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Old 02-27-2006
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This is my latest story. My true story. All these events happened to me a long time ago. I wanted to do something different. Yes, I have added some of you, but not all and no I will not add anyone else. I will add those I want to add and that's it. Do not ask me to add you becuz I will ignore you. Anyway hope you like this one. Read and Reply.


















Lucia aka Dreamer- 17 yrs. Old, shoulder length dark brown hair, dark brown eyes. Romeoís girl

Chris aka Romeo- 19 yrs. Old, short black hair, brown eyes. Dreamerís vato

Javier aka Sleepy- 20 yrs. Old, slicked back black hair, brown eyes. Romeoís brother

Samantha aka Blue eyes- 17 yrs. Old, dark brown hair, blue eyes. Dreamerís best home girl

Luis aka Payaso- 18 yrs. Old, pelon, brown eyes, built. Blue eyesí vato

Laura aka Sadeyes- 15 yrs. Old, long brown hair, light brown eyes.

Luis Angel aka Trusty- 23 yrs. Old, pelon, dark brown eyes. Sadeyesí brother

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Fade in

ďI remember when I first met him, I thought he was the best thing to happen to me. You could say I fell in love with him at first site. When he asked me out I said yes right away. How could I turn him down he had been there for me through the hardest time in my life. I thought everything in my life was perfect again. Until I found out what he was really like.Ē

Fade out

*3 yrs. before*

Dreamer was sitting on her bed staring out the window.

Dreamer: porque? Porque dios mio? Why did you have to take them away?

Dreamer continues to stare out the window. She hears a soft knock on the door but ignores it. The knocking continues but Dreamer just stares out the window. The door slowly opens and Blue eyes walks in.

Blue eyes: Dreamer?

Dreamer doesnít move.

Blue eyes: mija, itís time to go

Dreamer looked at Blue eyes. She glanced out the window again then stood up. Dreamer walked over to her dresser and picked up her rosary. Today she would be burying her true love and her best friend. She followed Blue eyes out the door.

*The Funeral*

Father: we are gathered here today to mourn the loss of two great young men. Jared and Jordan Jimenez.

Soft cries could be heard all over the church.

The service continued with everyone giving there eulogies. When each person took their turn, they continued on and took the caskets to the burial grounds. Dreamer is standing next to Alma (Jared and Jordanís mom).

Alma: Mija (hugging her) itís ok to cry, you donít have to try and be strong.

Dreamer: I know

She hadnít cried once yet. Dreamer never was one to cry easily. She only cried when it really hurt her, but even now in the worst moment of her life. She couldnít shed a single tear.

Slowly the caskets lowered into the ground and they were buried. Everyone paid there respects, then started to slowly leave one by one. Dreamer stayed.

Dreamer: Jordan, Iíll miss you buddy. You were my best friend, me vas hacer mucha falta.

She kisses a rose and puts it on his grave. She feels the wind surround her.

Dreamer knelt down in front of Jaredís grave.

Dreamer: why baby? Why did you leave me? We had a great future planned

She feels a little sprinkle of water fall from the sky.

Dreamer: I still remember when you first kissed me

*Flash back*

A young boy and girl are at a park. The girl is swinging while the boy is watching her have fun.

Girl: what are you thinking about?
Boy: nothing

Girl: donít lie

Boy: you really want to know?

The boy gets close to the girl while she stops swinging.

Girl: yeah, I want to know

Boy: ok (Real close to her) I was thinking what would happen if I did this

The boy starts to tickle the girl while sheís sitting on the swing.

Girl: (laughing) stop, stop

Boy: stop what?

Girl: (laughing) stop tickling me

The rain starts to fall as you hear thunder and see lighting strike through the sky.

Boy: ok Iíll stop, we need to go

Jared pulled Dreamer up and held her a minute. He looked down into her dark brown eyes with his honey colored eyes and leaned in. Slowly he kissed her lightly across her lips. Dreamer felt something go through her body almost like a bolt of lighting, when he kissed her.

