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Old 09-14-2006
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DING DING DING....THIS EVENT IS SCHEDULE FOR 3 ROUNDS, EACH RYMER WILL SPIT THREE SEPERATE VERSES...WINNER WILL BE DETERMINED BY BEST OF 5 VOTES...VOTERS MUST EXPLAIN THERE VOTE! PLEASE FEEL FREE TO COMMENT ON ALL VERSES THRU OUT DA BATTLE!!! RYMERS WILL HAVE 24 HRS TO RESPOND, IF LONGER THEN 24HRS, BATTLES IS A FOREFIT!

(in a michael buffer voice) LETS GET READY TO BAAAAATTTTTLLLLLEEEE!!!!


ROUND 1


this dude thought i was scared/
but i aint shook g/
my flow is raw/
like uncooked meat/
its over before it started/
this dude been beat up now/
u a prisoner of war/
so i take away ur freedom now/
im hungry so im a eat up now/
u know who murderded u/
so no reason for me to creep up now/
ur flow aint hard homie/
matter of fact its to soft/
u lost/take ur loss and move on/
try a new hobby/
cuz ryming aint ur profession/
you ll get taught a lesson/
y u wanna bet with ur life/
and leave ur mama stressin/
u could never win/ur whole style trash bro/
play da lottery/dats ur only chance at cash flow/!

ok freedom its on u!!
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alright.... here we goo...

it took u more than 30 minutes to come with that garbage?
imma show these people u soft, swing both ways like a loose door hinge...
imma mc that demonstrates true superiority...
dominate the AZ like i was in the pac 10 reppin USC!
University of South Central Los Gs
ya style is generic like shasta sodas
u just another soft mc that didnt meet his lyrical quota
i m too much... u cant stand my disastrous spits
ur oversensitive like a girl with pierced clit
get over yo self u backpackin maggot
after this battle u gonna know the true meaning of tragic
its a fact, i m verbally and ideologically ahead of my class
i make true heads bob like Kweli and hi teks track, the blast
u city aint got shit on the hip hop map
L.A. mcs is blessed with startin left coast reality rap...
aint no answer or fakeness to that

peace..
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Originally Posted by FreedomNow
alright.... here we goo...

it took u more than 30 minutes to come with that garbage?
imma show these people u soft, swing both ways like a loose door hinge...
imma mc that demonstrates true superiority...
dominate the AZ like i was in the pac 10 reppin USC!
University of South Central Los Gs
ya style is generic like shasta sodas
u just another soft mc that didnt meet his lyrical quota
i m too much... u cant stand my disastrous spits
ur oversensitive like a girl with pierced clit
get over yo self u backpackin maggot
after this battle u gonna know the true meaning of tragic
its a fact, i m verbally and ideologically ahead of my class
i make true heads bob like Kweli and hi teks track, the blast
u city aint got shit on the hip hop map
L.A. mcs is blessed with startin left coast reality rap...
aint no answer or fakeness to that

peace..

ok ok not bad!!

i see u a school boy/ but u aint put in no work homie/
read my profile/so did ur home work on me/
u from L A/no wonder ur lame when ur venting/
and da west aint done shit/till GAME dropped da DOCUMENTRY/
so dont gimme dat west/is da best shit/
u dont wanna test shit/my punchlines got hollow points/
so i hope u got a vest kid/
so fuk LA/naw on da real i cant hate ur city/
i know LA hates you/cuz u a disgrace to ur city/
i rep AZ for life/beat me ur crazy kid/
ur a lazy bitch/with a flow softer then baby shit/
u a queer rapper/this battle u get ur head popped/
u da backpack rapper/u probly got dread locks/
i got love for cali/cuz they got da best pot/
and beside GAME, CUBE and SNOOP/ artist in da west flop/
u aint no different/
u another wanna be/
FIRE homie/u only wish u was as hot as me!/
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the only thing hot in az is the desert
u done fucked up and made me go berzerk
check ya rhyme pattern... u rhyme city with city
ya shit is whack and soft like paperboys ditty
imma school boy cuz i rap circles around ya?
cuz i got advanced diction and vernacula?
u stupid, another weak attempt to test
a vest? kid please im number one with a bullet in this contest
challengers always wanna step into my cypher
knowin theyre stinky and shitty like a baby's diaper
phoenix, ididnt look at ur profile, i happen to know geography
ignorant muthafucka wanted to step into this bout and find catastrophe
this shit is like enthropy, yo shit is naturally gonna get fucked up
lil boy, man up shit s gonna get deep like New orleans water duckts
u stuck... no way out... u fucked with an mc that got too much clout
it s over, give up and retire after this bout...
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Originally Posted by FreedomNow
the only thing hot in az is the desert
u done fucked up and made me go berzerk
check ya rhyme pattern... u rhyme city with city
ya shit is whack and soft like paperboys ditty
imma school boy cuz i rap circles around ya?
cuz i got advanced diction and vernacula?
u stupid, another weak attempt to test
a vest? kid please im number one with a bullet in this contest
challengers always wanna step into my cypher
knowin theyre stinky and shitty like a baby's diaper
phoenix, ididnt look at ur profile, i happen to know geography
ignorant muthafucka wanted to step into this bout and find catastrophe
this shit is like enthropy, yo shit is naturally gonna get fucked up
lil boy, man up shit s gonna get deep like New orleans water duckts
u stuck... no way out... u fucked with an mc that got too much clout
it s over, give up and retire after this bout...

