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Old 06-22-2004
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Default ~Another Homie Gone~RIP~Low Baby~

I can稚 focus
I知 straining to see
Close my eyes & open my mind lyrically
The questions circling in my head
Why oh Why is another homie dead?
Life痴 predicament is death
The only certainty left
I guess
But it hurts
And the pain is so intense
I知 tired
Of all this fuken violence
Another mother left
With a broken heart
That値l never mend
I知 angered, I知 heated, they took his life for no reason,
A beating, but maybe if I would have made him come kick it sooner,
or I should have told him this or I could have done that
cuz I was up waiting for him to roll through and light a blunt
and I front, and keep up the positive thinking
but in reality I知 sinking, unable to breath
and this guilt is haunting me
I feel no end to my misery
The darkness of this constant light
Is so close I feel I知 losing my sight
I might- not make it to tomorrow
And when it痴 over-it痴 just another day of sorrow..

RIP Lorenzo Brown aka LowBaby
I lost another homie Saturday night to violence..

It still doesn't seem real,
until
I see him in the casket
and hear his Mother's cries....

messed up world
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Nice drop...you have talent girl!

Sorry to hear about your friend. It's a sad thing, my condolences go out to you and his family.
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That was sweet grl, My sympathy goes out to u & his family. Keep ur head up & pray that u will reunite.
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Old 06-22-2004
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Thanks chicas, i really appreciate it.
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WHOA....DAMNZ GURL. THAT WAS VERY NICE. IT MADE ME CRY ON THE REALZ, NO LIE. WELL WHAT CAN I TELL U. YEAH THIS IS A FUCCED UP WORLD AND I KNOW HOW UR FEELING RIGHT NOW. I RECENTLY LOST ONE OF MY HOMEBOYS TOO. U FEEL LIKE SHIT HUH!?....LIKE UR DREAMING OR SHOULD I SAY, HAVING A NIGHTMARE. THATS THE WAY I FELT AND STILL FEEL @ TIMES. JUST NO THAT HE'S IN A BETTER PLACE LIVING A BETTER LYFE...WATCHING AFTER YOU & EVERY1 HE LOVES. I KNOW ITS GONNA BE HARD TO ACCEPT THE FACT THAT HE'S GONE..BUT WE ALL HAVE TO GO..IM VERY SORRY FOR UR LOSS HOMEGURL..AND KNOW THAT IM HERE FOR YOU IF U EVER NEED SUM1 TO TALK TO.

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Old 06-22-2004
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thanks homegirl,
i'm okay though, i've lost 6 loved ones in the past year and it seems like i'm getting used to it, like it isn't real yet, but then i hear his laugh or any lil thing reminds me.....

thanks so much for the support and amor~

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Thats some dep shit you wroght there gurl, ive too lost a good friend and club mate 2 weeks ago, you might have seen the pic I posted on the mis. section RIP Lee Loco, any way my prayers are wit you and his fam.
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