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Old 05-14-2013
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Default M. Corleone & T. Hagen

Camino y mi corazon palpita
Hago, pero no siento ser parte de la vida
Parece el principio del Mago de Oz
Todo lo veo blanco y negro, el tequila quita la toz
No, a quien le miento
Te extraño, y siento bastante miedo
Asi de simple, hermano, odio no tenerte a mi lado
Nefasta es la idea, me encuentro arrodillado
Aquel dia en el que partiste perdi mi mejor mitad
Una gran nostalgia toma control de mi cuerpo y alma
Llanto es piropo, y el silencio no logra traerme calma
80 grados de alcohol comprobado
Doble, y seco el mezcal como soliamos tomarlo
Pero que quede algo bien claro
Que no tomo para acordarme, pero tomo y me acuerdo
Pronuncio tu nombre al abismo, y canto contigo ..
"Ahora ya caminas lerdo " ....
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WTF does this have to do with the Godfather..???

Man.. You should have your man card taken away for using the names of Mr's Corleone and Hagen in asociation with your girly crying...

Nice poem BTW
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WTF does this have to do with the Godfather..???

Man.. You should have your man card taken away for using the names of Mr's Corleone and Hagen in asociation with your girly crying...

Nice poem BTW
I remembered Michael telling Tom he was like brother to him once, sense they grew up together and whatnot .. this reminded me of their relationship, before Mike became Godfather and all ..

Im a man with or without a card

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I dint know what the title meant! But I likes the words of the poem.
Michael Corleone and Tom Hagen are both characters from The Godfather .. they grow up together, and Tom becomes his father's counsel, and later Michael's when he himself becomes Godfather ... their first relationship reminded me of this writing thats all ... and thank you much
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Should be called Fredo because it needs to be dumped in the lake.
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I liked your poem.
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I liked your poem.
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