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Old 03-16-2006
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hey girl i like ur story u need to write some more im getting into it!! let me guess romeo fucks lonely!!
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*Dreamer's House*

Guardian, Lonely and Dreamer had gotten to her house. Romeo had changed his mind and stayed at school.

Lonely: so tell us what happened?

Dreamer: (told them the whole story)

Guardian: how's Alma?

Dreamer: she's hanging in there

Lonely: I can't believe they're gone

Dreamer: I know. I was really lost for a long time, but Romeo was there for me and helped me through my depression. He's been real sweet and supportive

Lonely: how long have you been dating?

Dreamer: since last night

*Dreamer's cell rings*

Dreamer: hello

Sadeyes: hey girl, where are you?

Dreamer: I'm at home. You with Blueeyes?

Sadeyes: yeah and Payaso

Dreamer: come over, I got a surprise

Sadeyes: orale, we're on our way

*Click*

Lonely: who was that?

Dreamer: Sadeyes, her, Blueeyes and Payaso are on their way over. Probably Trusty too.

Guardian: so how are your brothers?

*Dreamer has 5 brothers, all older then her. They all live in Los Angeles. They're not really her brothers. They're her dad's x wife's kids, but she grew up with them and they see her like alittle sister.*

Dreamer: good, you know like always. I went to see them a couple of months ago.

*Dreamer's Doorbell rings*

Dreamer: they're here

Dreamer walks to the door and answers it.

Dreamer: hey guys

All: hey

Dreamer: go see the surprise in the living room

Sadeyes and Blueeyes walk in first and see Lonely.

S&B eyes: LONELY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

They jump on her and hug her tight

Lonely: glad to see you still remember me

Blueeyes: you said you weren't coming till next week

Guardian: we decided to come earlier

Trusty: hey Guardian

Guardian: q'vole (gangshake) Payaso, how you been?

Payaso: you know

Guardian: still with Blueeyes

Payaso: you know it

Guardian: where's Sleepy?

Trusty: at work. I called him on the way here. He wants to have a kick back tonight after work

Guardian: sweetness

*Doorbell rings*

Dreamer: (answers it) hey baby

Romeo: hey (kissing her)

Dreamer: everyone's in the living room

Dreamer grabs Romeo's hand and leads him into the living room.

Trusty: hey Romeo

Romeo: sup? how's it?

Trusty: ya sabes

Romeo nods

Trusty: there's gonna be a kick back tonight

Romeo: where at?

Trusty: your canton

Romeo: since when?

Trusty: Sleepy's throwing it

Romeo: orale

Romeo glanced over and saw that Guardian was watching Dreamer. Romeo wrapped his arms around Dreamer's waist. He leaned into her ear.

Romeo: can I talk to you alone?

Dreamer: sure (to everyone) we'll be right back

Dreamer and Romeo walk into the kitchen. Dreamer put her arms around Romeo's neck.

Dreamer: so what did you want to talk about?

Romeo: I dont like Guardian

Dreamer removed her arms and put them at her sides

Dreamer: why?

Romeo: he wont stop staring at you

Dreamer: so?

Romeo: so? so? I dont want him looking at you like that

Dreamer: he's just a friend, there's nothing there

Romeo: I think he wants you back

Dreamer: that doesnt mean I do

Romeo: I want you to stay away from him

Dreamer: excuse me?

Romeo: stay away from him

Dreamer: no

Romeo: what?

Dreamer: I said no. Romeo I'm not gonna stay away from my friend

Romeo got close to her and looked into her eyes. She could see the fire and anger in his eyes, but Dreamer refused to break down.

Romeo: I'm outta here

Romeo walked out of the kitchen before Dreamer had a chance to answer.

Dreamer: (to herself) what the hell got into him?

Sadeyes comes in.

Sadeyes: what happened?

Dreamer: I dont know

Sadeyes: did you guys fight?

Dreamer: I guess so, he's being stupid

Sadeyes: why?

Dreamer: he wants me to stay away from Guardian

Sadeyes: what? why?

Dreamer: I guess Guardian wont stop watching me

Sadeyes: seems boy still has it bad for you

Dreamer: but I dont, not anymore

Sadeyes: he'll get over it

Dreamer: I hope so

The girls go back into the living room with everyone else.





That's all i got for now. I'm kinda sad right now and really tired. I'll try to write and post more tomorrow.
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*Living room*

Sadeyes: so what time is the kick back?

Trusty: 8

Dreamer: hey I gotta do somethine quick, you guys can all chill here if you want

Sadeyes: want me to go with you?