*Present*

Dreamer: never had someone kiss me so sweet. I wish I couldíve said good bye. I never got to say I love you one last time

*Flashback*

Itís new years eve, a boy and a girl are on the phone.

Boy: baby, come on

Girl: I canít go, I have to stay home

Boy: you promised

Girl: I know and Iím sorry, but my mom wants me to stay here

Boy: (mad) fine

Girl: (mad now too) you think I want to stay home? You know Iíd rather be with you

Boy: whatever

Girl: well fuck you then

Boy: no fuck you

*Click*

*Present*

Dreamer: how was I supposed to know that that would be the last time I would ever talk to you again

Dreamer kissed the white rose in her hand and laid it on his grave. She got up and walked away.

*Jared and Jordan Jimenez had gone to a party that new years eve. Jared got wasted and tried to drive home with his brother. He crashed his car into a tree dying instantly. Jordan was rushed to the hospital where he died 3 hours later. R.I.P.*
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wow this story sounds good....u have a gift maybe you should think about writting a book (lol I'll be the first one in line to buy it) sounds like you've had a pretty rough life....and i wish u the best.
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Damn does no one like it?

*6 months later*

Dreamer hasnt shed a tear or smiled. Everyone was really worried about her. Especially Romeo, since they were kids, they had been bestfriends. Romeo had spent many nights with Dreamer as she laid in bed not being able to sleep. Romeo was in love with Dreamer, but always kept it to himself since Dreamer was with Jared.

*At School*

Dreamer was sitting at her table writing in her notebook. Romeo saw her and went to her.

Romeo: hey

Dreamer: (looked up) hey

Romeo: how's it going?

Dreamer: as good as it can be I guess

Romeo: well I was wondering....

Dreamer: what's up?

Romeo: well....

Dreamer: yeah

Romeo: I was wondering if you want to go out to a movie tonight?

Dreamer: ummmmmm

Dreamer had a guilty feeling about going out with any other guy.

Romeo: it's ok if you dont want to

Dreamer: well.........ok

Romeo: serio

Dreamer: yeah sure

Romeo: orale, I'll pick you up at 7

Dreamer: ok

Romeo walked away with a big smile on his face.

Dreamer: (thinking) am I doing the right thing? I do like him, but is it right?

Her thoughts became interrupted by Blue eyes.

Blue eyes: hey girl

Dreamer: (nothing)

Blue eyes: hello

Dreamer: huh? (snaps out of it) oh hey

Blue eyes: where were you?

Dreamer: no where, what's up?

Blue eyes: what do you have planned tonight?

Dreamer: well Romeo asked me to go to a movie with him tonight

Blue eyes: orale

*Bell rings*

Blue eyes: damn we better go before we're late

Dreamer got her stuff and walked to class with Blue eyes.

I'll stop if no one replys
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mija you know that you dont need for ppl to give compliments on your stories to make you write more...dang it gurl you really got some talent ques dios te dio ...keep writing ...im your #1 fan always mija ...dont forget that !!!! go on write some more! ....lol...dont forget to include me too!
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its really good keep it goin you got mad talent girl
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Come one gurl u know ur stories are real good!! and its barely the start come on dont stop here!!
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*After School*

Dreamer was walking home. A car was creeping behind her. Dreamer ignored it and kept on walking.

*Honk, Honk, Honk*

Dreamer turned around and saw Trusty and Sadeyes.

Sadeyes: (yelling out the window) hey sexy, want a ride?

Dreamer: sure

Dreamer gets into Trusty's Escalade.

Trusty: hey stranger

Dreamer: hey

Trusty: havent seen you much

Dreamer: havent been around, you know?

Trusty: yeah

Trusty drove off and dropped Dreamer off at home. No one was home, her mom was at work and er step dad had just left. Dreamer went into her room and started her homework. She worked until 6, then got ready for her date. When she was done she waite for Romeo to show up.

