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Old 05-09-2004
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Default Happy Mothers Day Abuela

Ain't no other way up on mother's day.
To speak on what i say, To beg God and to Pray.
It was shortly before Christmas day When she passed away.
Dang abuela why'd you go away, Why didn't you stay.
To be up in the stands watch me become a man, on graduation day.

Damn!

You lived with us for 12 years while you were sick,
And now i'm crying 12 tears, 'cause your missed
I hope and i pray as i stand at your grave,
It's been 5 months this may And i gave...
All i could to be good
I'm hurting even though i knew this would happen
But i'm asking Why did it have to happen when it happened.

You took her before her son arrived to say goodbye
You know he tried I watched him cry.
Don't say that it was better this way.
One more day, you delt the cards that were played!
Damn you for taking back what i wasn't ready to give.
But i ask, Will she be the angel for my Kids.
One day someday a few years over
Will she watch after my family , looking over my shoulder?
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Dang Celestino! Sorry for your loss. I wish you and your family luck and hope things get better.

I could feel your pain through your writing. You truly are a true poet.
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thanx... I thought i was over it till i saw her grave today and i just felt that i had to say or do something . it was eating at me.
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sry to hear about ur loss too, celestino. and its good let out wut ur feeling.....keep ur head up mijo.
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That was tight carnal...




This is some deep rhymings right here.




Good work & God bless...
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tanx..just wrote what i felt
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tanx..just wrote what i felt


And that's what set's it apart... Those lines come straight outta the corazon
and you can feel that when you read them...


Once again...


Mad props.
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