what street?

ANU: Purple.

JULIE: ...

ANU: What is it?

JULIE: Can you take me back there?

ANU: In what?

JULIE: In your car!

ANU: Girl, you killed my ride.

JULIE: What you mean I killed your ride??

ANU: You don't remember?

JULIE: Are you serious?

ANU: At all?

JULIE: I'm naked here!!

ANU: Girl, you blew up my car.

JULIE: Are you making a fart joke?!?!?

ANU: Noo. You blew up. Fire came out of you. Literally.

JULIE: you re making a fart joke!!

ANU: No damn it. listen. You. explored into flames.

JULIE: ...bull shit

ANU: I would show you my ride but there is cops all over it right now.

JULIE: There is?

ANU: Yes.

JULIE: (getting up) Dude, we gotta go.
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JULIE: (walking) should we run?

ANU: No. The cops are not looking for us right now.

JULIE: How do you know?

ANU: (changing the subject) so why you think you are dead?

JULIE: ...you wouldn't understand.

ANU: do you mean that or "it will too damn crazy for you"?

JULIE: ...yeah.

ANU: They say talking about it is good but some nosey person could had said that as excuse and it caught on with other nosey people.

JULIE: Ok. (pause) This world...the one we're in...

ANU: uh huh.

JULIE: It doesn't feel real.

ANU: Feel.

JULIE: I guess I don't know how to explain it. (looks up ahead) Damn. That street is big and busy.

ANU: So?

JULIE: I'm naked here.

ANU: You got a blanket.

JULIE: Still. You're a guy. You know how other guys are when they see a girl like me looking like...nude.

ANU: I will protect you.

JULIE: I DON'T KNOW YOU. I'm sorry. But it's true. I'm thankful you've helped me but you could go crazy, rapist on me any second.

ANU: I'm not like that.

JULIE: I don't know that, Anu.

ANU: I know. Believe me I know.

JULIE: ...I can trust you?

ANU: Sure you can, Ladybug.

JULIE: Funny. Because of the blanket.

ANU: It looks good on you.

JULIE: Shut up. (takes a breath) this won't be last busy street. everyone heading to the movies by now.

ANU: Hopefully it's not family night

Julie is giving him a look.

Anu is taking her hand.

JULIE: I'm going to regret this.

ANU: Only if you care

They walk onto the street.

They reach the middle.

Julie is grabbing blanket to keep the middle closed.

They walk across and touch the alley's cement grounds with their shoes and bare feet.

ANU: See they didn't even notice.

JULIE: ...yeah, they didn't.

ANU: how far to purple street?

JULIE: You don't know?

ANU: I wasn't paying attention. I was cruising.

JULIE: From where?

ANU: Sky.

JULIE: Goddamn. Ok, well this is Lee and 8th so...three more blocks.

ANU: Awesome. Let's go. (pause) So who's going to be there when we get there?

JULIE: Are you asking if I got a man?

ANU: Hmm, I could had swore I said something different.

JULIE: Once we get there I'm have to ditch you.

ANU: So you do got a man?

JULIE: ...kinda of.
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CUT TO:

Cu-Music: Stranded's 'Iexist' is playing on the screen.

INT. HALLWAY (HOTEL)

His back to us, the Writer is walking with a red earphone that is plug to is ipod, and he is pushing a big bucket with four roller wheels, sheets and towels are inside the bucket.

He is using a card to open up a door (room 222), and he goes inside, bringing along the bucket.

INSIDE ROOM 222

The Writer is walking through the darkness and he goes over to the curtain, letting in the morning light that shines upon the screen as The Writer stands as the Dark Side of the Moon.

Transforming.

CUT TO:

EXT. ALLEY - NIGHT

Julie, cover by the blanket, and Anu are walking under the moon light in the alley.

ANU: If you're dead, that means you're living in a dream world.

CUT TO:

INT. BLACK TRUCK (MOVING) - DAY TIME

The Writer is moving his hands, arms to the music, and next to him his friend Stone Boy is behind the wheel.

EXT. BLACK TRUCK (MOVING) - DAY TIME

A rainbow dragon with wings is coming out of the sun and he breathes out fire.

JULIE'S VOICE: I'm not dead.

CUT TO:

EXT. ALLEY - NIGHT

JULIE: I'm just having a bad day. (she has stop walking) That's my alley.

ANU: What's wrong?

JULIE: It's quiet.

ANU: That's a bad thing?

JULIE: It means cops are around.

ANU: Maybe we should go else where.

JULIE: No. I gotta get home. Look, Anu, thank you for - everything but I gotta go on my own now.

ANU: Ok.

JULIE: Ok. (she looks at him, hugs him) Thank you.

She is departing away from him.

CUT TO:

EXT. BACK YARD (HOUSE) - NIGHT

She is almost to the back door.

It is funny Julie would called this place home.

Julie is grabbing the knob.

She is thankful the door is unlocked.

Julie is stepping inside the dark house.

INT. HOUSE

Can't see a thing.

JULIE'S VOICE: Hello? (Pause) Can't see shit! Hey guys are you--

She is screaming when Zombie Benny's face appears right in her face when the light bulb room is turn on.

Julie is throwing a fist but Zombie Benny catches it and he is squeezing her her hand now.

JULIE: Aaa (crushing her hand) AAAGGGH--!!

ZOMBIE BENNY: "I do, baby, I do."

JULIE: (tears running down her cheeks) "I do, baby, I do."