*Dreamer's cell rings*

Dreamer: hello

Romeo: hey, I'm outside

Dreamer: ok

*Click*

Dreamer locked the door and got into Romeo's car.

Dreamer: hey

Romeo: ready?

Dreamer: yup, what are we gonna go see?

Romeo: let's go see what's playing

Dreamer: ok

Romeo drove off. At the theater, they got their tickets and went inside. A group a guys had seen Dreamer walk in and were checking her out. Dreamer didnt notice but Romeo did and he was pissed.

Romeo: what the fuck are you looking at?

Guy1: nothing

Romeo: it better be nothing

Guy1: it is

Dreamer: Romeo come on, let's go

Romeo let Dreamer pull him away and they walked into the theater. Inside the movie started. Romeo had his arm around Dreamer and she leaning into him, but she felt a little guilty.

*Movie ends*

After the movie ends Dreamer and Romeo leave and go out into the lobby.


Romeo: mija, hold up I'm gonna go to the bathroom quick

Dreamer: alright, I'll wait here

Romeo walked into the mens room. Dreamer was standing around when the same guys come up to her and start talking to her.

Guy1: damn, you're fine

Dreamer: ummm thanks

Guy2: so is that you vato?

Dreamer: (lying) yeah

Guy1: I think you need someone better. A real man

Dreamer: a real man?

Guy1: yeah

Dreamer: are you a real man?

Guy1: well.......

Voice: HEY!!!

Romeo came out of the bathroom and saw those gusy circling Dreamer.

Romeo: get the fuck away from her

Guy1: If I dont

Romeo: te parto la madre

Dreamer: mijo, dont. come on let's just go

Romeo: no, these putos need to learn some respect

Dreamer: Chris let it go

Romeo looked at Dreamer and saw the scared look in her eyes

Romeo: ok, let's go. (To the guys) you better watch you backs

Romeo and Dreamer walk out and get into Romeo's car

I got to get ready for work. I might post more after. Laterz
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Hey I Love Those Stories U Right Betr Right More Itz Like A Novela Lol No Pero Serio Right More Fast Gurl Dont Wait Now Lol!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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*In The Car*

Romeo: I'm sorry

Dreamer: (stayed quiet)

Romeo: Dreamer, dont be mad, please

Dreamer: just dont let it happen again

Romeo: you forgive me?

Dreamer: yeah

Romeo looked into her eyes, slowly he leaned in and kissed her softly. Romeo puled back and looked at Dreamer.

Romeo: I'm sorry its just..............Dreamer, be my girl?

Dreamer stayed quiet

*Flashback*

Boy and girl are at a school dance. "All My Life" by KC&JoJo comes on.

Boy: you want to dance?

Girl: sure

Boy pulls girl up off the floor and takes her to the middle of the dance floor. BOy pulls her tight into her arms while she puts her arms around his neck.

Boy: (singing along) All my life, I've waited for someone like you and I thank god that I, that I finally found you

Girl looked up into Boy's eyes. Boy leaned down and kissed her lightly.

Boy: (pulling away) by my girl?

Girl: (eyes closed) I'd love too

*Present*

Romeo: Dreamer?

Dreamer: huh? oh sorry

Romeo: I understand if you say no (puts his head down)

Dreamer: Chris, look at me

Romeo lifted his head and looked at Dreamer. She kissed him lightly on the lips.

Dreamer: I'll be your girl

Romeo: forreal?

Dreamer: yeah

Romeo kissed her deeply holding her in a tight embrace.

Romeo: thank you

Dreamer: (thinking) I hope I didnt do wrong

Romeo let her go and drove off. He dropped her off at home. He walked her to her door like a real gentleman.

Dreamer: I had a great time

Romeo: me too. (kisses her) see you tomorrow?

Dreamer: of course

Romeo waited until she got inside then went back to his car and drove home.

*Dreamer's room*

Dreamer changed and was sitting up in her bed. In her hands was a picture of ehr and Jared.