round 3 lets go!


dogg ur wack as fuk/
ur old lines/get no shine/
check ur own raps bro/ desert and berzerk/
DONT RHYME/
and i didnt rhyme city with city/
i rhymed hate with disgrace/
illest rhyme pattern/ homie and ill spit in ur face/
ill put a clip in ur face/
punchlines to strong/put this bitch in his place/
shake the ground/like a kick drum mixed in wit a bass/
damn right da desert hot/
u lookin at da reason/
lyrically commit arson/aint u heard of fire season/
honestly im a giant/ u gone stay small/
my style stays raw/ u out of ur league/
like jordan in baseball/
so time to face facts/ur whole life u stayed wack/
payback/im with ur chick in a maybach/ and i bet u hate that/
i stay strapped/
with a pen/dats unlimited ammunition/
target on ur dome/chrome known to damage bitches/
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oh goodness... this is the last round...

first off, stop recyclin other mc's words
that jordan out of his league has been used before

just puttin that out there...


another whack mc livin in fantasy
steppin into freedoms reality
it only takes me 5 minutes to put down a verse
it takes this dude 20 times as much to come off with somethin worse
y u rhymin bout shit u aint got
u aint gotta maybach and ur rhymes dont burn they just flop
weaklin u need to stop...
fuckin with me was a fucken mistake
imma leave ya ass pale and cold like a snow flake
i flow precisely and with calculation
like c class movies ur rhymes cause no sensation
u stupid and blown up like inflation
i stay at my place on top and theres no debatin
like 1.1 on the richter scale u aint shakin
ur hip hop death is upon u so get ready to meet satan
i m through with this kid out here really fakin
u fucked w the wrong mc if this were live, i d have a standin ovation
done...


good shit fire...

let the voting begin!
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Freedom,

His verses were better and flowed more clearly
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Originally Posted by FreedomNow
oh goodness... this is the last round...

first off, stop recyclin other mc's words
that jordan out of his league has been used before

just puttin that out there...


good shit fire...

let the voting begin!

fo sho bro!....i never heard dat line...who said it??
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i cant remember who exactly said it... but i ve heard it before....

man, this battle was dope and we finished it in one day....
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My vote goes to Freedom...

Both vatos dropped some ill rhymes but I felt that Pheonix's first
two spits weren't up to par with the one's that Freedom ripped.
Pheonix- you got skills homie but this wasn't some of your stronger
material... and Freedom- you never cease to amaze me with your
strong vurnacular (see, I can use a $20 word too).
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hahaha... good lookin out on the votes mexakin
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freedom

just the fact that he used shasta soda
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it's pretty close to me.

i will vote for phoenix, because i like the fiery bird that "lyrically commit[s] arson"
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cool... thanks for the vote man...



i liked those lines too...

so the score is 3-1
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ding ding ding i think dats it!


freedom 3 phoenixfire 1


good battle homie! shouts out to all who to voted and took da time to read da rymes!!! hope u cats were entertained!!!


freedom good shit homie!!!
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oh damn... i didnt even know if i had won... i thought we had to get 5 votes... i just saw best of 5...

good shit homie.... u got skills. that last verse of urs was dope...
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I would have enjoyed seeing more metaphors and other devices in both of your rhymes but there's always a next time.

I'm a fan of pullin out vocab that people are like "What did he/she just say?" so my vote goes to FreedomNow, he was more structured and had that better vocab I use and like.
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DAMN! I barely even looked at the last thread that started this battle, and I cant even vote! lol....fuckers..

Well if anything..glad to see no ones dicks mentioned! lol
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glad yall got to read this...


whenever either yall wanna battle i m down... i m sure phoenix is too... we should get a mini 4 folk tourney since we r all semi regular posters...
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glad yall got to read this...


whenever either yall wanna battle i m down... i m sure phoenix is too... we should get a mini 4 folk tourney since we r all semi regular posters...
since u dissin Az i got u next what is it???
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im down to get it with anyone also!! lets keep da battles poppin!!


add me to ur friends!


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