ZOMBIE BENNY: (squeezing harder) "I do love you."

JULIE: (balling tears) "I do lo-"STOPIT!!!

He is using his other hand to choke her without mercy.

Just before Julie passes out she think she sees her twin, giggling away as Zombie Benny grins his teeth at her.
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for this act = FADE IN & OUT - ON & OFF (LIGHT & DARK)

Julie is face up on the surface of the water, and all around her body are hands, gripping at her skin.

The hands are guiding her over to a rock and they push Julie up and hands beneath her shoes act as ground.

Julie is stepping onto a rock and in front is a red, and black hallway with doors on each sides.

FADE TO BLACK
FADE IN

INT. HALLWAY (HOTEL)

The writer is staring down at the end of the hallway, we see light coming through the window, with two, white see through curtains.

FADE TO BLACK
FADE IN

INT. RED WALLS, BLACK DOORS HALLWAY (UNKNOWN)

Julie is walking through the endless hallway.

Then she stops.

FADE TO BLACK
FADE IN

INT. HALLWAY (HOTEL)

The window doors bust open because of the cold, hard winds outside as the light outside starts to turn darker.

FADE IN
FADE BLACK

A zombie corpse that looks like skinny old hick man that got burned by acid opens up his mouth that holds blood inside and the blood flows out his mouth.

FADE IN
FADE BLACK

INT. HALLWAY (UNKNOWN)

All the black doors opened at the same, sudden moment, frightening Julie as she looks to the one on her right, and she sees herself getting screw in the ass by a man.

She is very confused.

FADE TO BLACK
FADE IN

She looks to her left, and she sees herself sucking and licking two dicks.

FADE TO BLACK

JULIE'S VOICE: NO!

FADE IN:

Julie is running through the hallway, and when she glimpse inside the rooms, she sees herself, the whore.

FADE TO BLACK

JULIE'S VOICE: God, help me!!

FADE IN:

She sees herself running towards her, and Julie stops, and she stops, and Julie looks at her, and she looks at her the opposite way.

FADE TO BLACK
FADE IN:

Julie is walking, slowly over to her, and she is walking, slowly over to her.

Julie is reaching out with her right hand and she is reaching out to her with her left hand.

FADE TO BLACK
FADE IN:

Julie is touching a mirror.

Julie is relieve. She lets out a deep breath but herself in the mirror doesn't, in fact she is looking at Julie.

FADE TO BLACK

JULIE'S VOICE: NO!

FADE IN:

JULIE 2: (smashing through the mirror and grabbing Julie with both hands) COME HERE!
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The Lotus on the green pad, floating on the dark waters, is opening up and Julie, naked, is lying down.

MAN'S VOICE: "Where I am?"

Julie is opening her eyes, and she is getting up, and looks.

She sees the man, standing on the water.

JULIE: Where I am?

She is looking around, and purple, small lotus spring out of the water and bloom on the surface, and they're illuminating too.

Julie is looking back at the man, hidden in the darkness.

JULIE: Anthony?

The man is grinning, very sinister.

MAN'S VOICE: Yes.

The man is stepping out of the darkness, it is Chris for a split second as he morphs into Anthony.

He is walking over to her.

JULIE: Is it really you?

He is sitting down next to her.

ANTHONY: (Chris's voice) Yes. It is me,-

Julie is morphing into Amanda.

ANTHONY: (Chris's voice) -,Amanda.

The scene changes into a green, tall, thin grass next to a flowing creek, and in the background there is a forest.

CHRIS'S VOICE: "We made it!"

JULIE: We made it!

She is jumping at Anthony, hugging him with her arms around his neck, and she kisses him with much passion.

AMANDA: You did it! You saved me! My Angel Baby!

Amanda is kissing him, sucking his tongue.

CHRIS'S VOICE: "I do, baby, I do!"

Amanda stops kissing him, and looks deeply into his eyes, and her lips are barely touching his.

AMANDA: I DO, BABY, I DO!

Amanda is lying back, and Anthony is climbing on top of her, and Amanda is kissing him again.

CHRIS'S VOICE: "I love you, baby, I do!"

Amanda is looking up at him.

AMANDA: I LOVE YOU, BABY, I DO!

Anthony is grinning at her, and then he reaches down, and puts his cock inside of her pussy hole, and then he starts pumping his hips in, and out.

Anthony is going down on her right tit, sucking, and biting as Julie is moaning loud.

JULIE: YESS, DON'T STOP!

Chris is moving his hips with hard thrust.

AMANDA: AHH...

Chris is wrapping his hand around Amanda's throat, gripping hard, and harder.

Amanda morphs into Nancy and sticks her tongue out.

CHRIS'S VOICE: "You know how I like it, baby, I do, oh, I do."

NANCY: YOU KNOW HOW I LIKE IT, BABY, I DOOOOOH-I DO!!!!!

Chris is fucking her harder.

Nancy has morph into Brown Eyez.

BROWN EYEZ: Fuuuuuuck!!!

Chris is laughing as he morphs into Anthony.

Anthony is flipping Brown Eyez over.

He doesn't give her time to get ready, and she loves that, and she screams loud as her head is yank back by PAYASO.

FADE TO BLACK

FADE IN:

PAYASO is slapping her ass back and forth with his back, and front hand as Brown Eyez morphs into Alyssa.

Alyssa's face smashes into the wall as PAYASO pounds her non stop.

ALYSSA: (broken, bloody nose) YESS!!!