Dreamer: baby, I'm sorry...I've moved on. Romeo has been there for me since you've been gone. I dont know if it's too soon, but it feels right. I'll always love you Jared.

She kissed the picture then laid it beside her. Outside it started to rain lightly against her window.

"I thought I was making the right decision. How was I supposed to know that things weren't as they appeared to be."
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your also on bp huh?
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all you do is hope for the best. you never know if it right or wrong. until something good or bad happens.
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*Next Day*

Dreamer woke up and got ready for school. When she was fixing her hair, her cell rang.

Dreamer: hello

Romeo: morning beautiful

Dreamer: hey mijo

Romeo: I'm on my way to pick you up

Dreamer: ok I'm almost ready

Romeo: orale, see you in a bit

*Click*

Dreamer finished doing her hair then went downstairs. She heard a honk come from outside. She went out and saw Romeo in her driveway. She got her stuf and got into his car.

Dreamer: hey

Romeo: (sounding mad) hey

Dreamer: something wrong?

Romeo: that's what you're wearing to school?

Dreamer: well yeah

Dreamer was wearing a pair of shorts with a t-shirt that fit a little tight around her chest.

Dreamer: why?

Romeo: dont you think you need a sweatshirt?

Dreamer: no

Romeo: (stayed quiet)

Dreamer: well if it bother you so much I'll go in and get a sweatshirt

Romeo: no wait, here take mine.

Romeo gets out his black basketball sweatshirt.

Romeo: that way everyone can know you're mine

Dreamer: thanks

Romeo smiles and gives her a kiss on the cheek.

*At School*

Everyone was at the table.

Sadeyes: where's Dreamer?

Payaso: not here yet

Blueeyes: Romeo is probably picking her up

Sadeyes: Romeo?

Blueeyes: yeah, they went out on a date last night

Sadeyes: really?

Blueeyes: well.....

Payaso: hey here they come

Dreamer and Romeo walk up holding hands

Dreamer: hey guys

All: hey

Sadeyes: is there something you want to tell us?

Dreamer: well.........

Romeo went behind Dreamer and held her by the waist.

Romeo: she's all mine

Sadeyes: cute

Dreamer: thank you

Blueeyes: hey Dreamer, guess who called me?

Dreamer: who?

Blueeyes: Lonely

Dreamer: no way, serio?

Blueeyes: serio

Payaso: who's Lonely?

Romeo: (tightening his grip on Dreamer) is it a vato?

Dreamer: no, Lonely is our homegirl

*Marilu aka Lonely- 18, long brown hair, brown eyes*

Blueeyes: she moved away a long ass time ago

Dreamer: so what did she say?

Blueeyes: she's coming to visit next week

Dreamer: hell yeah, we're gonna have so much fun

Blueeyes: you know it

Dreamer: is Guardian coming with her?

Blueeyes: she didnt say

Romeo: who's Guardian?

Dreamer: her older brother

Blueeyes: hey, hey, our older brother

Dreamer: oh sorry, our older brother

*Bell rings*

Romeo walks Dreamer to class
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your also on bp huh?
i saw this on bp too
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yeah I'm also on BP. I go under Sadeyed_Dreamer.
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*Lunch*

Dreamer was sitting at the table reading a book. She had gotten hot so she had taken of Romeo's sweatshirt. She didnt see a guy walk up behind her.

Guy: damn, dont you look fine?

Dreamer: (not looking up) can I help you with something?

Guy: yeah, you can tell me how to tap that ass

Dreamer: how about not

Guy: come on, for old times sake

Dreamer: excuse me

Dreamer put her head up and looked into the eyes of a cute guy, someone she thought she would never see agian.

Dreamer: oh my god

Guy: is that all you can say?

Dreamer: Guardian?

Guardian: the one and only

Dreamer jumped up and hugged him. Guardian picked her up and swung her around.

Dreamer: what are you doing here? Blueeyes said you guys weren't coming till next week.