Dreamer: naw it's ok

Dreamer grabbed her keys and drove off to the cementary. She walked along the path till she got to Jordan's grave.

Dreamer: hey buddy, sorry I havent been by. I miss you

Dreamer slowly walked on and kneeled in front of Jared's grave.

Dreamer: hey baby..........I miss you, I'm sorry I havent come to visit......................I'm with Romeo now. I dont know if it's too soon to be with him. I still love you though. He's helped me get through my depression and I care about him.

Dreamer stayed there staring at his grave.

*Flashback*

A boy and a girl are in the boy's room laying on the bed.

Boy: I love you

Girl: I love you too

Boy: one day, you'll be ny wife and you'll have my kids

Girl: and we'll live in a big house with a big backyard so our kids can round around.

Boy: we'll have barbeques and kick backs

Girl: we'll never live a sad day

Boy looked down into girl's eyes.

Boy: you're so beautiful

Girl: you're so sweet

Boy leans down and kisses her

Boy: I dont know what I would do if I ever lost you

Girl: you'll never lose me

*Dreamer: but I lost you*

Boy: I have a surprise for you

Girl: what is it?

Boy: close your eyes

Girl; (closes eyes) ok

Boy: hold on

Boy got up from the bed and went to his dresser. He opened the top drawer and pulled out a small box. He went back to the bed and placed it in her hands.

Boy: ok open your eyes

Girl opens her eyes and looks at the box. She opens it and finds a beautiful small diamond ring.

Girl: it's beautiful

Boy: just like you

Boy takes the box and pulls the ring out and places it on her ring finger.

Boy: this is a promise ring, I know ine day we'll get married and our dreams will come true. I want you o have this so you know how much I love you and that I can't wait till the day you are my wife

Girl hugs boy tight

Girl: (whispers in his ear) I love you

Boy: not as much as I love you

*Present*

Dreamer had tears running down her cheeks.

Dreamer: I miss you

*Dreamer's cell rings*

Dreamer: hello

Voice: where you at?

Dreamer: somewhere. what's up?

Sadeyes: do you know what time it is?

Dreamer: no

Sadeyes: it's 9 girl, we're all at the kick back and you're not here

Dreamer: damn serio, I lost track of time. I'll be there soon

Sadeyes: orale, Laterz

Dreamer: laterz



Where's the love?????????? I dont get reply's there's no point in me posting more. So until I get reply's I wont post more.
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I don't know if you are going to finish your Nonfiction Novel. But I suggest you should continue, sometimes writing about true events will help you in life.There's good Memories and sad,but it is always good to remeber the ones that brought you happiness in your life. I don't know what age you are now but I'm guessing this happen when you where in high school or maybe you still are. You been through alot for a young lady so share your expierence, so that if there are other young ladys in any situation they will be able to speak up and not bottle it in. Sounds to me like Romeo might have been something nice and something that hurt(verbally,physically,mentally) you in life.So I understand if you can not continue.This is a really great short nonfiction story you are bound to find a publishes who could help you publish it. It would be more like a memoir of browneyez. Well Take care and will check back to see how your storys ends or if it doesn't.
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hey girl sorry i havent reply i havent really been on!!! but keep ur story going i love it!!
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Dreamer blew Jared a kiss. She got up and walked back to her car and drove home. She showered, changed and did her make up and hair. When she was ready she headed over to Sleepy's.

*Sleepy's House*

Everyone was having fun, except Romeo. He wasn't mad about Guardian anymore bu he was pissed at the fact that Dreamer hadn't shown up. Finally Dreamer gets there and Romeo is the first one to see her. He was drunk.

Romeo: (slurred) where have you been?

Dreamer: I had to go somewhere

Romeo: where?

Dreamer: it doesnt matter

Romeo: (mad) you were out being a slut

Dreamer: fuck you

Romeo: seems to be what you're doing

Dreamer: Romeo, you're drunk you dont know what you're talking about.

Romeo: I'm saying the truth

Dreamer: orale pues, I'm gonna leave

Dreamer walked out and drove home. She went to her room changed and went to sleep.

*Next day*

Dreamer woke up to the sound of the doorbell.

She got up and answered the door. It was Romeo.

Romeo: hey

Dreamer: hi

Romeo: can I come in?

Dreamer: sure

Romeo walked in and Dreamer closed the door.

Romeo: I'm sorry

Dreamer: you should be

Romeo: I'm sorry

Dreamer: what's gotten into you? I've never seen you like that

Romeo: I'm sorry it's just......I love you

Dreamer: what?