FADE TO BLACK

We can hear Julie's voice in the background.

FADE IN:

Juiie, dressed as a hoochie, is walking with a hooker, and they are in the hotel's lobby, heading for the front doors that open automatizing.

We see the back of the Writer's head when the hoochies walk out of the hotel.

FADE TO BLACK

FADE IN:

Through the hotel window, the Writer sees the hoochies jump into a fancy car with two men.

FADE TO BLACK
FADE IN:

INT. HALLWAY (HOTEL)

Julie is walking, like she got fuck, over to her hotel door, and she opens it, and goes inside.

The Writer saw her just as he came out other room.

FADE TO BLACK
FADE IN:

A big, tall, fat Mexican is at Julie's hotel door, he isn't knocking, just waiting. Then the door opens and he goes inside.

FADE TO BLACK
FADE IN:

The big Mexican leaves.

FADE TO BLACK
FADE IN:

A skinny Mexican with a backwards cap is looking at his cell phone outside Julie's hotel room.

He waits, then the door is open from the inside, and he goes inside.


FADE TO BLACK
FADE IN:

INT. LIVING ROOM (HOUSE) - NIGHT

Julie, naked, cover in blood, is eating her ex pimp's heart who lies dead in front of her. She is sitting on the ground, biting into the still pumping heart as cops break down the door, and there is dozens of flash lights upon her, and many men yelling at her.

Julie is smiling at the camera.
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CUT TO:

MAN'S VOICE: Who is she?

INT. WHITE ROOM (POLICE STATION)

Juiie, wearing jail clothes, is handcuff to a chair. She is looking at the mirror, like she is a statue stone.

MAN 2'S VOICE: We don't know. But we found the bitch eating a vic's heart out.

WOMAN'S VOICE: Are you serious?

MAN 2'S VOICE: I was there. I saw the crazy bitch do it. Shit...I never seen anything like it.

MAN'S VOICE: Zombie H?

MAN 2'S VOICE: Curtis was thinking that too.

WOMAN'S VOICE: What's that?

MAN 2'S VOICE: Some crazy shit.

MAN'S VOICE: It is a cocktail drug, it could be anything, like oil. Whatever it takes for the user to get a high.

WOMAN'S VOICE: Why is it called Zombie H?

MAN'S VOICE: Zombie Heroin. The shit literally eats your flesh to the bone.

WOMAN'S VOICE: My God.

MAN 2'S VOICE: Where the fuck is Curtis?

WOMAN'S VOICE: Talking to a suspect.

MAN 2'S VOICE: A suspect??

WOMAN'S VOICE: A young man came in, claiming the girl is innocent.

MAN 2'S VOICE: Bullshit.

MAN'S VOICE: He must be her boyfriend.

MAN 2'S VOICE: Maybe.

WOMAN'S VOICE: That's why Curtis is talking to him. No one knows about the murders, not even the press.

MAN 2'S VOICE: How the fuck we manage that?

MAN'S VOICE: Patriot act.

Julie is smiling.

WOMAN'S VOICE: She can see us!

MAN'S VOICE: No, no.

MAN 2'S VOICE: Bitch watches cop shows. She knows it is a two way mirror.

Julie tips her head to the side.

JULIE: I can hear you too.

MAN 2'S VOICE: What the fuck-

CUT TO:

INT. GREY ROOM (POLICE STATION)

Anu is sitting on a chair with a table in front of him, and the cowboy cop named Curtis got his dirty boots up on the table in Anu's face.

Pugly is sitting next to Curtis.

CURTIS: SO (sniffs loud/coughs, splits out wet, tar) you mind telling me how the fuck you know the bitch.

PUGLY: Sir...

CURTIS: SHE IS SICK, NASTY BITCH. FUCK HER!

ANU: I know her because I'm her Angel Baby.

Curtis splits on the table, in front of Anu.

CURTIS: Great! (looks at fat cop) Cupid killers!

He takes his boots off the table, gets up, and walks behind Anu.

CURTIS: Did you kill those men too, boy?

ANU: \(laughs)

CURTIS: What so funny? You remembering what you did huh? Yeah.

ANU: You know I remember you.

CURTIS: I've busted you before?

ANU: : Naw, I kicked your balls in.

CURTIS: The fuck you say-

ANU: You Christian man.

CURTIS: Yes I am, Jesus is my Lord and savior.

ANU: so you read the bible.

CURTIS: Of course.

ANU: Good. So you're familiar with three twenty-two?

CURTIS: SAY What?
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ANU: Genesis 3:22 - And the Elohim said, Behold, the man is become as one of us, to know good and evil: and now, lest he put forth his hand, and take also of the tree of life, and eat, and live for ever.

CURTIS: Huh uh.

ANU: Colossians 3:22 - Slaves, obey in everything those who are your earthly masters, not by way of eye-service, as people-pleasers, but with sincerity of heart, fearing the Lord.

Curtis just blank stares at him.

ANU: Master and the Slave. The Lion and the sheep.

CURTIS: Oh great he's anarchist.

ANU: It's moment of the split within a human being, the "schizoid nature."

CURTIS: So going insanity plead?

ANU: It happened to her. And she created empty bodies without souls because of it.

CURTIS: (slams Anu's face onto the table) DID YOU KILLED THOSE PEOPLE?!?!

PUGLY: Sir...

CURTIS; HE HAD A HORSE FLY ON THE BACK OF HIS HEAD. IT LOOK LIKE IT WAS GOING TO BITE HIM.