Guardian: we decided to come up early so Lonely could get into school and we could set up the house.

Dreamer: you're moving here

Guardian: yup, we're back and for good

Dreamer: oh that so great (hugging him) you have no idea how much I missed you guys

Guardian: I missed you too, we both did

Dreamer: where's Lonely now?

Guardian: finishing up in the office

*Aldo aka Guardian- 19, tall, pelon, bronzed skin, muscular build, real sweetheart. Dreamer's first love, before Jared.*

Guardian: so how you been?

Dreamer: up and down, you?

Guardian: pretty good

Dreamer: that's good

Guardian: (grabbing her hand) I've missed you

Dreamer: me too

Voice: what the hell? Let go oof my girl's hand

Dreamer turned around and saw Romeo walking towards them. He was pissed.

Dreamer: baby

Romeo: (ignoring her) did you not hear me man? let go of my girl's hand

Guardian: (letting go) sorry

Dreamer: Romeo calm down

Romeo: you know him?

Dreamer: this is Guardian

Romeo: oh so you're her "brother"

Guardian: yeah, you are?

Romeo: her man

Guardian: really? what happened to Jared?

Dreamer: he's..........

Dreamer felt tears in her eyes.

Romeo: he's gone

Guardian: I'm sorry, it's just I havent been around

Romeo: well now you know

Guardian: Dreamer, I'm sorry

Dreamer: (drying her eyes) it's ok

Guardian: hey, here comes Lonely

Dreamer: LONELY!! (runs to Lonely)

Lonely: hey (hugs her tight)

Dreamer: I can't believe you're here

Lonely: I know it's been forever

Dreamer: are you enrolled?

Lonely: yeah, here's my schedule

Dreamer: (looks at it) we ave 3 classes together

Lonely: awesome

Dreamer: yeah it is

Lonely: who's that?

Dreamer: who?

Lonely: with Guardian?

Dreamer: that's Romeo, my man

Lonely: wait, what about Jared?

Dreamer: (puts her head down) he's gone

Lonely: oh mija, I'm sorry

Dreamer: it's ok

Lonely: when?

Dreamer: about 6 months ago. I'll tell you about that later. Come on I want you to meet Romeo

Lonely: orale pues

Dreamer and Lonely walk over to Romeo and Guardian.



that's all I got for now. I'll try to post more later.
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hey mija ur story is great!! im hooked sorry i havent post i havent been on!! but keep it comming!!! oh i love u 4 putting me & my brother in it!!! much love from both of us!!
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*Romeo and Guardian*

Romeo: so how do you know my girl?

Guardian: we go back

Romeo: how come I never saw you?

Guardian: I didnt exactly stay in one place for too long

Romeo: I see

Guardian: look, I know what you're trying to get at. Yeah, me and Dreamer had something a long time ago

Romeo got mad and clenched his fists.

Guardian: but that was a long time ago, even before she got with Jared. I'm not trying to get her back. She's like mi carnalita, so you dont have to worry about me

Romeo: that's cool, but let me warn you, you try anything funny with my girl and I'll fucking kill your ass

Guardian: damn chill out. I wont try anything

Dreamer and Lonely walked up to them

Dreamer: what are you boys talking about?

Romeo: nothing

Guardian: we're just getting to know eachother

Romeo looked at Guardian. Dreamer noticed it was tense but let it go.

Dreamer: baby look, I want you to meet one of my best homegirl's Lonely

Romeo: nice to meet you, I'm Romeo

Lonely: you too, I'm Lonely

Romeo was kinda checking her out.

Romeo: (Thinking) she'd be a good fuck

Lonely: (Thinking) damn he's fine, Dreamer is so lucky

Dreamer: we should skip the rest of the day and go to my house

Guardian: I'm down

Romeo: sure baby

Dreamer: what do you say Lonely?

Lonely: do you really have to ask?

Dreamer: let's go then


I'm in school so that's all I got for now. Keep reading and showing the love. Laterz
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