Romeo: I love you so much I always have. For so long I've wanted you to be mine and now that you are I'm scared to lose you

Dreamer: (stayed quiet)

Romeo: Dreamer please say something

Dreamer: I dont know what to say

Romeo: please say you'll forgive me

Dreamer: (quiet)

Romeo: I promise never to hurt you

Dreamer looked at him. His eyes were red, full of guilt and tears. You could see the pain inside him. Dreamer stepped toward him. and took his face in her hand and looked deep into his eyes. Slowly she kissed him gently.

Dreamer: (softly) I forgive you

Romeo: really?

Dreamer: yeah

Romeo picked her up and spun her around. Promising he would never do anything to hurt her again.

Promises were made to be broken. I believed him, god only knows why, but I did. I thought he would keep his promise, but I was wrong
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*2 months later*

Romeo didnt keep his promise. He'd find little stupid reasons to yell at Dreamer, then he's kiss her and apologize. Always saying he was sorry and he'd never do it again.

*Sleepy and Romeo's House*

Dreamer went over to Romeo's house after school. He wasnt home thought. Romeo was still at basketball practice. She sat in the living and watched t.v. while she waited for Romeo to come home. Sleepy comes home from work.

Sleepy: hey mija

Dreamer: hey

Sleepy: where's mi carnal?

Dreamer: I think still at practice

Sleepy: you want some company

Dreamer: sure

Sleepy sat down on the couch next to Dreamer

They were talking about random things and life.

Sleepy groans.

Dreamer: what's wrong?

Sleepy: my backs been killing me

Dreamer: you want a massage?

Sleepy: I would love one

Dreamer: ok get on the floor

Sleepy laid down on the floor on his stomach. Dreamer straddled him and started to rub his back, getting the knots out.

Sleepy: (groans) that feels so good

::SLAM::

Romeo: what the hell is this?

Dreamer: (stuttering) I....I...w as giving him a back massage

Romeo: get up, get off him

Romeo grabbed Dreamer and pulled her off Sleepy, gripping tight her wrist.
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write more....hey who is that in ur avatar???
That's my friend Michael with me at our winter formal. We're sorta involved but not sure what we really are.
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oh hel naw he just didnt grab her!! mija keep it comming pleaze!!!!
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DDDDAAAAMMMMNNNNNN Romeo better not hurt her!!! keep it up girl its getting better and better much love
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Sleepy: carnal chill out, she was doing me a favor

Romeo ignored him. He dragged Dreamer into his room and hurled her onto his bed.

Romeo: dont move

Romeo walked back out to the living room.

Romeo: stay away from her

Sleepy: carnal chill, we weren't doing nothing wrong

Romeo: she's mine

Sleepy: well she's my friend

Romeo: stay away from her carnal

Sleepy: you need to calm down bro, there's nothing between me and Dreamer

Romeo: there better not be

Romeo walked back to his room.

Romeo: what the hell was that out there

Dreamer: nothing, his back was sore so I offered him a back massage. I wasnt doing anything wrong.

Romeo: you were on my brother

Dreamer: it's not like I was riding his dick. I gave him a back massage

Romeo got so mad he back handed Dreamer across the face. Dreamer looked at him horrified at what he had just done. She got up and walked out into the living room. Romeo followed her out.

Romeo: where do you think you're going?

Dreamer: (tears in her eyes) home

Sleepy walked out of the kitchen and saw them standing in the living room. He saw that Dreamer's face was red and starting to swell where Romeo hit her.

Sleepy: what the hell happened?

Romeo: doesnt concern you

Dreamer: Sleepy can you take me home?

Sleepy: (mad at Romeo) sure mija

Romeo: you're not going anywhere

Sleepy: back off Romeo, Mija go wait in my car

Dreamer walked out with out looking at Romeo again. Romeo started to follow her, but Sleepy held him back.

Romeo: let me go Sleepy

Sleepy: step back carnal. I'll deal with your ass later

Sleepy walked out and got in the car and drove off to Dreamer's house.

*Dreamer's House*

Dreamer: thanks for bringing me

Sleepy: anytime mija

Dreamer hugged him tight.

Sleepy: you know I'm here for you, whenever you need me

Dreamer: thank you

Dreamer got out and went inside. When she walked in her phone rang.

Caller ID: Romeo

Dreamer ignored it and turned her phone off. She showered and changed. Then when out to the living room and watched t.v. she ended up falling asleep on the couch.