Anu splits out his broken tooth.

ANU: I've tried to find her. But when I came looking for her I found her in pieces, scatter throughout the population.

PUGLY: What do you mean in pieces?

ANU: Her light to her spirit.

CURTIS: ENOUGH!!! (looks at Anu) Did you help her killed those men>

ANU: Yes and no.

CURTIS: He admitted it!

ANU: But the girl I know didn't do those murders.

PUGLY: Her split personality did it?

ANU: Stop asking question and listen. Julie isn't lock up in that room you got her in. That someone else. Someone you don't want to be locked up with.

PUGLY: Who is that person? And where is Julie?

ANU: Julie is where we wake up to after we sleep/die.

CURTIS: What is god blazer cow toe nail horse shit you're splitting out, boy?

ANU: The person you got locked up. She is a beautiful nightmare. And if I was you. I would start running right now.
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Curtis is laughing hard, slapping his knee, and then lets out a big fart.

PUGLY: Sir.

CURTIS: IT'S HORSE SHIT, PUGLY, HORSE SH-

BOOOM!!!

CURTIS: WHAT THE SAND HILL SHIT?!?!

Curtis is hurrying out of the room.

Pugly gets up and walks over to handcuffed Anu, strapped to a sitting chair. Anu is whispering softy.

PUGLY: (Chris's voice) "You made it sound like it was your all your plan." (crack little bones in the fingers as Pugly reaches for his strapped gun) "If that's true..." (elbow cracks/points the weapon at Anu's left side face)"...I'm just have to send up the next river already."

Anu has stop whispering.

BOOOM!!!

ANU: (looks at Pugly) We're not doing that anymore, Chris. I know what is happening now.

Anu is breaking the cuffs from the chair, he stands up.

PUGLY: (Chris's voice) "You just enter this realm how did you already-FUCK IT."

cracking bones as the hammer but before the trigger is pulled back.

BOOOM!!!

The ceiling has caved in on them.

CUT TO:

BLACK SCREEN

We can hear hard, angry breathing.

A light comes on, revealing Chris's face, very upset expression.

CUT TO:

INT. GREY ROOM (POLICE STATION)

Anu has rises out of the rubble that should has crushed him, but he doesn't have a mark on himself.

Anu looks over at Curtis who had opened the door when Anu rose, and his jaw is dropped, and he is frozen at the doorway.

Anu is walking over to him, and grabs by the throat with one hand, and Anu picks him up into the hallway and slams Curtis against the wall, holding him there.

CURTIS: (choking) WHO ARE YOU?!?!

Anu smiles at him and let's him free.

ANU: Go.

Curtis shits his pants but doesn't stop him from running like a track star out of that hallway and to a door that lead to a exit.

Anu is walking towards the screams, the black smoke, and on the walls are the ashes of Julie's victims.

Anu is reaching a door that bust open, and woman, on fire, is running out, but she doesn't get far as she falls the floor, mourning loudly until it's silent. Anu walks by her as her body cracks, boil and pop, smoke rising from her body.

Anu walks through the door and enters the white room that is now cover in black ashes.

Anu is inside the room, and he looks up, and the ceiling is gone as it rain ashes on him.
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INT. CHRIS' PENT HOUSE - NIGHT

The red elevator's door opens, and out comes Chris with four members of local gang he employs to cause havoc for local business owners.

CHRIS: (walking over to his leather sofa where two young women are eating each other) -I brought you all here because you four-are the answer to my question.

TALL GANGSTER: Ain't we always.

CHRIS: (stops in front of the couch) You see these fine ass lovely bitches?

FAT GANGSTER: Been watching the whole time.

CHRIS: They're are not like you four. They've a soul.

CHRISTIAN CROSS GANGSTER: Yo man everybody got a soul.

CHRIS: You sure about that, Real Deal?

REAL DEAL: ...I pray to Jesus.

CHRIS: (walks over to him) Where you think your soul is, Real-Deal?

REAL DEAL: ...in my heart.

CHRIS: In your heart.

REAL DEAL: (cracks a smile) Yeah man.

CHRIS: Ok.

Chris slams his fist into RD's chest and blood guts out like flower petals, breakin' bone.

RD is in shock.

CHRIS: Well, well well look at that! (in RD' face) No heart.

RD: no-no-no

CHRIS: Heart. No heart. (Chris' breath in RD's face) At all.

Rd falls backwards.

The other three are just standing there, they want to run away badly, but they can't, and just look at Chris who turns to them.

CHRIS: Gentlemen. Torture and rape these two bitches-

FAT GANGSTER: My ass hurts.

CHRIS: Hey asshole! Torture nd rape these two bitches and don't forget to empty all your cum into their butthole, not their pussy, muthafuckas, their asshole. Understand?

TALL GANGSTER: What happened to RD?

CHRIS: (looking up) that damn whore is fucking shit up.

Chris walks over to Tall Gangster and bitch slaps him hard.

CHRIS: Did you hear what said?

TALL GANGSTER: Don't gotta push.

Tall gangster is going over to the girls, he grabs one by the hair, pushing her head back, and he opens his zipper and shoves his dick into her mouth.

The other two gangsters go over to join him.

Chris is smiling.
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CUT TO:

Cu-Music: Sick Since - Matrix of Evil is playing over the screen.

EXT. BRIGHT SUN WITH PINK FLOWER PETALS
two white chemtrails with two lines making a pyramid, and the sun is the eye of Ra.

