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Old 05-23-2006
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Default D.e.s.i.r.e.

his eyes connect with mine
flashes of light
inside
awaken this sweet pain
the deep seated hunger

i want
to reach out and touch
just a brush of his hand
and i would EXPLODE
into a million tiny pieces

the object and subject
of my every fantasy
his voice, face, presence
weakens my knees
and blurs my eyes

perfection is his form
i watch
and melt
into the hot liquid desire
flowing through me like blood
or an adrenaline rush
flooding my body
head
to foot
threatening to burst out
in word or action

i ache for him
i call to him
in my every thought
my body sings
wanting him

and when he looks away
i almost
die
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very nice.
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very good
i feel you on this
this is how i feel about the one i am talking to horita
props!
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thats real nice!!
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aaaaaawww nice poem but sad too...i loved it much propz
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thanks! i've known him for years but its still like that...
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