*Next Morning*

Dreamer woke up and saw she was still in the living room. She picked up her phone and turned it on. She had 5 new voice mail messages. All from Romeo

Message 1: Dreamer come on dont ignore me

Message 2: Dreamer please pick up your phone, we need to talk

Message 3: Baby please pick up

Message 4: please Dreamer, pick up baby

Message 5: I'm sorry Dreamer, I love you. I dont want to lose you. I dont know what got into me. I never meant to hurt, I love you Lucia. You are everything to me. Please, (startin to cry) baby call me back or come over. Please.......(pause) I love you

Dreamer hung up the phone.

*Door bell rings*

Dreamer opens the door and finds Romeo standing in front of her with a rose in his hands. Romeo's eyes were red from crying.

Romeo: I love you

Dreamer stood there and didnt say anything in response. Romeo stepped forward and hugged her. She hugged him back and started to cry.

Romeo: baby dont cry (holding her tight) please, no more tears (kisses her)

That was the first time he hit me and it wouldnt be the last. I should've walked away from him, but I didnt. I now wish I had. Things got worse after that.
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oh hell naw he just didnt hit her!! dat got me mad hurry mija wrtie some more!!!
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AAAWWWWWWW HHHHEEEEELLLLLZZZZ NNNAAAAWWWW!!!!!!!!!!! That puto hit her, he needs to get his ass whooped and I cant believe she took him back, shes gonna regret it now. Well keep it up girl much love
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My bad i havent been posting lately but im here now this is just getting better and better and this is a bad place to stop COME ON GURL keep it coming!!!!PLZ!!!
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damnz.....datz crazy shii rii there......(thiinkz bout myself) keep writing girl you gotz mi on da edge
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*4 months later*

Things got worse. Romeo made a habit of hitting, slapping and bruising Dreamer. He'd get drunk and beat her. Dreamer would wear heavy make up, sunglasses, sweatshirts and long sleeves shirts to hide the bruises. She didnt tell anyone about what Romeo did. Romeo acted like nothing was wrong. Sometimes he would apologize to her by giving her roses her taking her out, sometimes he didnt.

*Sadeyes' House*

The girls had all gotten together to have a girls night out. Sadeyes had kicked Trusty out so it would only be the girls.

Lonely: so what do we want to watch first?

Blueeyes: let's watch.............

*Dreamer's cell rings*

Dreamer: sorry (answers) hello

Romeo: hey baby, where you at?

Dreamer: sadeyes' house. We're having a slumber party

The Girls: NO BOYS ALLOWED

Romeo: (laughs)

Dreamer: you heard them

Romeo: where's Trusty?

Dreamer: I dont know, Sadeyes kicked him out

Romeo: oh ok, well I'll let you go then

Dreamer: ok bye

Romeo: I love you

Dreamer: me too

*Click*

Dreamer didnt really love Romeo, but she was to scared to leave him. He would get mad when she didnt say it back, but she couldnt tell him a lie.

Blueeyes: was that Romeo?

Dreamer: yeah

Sadeyes: what he want?

Dreamer: just seeing where I was

Lonely: he's worse then your dad

Dreamer: mmmm...anyway did you guys decide what we're watching

Sadeyes: yeah

Blueeyes: we're gonna watch Princess Bride.

Dreamer: orale

The girls watched movies the rest of the night. During Corpse Bride, Sadeyes threw a pillow at Lonely.

Lonely: brat

Lonely threw a pillow of Sadeyes, but missed and hit Blueeyes

Blueeyes: this is war

They girls started a pillow fight. By accident Lonely elbowed Dreamer in the arm.

Dreamer: owww...owww...

Lonely: what's wrong?

Dreamer: nothing

Sadeyes: what?

Sadeyes grabbed Dreamer sleeve and pulled it up, revealing a huge black bruise.





sorry I gotta go, Ill write more tonight after work. Laterz
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omg! that must of hurt but keep riting this getting good
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damn girl, you got talent. Keep it going
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Wow, I just can not believe it, but it is like that for most young girls to silence themselves because there scared what the guy could do, I can relate to you on this as this story continue. It's like a NOVELA and I hate novela's but this one I know is true and relates to me.You got me on the edge of my seat and checking back on soy to see if you posted anything new.Take care
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damn im really in to this cuz somthing like this happend to me im gladd to see mamaz you got away from it ...whens the story gunna finish? but i am sorry this happend to you and for your loss of your love stay up mamaz
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Damn I cant believe he made that shit a habit. He needs to get his ass whooped. I hate women beaters
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