CUT TO: The Writer is looking up at it.

CUT BACK TO THE SUN
getting brighter as it breathes fire
FADE TO WHITE

CUT TO:

CU-JULIE
her eyes closed, her hands to the side of her head, and she is hurting as she floats steadily high up in the dark skies that begins to rumble and thunder.

All around her men and women come, taking off the ground and before they reach her they bust into white hot flames and fall as ashes. Thousands are killed and the screams do not stop.

CUT TO:

CU-ANU
he is looking up at her.

CUT TO:

CU-JULIE: (CRYING) WHY?!? (she is bringing more people to her to burn) WHY?!?!

CUT BACK TO:

ANU: (looking up) What is happening to her?

FADE TO WHITE

MAN'S VOICE: She is seeing the truth through the eyes of murderers.

FADE IN:

CU-THE BACK OF THE WRITER'S HEAD.

CU-THE SKY

A horse chemclouds appears underneath the eye.

MAN'S VOICE: The war is on.

CUT TO:

INT. HOTEL BEDROOM - DAY

Julie is setting up quickly from her bed, her sweat wet the bed.

MAN'S VOICE: Prepare.

JULIE: WHO SAID THAT?!?!

She woke up her cousin, Rosa, lying in the next bed that is closer to the window.

ROSA: (scared) Julie! What's wrong?!

JULIE: There is someone in our room!

ROSA: What? Are you serious?

JULIE: I'm going to cry!

ROSA: Calm the fuck down!

Rosa get up quickly and opens the curtains.

Julie's head is underneath the blanket.

Rosa is walking across the room, passed Julie's bed.

ROSA: There is no one here.

She opens the bathroom door and goes inside.

ROSA'S VOICE: Nope! No one here - "AT ALL!"
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CU-JULIE in the MIRROR

Words appeared on the mirror

HEAVEN IS ON FIRE

CUT TO:

CU-JULIE'S BACKSIDE

She is wearing a green tank top with black sweat shorts. Julie is turning on the sink, and cups the water with both hands and splashes her face.

CU-JULIE IN THE MIRROR
when she opens her eyes she sees a shadow man with long brim hat and coat.

Julie screams loud as she turns around.


CU-JULIE FRONT SIDE

She sees no one is there but behind in the mirror we see the Shadow Man who has no eyes, no nose, no ears, no mouth, he is what I say, a SHADOW.

PAN BACK CAMERA SHOT

Julie is walking over the shower curtains, she pulls them to the side, and there is no one there.

She doesn't know what to think.

Suddenly the bathroom door is opened, in comes Rosa, butt naked.

ROSA: Come on, Julie, we gotta get ready.

Rosa steps into the bathroom, and closes the curtain, and turns out the hot shower.

Julie is slowly turning around, and looks at the mirror, and she sees herself.

ROSA: (off screen) ARE YOU GETTING IN OR WHAT?!

CUT TO:

CU-SERIES OF SCENES OF JULIE & ROSA GETTING READY
inside their hotel room.

CUT TO:

EXT. HOTEL PARKING LOT - SUNNY DAY

His face is down as he carries a big bucket of trash on his back while his right hand holds onto the top of the bucket.

CU-HOTEL WINDOW ON THE THIRD FLOOR (LEFT SIDE)

Julie is watching The Writer.

Down below a big black truck is pulling into the hotel's front.

CUT TO:

INT. HOTEL ROOM 320

JULIE: He's here.

ROSA: (on the bed/lotioning her expose legs and hips side) Right on time! Oooh he is anxious for us, girl!

Rosa is getting off the bed as Julie goes over to her.

Rosa gives Julie a kiss.

ROSA: You ready?

JULIE: Shit u know it!

CUT TO:

INT. MUSIC CITY MALL

CU-MUSIC: Gwen Stefani - Luxurious ft Slim Thug is playing loud over the screen.

Rosa and Julie are walking in front of the Trick, who is carrying many shopping bags, and his Trick Friend is doing the same thing.

MAN'S VOICE: COME AND SLEEP WITH THE DEVIL.

The girls point at the store, they go inside, they grab what they want, and don't pay as the Trick and his Trick Friends max out cards they hid from their wives.

The girls are inside the Secret, trying out sexual dresses and underwears for their Tricks' eyes.

They're inside a white room with a lot of females, and the girls are getting nails done, above and below, and even wax for the Tricks, back and front, even the Tricks have joined the women.

The shopping spree continues in the aisles of the mall, where white Indians are selling over price gold, silver and jewels.

But jewelry shopping doesn't stop there. They go into open rooms where diamonds are lined up in glass casings.

Julie stares a pink diamond that connected to necklance of same color.

The Trick is going to her, he touches and squeezes her butt cheek, and leans down to whisper into her ear.

TRICK: (whispering) You want it?

She turns her head and looks at him

TRICK: What will you do for it?

CUT TO:

Music stops, all we hear is Julie in pain.

JULIE: (wearing the necklance) AAH!!

On a bed, she rides the Trick's Friend, from the back side Rosa is fisting Julie's black hole sun with a dildo. The Trick, butt naked, is walking over to the bed.

TRICK: Come here, Julie.

Julie moans out loud as Rosa removes the dildo.

Julie can't lift herself off the Trick's friend.

The Trick goes over to her and grabs fist hair and throws Julie on the floor.

ROSA: Easy, dude.

The Trick's friend has hurried off the bed, and wraps head around Rosa's throat, and pushes her up against the wall.

He is Kissing her head then he throws onto the bed, and tosses her around, and fucks her butthole.

TRICK: (touches her necklance) This is what you wanted.

JULIE: Yes. (looks at him) I do, baby, I want you so bad.

TRICK: (stroking his dick) How bad, bitch? Tell me. Hmm? Tell me.

She is crawling hands and knees over to him.

JULIE: (sitting up on her knees) Oh daddy! (leans in, sucks his dickhead) So bad!

He likes it. A lot. So much he becomes a beast. The Trick puts hand on back of her and forces Julie to choke it in.

He is rough about it and Julie panics and tries to pull away. The Trick likes that. He makes her go faster.

She muffing sounds as the Trick goes "AHHHHH!" but he doesn't stop as Julie tries to pull away but the Trick holds her head with both hands as soon he takes piss into her mouth.

The Trick Friend laughs as Rosa looks down on her friend as she shallows the cum and piss down her throat, and the Trick won't stop til his dick finally loses it strength in blood. He let's go of her and Julie is quick to pull away.

She gets up and hurries to the bathroom, and we hear her throwing up.

The Tricks are laughing.

The Trick looks over at Rosa with her face pressed against the bed sheets.

TRICK: You want a taste too, bitch?

ROSA: AH YES DADDY BRING IT HERE!!

TRICK FRIEND: FUCK YEAH!!

CUT TO:

BATHROOM

Julie is in the shower, with her mouth open as water rains down on her face.

Then she splits out the water and looks down at the drain, wishing she could follow her tears hidden in the rain.

Cu-THE MIRROR
The shadow is dispersing until Anu is revealed
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FADE TO BLACK

CHUCK: (SIGHS)

FADE IN ON BRIGHT TELEVISION SCREEN
on top of a big, black dresser.

CHUCK: ...If I known it was real,-

CU-JULIE
lying on the bed inside the dark room. She is alone.

Julie is munching on chocolate square candies.

CHUCK'S VOICE: ...I would have done another pass.

JULIE: What is he talking about?

DEAN'S VOICE: Chuck, you're not a God!

JULIE: (eating a candy) Mok.

SAM'S VOICE: We think you're probably just psychic.

JULIE: (eating a candy) He's regular oh Celo. Uh huh-mm...

CHUCK'S VOICE: No.

There is couple knocks at the door.

JULIE: -mHmm?

CHUCK'S VOICE: If I were psychic, (Julie is getting off the bed) you think I'd be writing??

Julie is walking over to the door, next to the bathroom.

She looks into the keyhole.

CHUCK'S VOICE: WRITING IS HARD!

JULIE: Yeah?

YOUNG MAN'S VOICE: House keeping. I'm here to pick up dirty towels.

JULIE: Oh. Um Hold on.

MAN'S VOICE: Ok.

Julie is turning to the left, and opens the door, flipping on light switches before she enters the bathroom.

She is naked. Quickly she puts on her bathing swim suit, and after that kneels over to pick up the wet towels. There's one with blood on it, hers. She tosses that one into the tub.

Julie heads back to the front door, and open it slowly...

CU-HALLWAY

From his backside as he turns around when he hears the door opened.

When he sees Julie is hiding herself behind the door, the man turns his head away as his eyes look to the dark morning window near by, and his arms are reaching and his hands take the dirty towels from her.

MAN'S VOICE: Thank you.

He doesn't see her smile.

She isn't sure if he is being gentleman or just shy.
One thing for sure, she has never seen a man do that before.

Julie closes the door as young man walks away with the big, rolling bucket.
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CU-MUSIC: 5th Element - Illin Spree

CUT TO:

INT. HOTEL HALLWAY

The scene moves like a machine, stop and go motions.

Men of all ages, weight, height appear at door 303.

CUT TO:

continue machine like shop scenes.

INT. ROOM 303 (HOTEL)

Julie has sex in the bathroom, there is a lazy boy green/yellow chair on top of the bathtub. Julie is sitting on that chair in a kinky angels suit the sick headed men like her to wear.

Scenes cut with different men of all ages and sizes with Julie.

Inside her the Red Queen screams to be free from the madness.

CUT TO:

In the room with flat television on top of big black dresser there is two beds, and Rosa is a bitch on the bed nearest to the window that is shut to corporation outside with the Red Dragon logo. Rosa's cousin Maya is on the bed nearest to the front door.

CUT TO:

INT. HALLWAY (HOTEL)

From his back side.
The Writer looks on, in sadness.
His head goes down and turns right, and he heads straight into the elevator.

INSIDE THE ELEVATOR
From the top looking down camera view

The Writer is inside the moving downward slow elevator as we hear Julie 2's laughter over take the music in the scene.

FADE TO BLACK

Short, quick knocks on wood.

MAN'S VOICE: House keeping.

(silence)

more quick knocks.

MAN'S VOICE: Hello?

(sounds of metal clanging, INSERT noise, UNLOCK sound)

FADE IN:

DOOR IS OPENING
The Writer, from his backside, is opening the door.

MAN'S VOICE: Hello? House keeping.

It is dark inside the room.

He goes right, open the door, and flips on one light switch.

INSIDE BATHROOM

It is a mess, make up bags, make up box, iron on white wash towel by the sink, and clothes underneath, but the clothes are thongs, sexy angel suits, and one suit he had no idea what the hell is for, and he looks up towels by sink that lay on the floor, and grabs ones off the toilet by more sexy underwears. He look right and sees the lazy boy chair in the bathtub.

MAN'S VOICE: What the fuck?

He touches it.

MAN'S VOICE: It's not wet.

He looks around it, there is take out box with half eaten pizza, and by the fallen shower head a plastic wrapped chocolate cookie, and inside the tub soda and beer bottles.

He is confused.

MAN'S VOICE: I am.

Come on, you know what happened.

MAN'S VOICE: Yeah I know.

JULIE'S VOICE: Hey.

The Writer turns right and Julie, in sexy red outfit, stands by the doorway. She looks very hang over.

JULIE: Sorry. I didn't hear you.

MAN'S VOICE: You all right.

JULIE: (smiles) Yeah. Got a headache.

MAN'S VOICE: Rub right here. (touches his head) the soft spot.

JULIE: Yeah. I got more towels over here.

She is turning around, walks out and goes right.

He is following her.

CU-2 BEDS ROOM

JULIE: Can you take the sheets too?

MAN'S VOICE: It be awhile before you get new ones.

JULIE: it's ok.

MAN'S VOICE: Yeah, I will take them away right now.

JULIE: (smiles) Thank you.

The Writer is beginning to strip the bed by the door.

JULIE: Does it work?

He is looking at her.

MAN'S VOICE: Huh?

JULIE: That (rubs her finger on her head) thing you said earlier.

MAN'S VOICE: Yeah. If you want, I can show you.

JULIE:...um...i'm sorry um yeah sure why not?
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On the stripped bed Julie sits with The Writer next to her.

MAN'S VOICE: Where does it hurt?

She touches the back of her neck.

JULIE'S VOICE: (moving her hair over her left shoulder) Right here.

MAN'S VOICE: Ok.

He places his right hand on her neck, and is finger and bottom palm rubs.

JULIE'S VOICE: Oh wow...oooo yeah...

He goes down with his thumb.

JULIE'S VOICE: Ahh!

MAN'S VOICE: I'm sorry.

JULIE'S VOICE: No! You're okay. Don't stop...oooh

He moves up her back.

JULIE'S VOICE: (satisfied voice) ah that feels so good...don't stop ahh don't stop...

He puts both his hands on her shoulders by her neck, and she is letting loose, dropping all the stress that held back her POWER.

Julie is turning her head slowly, looking up at him with her eyes.

He leans in and kiss her.

He kisses her softy with passion, like she is his one and only.

She kisses him back the same, with love. A feeling no money can buy. Because she is not lesser than him.

She is his equal.

a QUEEN.

She feels fire slowly moving up her back like a spinal up stairs til it reaches her neck and red and yellow flames wings grow, glow out.

But the fire goes out when she stops.

JULIE: wow...ok...(she smiles)...um (looks at him again) don't you gotta work?

It is Anu next to her.

ANU: (smiles back) Yeah.

JULIE: (smiles) Ok.

He gets up.

ANU: You've a good day.

JULIE: (smiling) you too.

Anu is walking away with sheet buddle in his hands.

MAN'S VOICE: Stay safe.

He opens the door.

JULIE: Thank you.

He has walked out.

JULIE: Wow. What just happened?

She lies back on the bed.

She closes her eyes as we listen to her breathing.

FADE TO BLACK

JULIE'S VOICE: Ah feels so good and sleepy. (yawns loud)

Her breathing gets louder and louder as black screen bumps like dark waters under the moon light, the blackness fades out as the water becomes a mirror for Julie's dreams.

INSIDE THE DREAM

Julie is in a white dress.

It is her wedding.

But she doesn't know who she is marrying.

She feels two men. But she can't see him.

Her cousin Lori Terronez appears.

LORI: Marry him girl! He is the one for you!

But older man's voice yells out NO.

Julie is turning around.

JULIE: TIO?

JULIE'S TIO: Don't married him Julie. Marry Chris.

JULIE: Chris.

JULIE'S TIO: I do.

JULIE: I-

JULIE'S TIO: Do.

JULIE: I-

ANU'S VOICE: Julie.

CUT TO:

Julie is waking up on the bed as Rosa and Maya walk into the hotel room.
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CU-MUSIC: ATMA - Marie Mi Amore is playing over the screen.

CUT TO:

CU-JULIE'S FACE
a diamond rock sparkles color lights on her face.

CHRIS' VOICE: It is beautiful just like you.

PAN BACK CAMERA SHOT CUT TO:

Julie stands up straight, and smiles at the tall Asian man in the trench coat, and she blushes her hair back.

ASIAN MAN: It belongs on your finger.

JULIE: What are you trying to say?

ASIAN MAN: I can...I can become your one and only. I've talk to your cousin-

JULIE: Yeah, what he say?

He doesn't respond.

JULIE: (walking away) Come on, what did he say?

ASIAN MAN: (following her) He said it is up to you.

JULIE: (smiling) Is it? (stops to look at necklance) sounds like you're lying to me.

ASIAN MAN: You will like Hong Kong.

JULIE: I don't like smell of Chinese restaurants. (to the lady) May I see that one? Thank you.

ASIAN MAN: Why? Why would you say such a thing?

JULIE: Would you?

He is taking the neck lace while Julie holds her hair to the side.

JULIE: Look-

He puts the necklace around her neck.

JULIE: I know I'm asshole.

ASIAN MAN: No you're not. You're afraid.

She is twirling around, smiles at the tall man.

JULIE: Well?

ASIAN MAN: Heaven.

JULIE: That's it?

ASIAN MAN: I'm sorry.

JULIE: Aw forget it.

She is placing her hand on his groin.

JULIE: Just buy me this (touches her necklace) and I will (softy) fuck this. (rubs his dick)

ASIAN MAN: Okay!

Julie laughs.

JULIE: Shall we go back to the hotel? yeah!

ASIAN MAN: Wouldn't you rather go to my place?

JULIE: Noo, let's go hotel.

She takes his arm and they're walking out of the store (mall).

ASIAN MAN: How much money would it take?

JULIE: Shhh! enough about that, daddy.

CUT TO:

INT. HALLWAY (HOTEL)

Room 316 is opening, and the Asian Man is stepping out, and he is walking passed Anu, music headphones on his ears, who is vacuuming the floor. Anu is singing a song as Asian Man appears in Anu's view.

The tall man is stopping at the elevator and its down arrow button that light up red.

Asian Man is looking at Anu.

ANU: Hello?

ASIAN MAN: Hello.

Anu is turning off the machine.

ANU: Where are you coming from?

Asian man is pointing down the hallway.

ASIAN MAN: I was visiting my girlfriend.

ANU: You mean the escorts?

ASIAN MAN: No.

ANU: Where again?

ASIAN MAN: (points) There.

ANU: Yeah that is where escorts stay out.

ASIAN MAN: ...do many men visit her?

Anu laughs quietly and turns away.

ASIAN MAN: She doesn't trust any one.

The elevator door opens.

ANU: uh huh.

ASIAN MAN: (steps in) I told her she can't be like that.

ANU: That's her business, dude.

ASIAN MAN: (holds the door) I should tell her I love her.

Anu looks up and sees Julie press against the wall, hiding, to Anu's right is the elevator.

ASIAN MAN: Should I?

Julie is shaking her head.

ANU: (looks at him) At a hotel? Naw man. Do it...do it at better place.

Asian man nods his head.

ASIAN MAN: Right. (let's go of the door) Ok.

The door closed.

ANU: Ok.

Julie is stepping away from the wall.

ANU: Heading to the machine?

JULIE: Yeah. Y'all still got yellow M & M's?

ANU: I don't know.

JULIE: Ok. (Pause) I'm take the stairs. (looks at him) You're vacuuming. You're about to get off?

ANU: ...Yeah.

JULIE: You wanna hang out after work?

ANU: What do you wanna do?

JULIE: ...surprise me.

ANU: Girl...

JULIE: What?

ANU: I'm not going to buy you. I do admire your beauty but I don't see you like that.

JULIE: Like what??

ANU: Like property.

JULIE: I am no one property.

ANU: I'm not trying to be rude.

JULIE: (laughs) Oh yeah?

ANU: But I know what you do.

Her smile fades away.

ANU: I knew it the first time I saw you.

JULIE: I am a massage th-

ANU: No, you're not.

JULIE: dude, you don't know me!

ANU: You're right. I don't know if someone is forcing you to do it. If someone is. Please tell me.

JULIE: Wh-what? No one is making me do anything I don't want to do!

ANU: You don't have to lie to me.

JULIE: You're crazy! Look, just stay the hell away from me!
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CUT TO:

EXT. PARKING LOT (HOTEL) - DAY

The sun have been block out by the sand storm that blow through the area.

Anu is carrying two trash buckets on his back, but he stops before reaching the dumpsters.

He sees them. Many people. They're dead people

They look back at him as he does the same with them.

One of them, a boy is pointing up to the sky.

Anu looks up and sees a eye of a storm get bigger.

Alarm clock goes off.

CUT TO:

INT. ROOM 320 (HOTEL) - DAY

Julie is awaken by alarm, she turns off the alarm on her cell phone on the dresser, between the two beds.

Next to her is Maya, asleep underneath the blankets.

Rosa is no where to be found.

CUT BACK TO:

Anu is standing in front of the dead crowd.

ANU: Who are you? What do you want?

They tell him through feelings he unlocks through his heart.

ANU: Why are you bothering tell me about it? I've done my part. I warned them. I couldn't saved them. End of story.

Anu is walking through the crowd to reach the dumpster.

ANU: Now leave me alone about it.

Anu feels the old man talking to him.

ANU: Why? (dumping one bucket)

He looks to the old man.

ANU: Tell me why.

The old man is looking at him.

ANU: Goddamn it. Why me?

The old lady is speaking to Anu now.

Anu turns to speak to her.

ANU: She isn't the Red Queen. She is just...a clone. Nothing more.

The young man speaks.

ANU: No, I'm not. There is no...she doesn't exist. I made her up. (dumps other trash) I'm just crazy asshole.

The young boy is walking up to Anu, looks up at him.

ANU: I will do what I can for those who are under my shield. But I can't help the rest.

Old man speaks.

ANU: She isn't the dark hair girl in my dreams!!!

Anu is looking at them all.

ANU: She is just like the rest of them. A damn whore ass lying zombie! That's all. And I'm who you think I am.

The Writer appears as Anu fades.

ANU: I'm exactly what they said I am. (Pause) Crazy. Ugly. Pathetic.

CUT TO:

CU-HOTEL WINDOW

Maya is looking out the window.

MAYA: That guy who works here is talking to himself.

JULIE'S VOICE: Huh?

Julie appears at the window.

The Writer, carrying two buckets, is walking back towards the Hotel.

MAYA: He looks depressed.

JULIE: ...yeah he does.
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