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Old 02-28-2012
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With these hands I've held many tears
With these hands I've sheltered many fears
They've carried these scars and lived far past their years
They've fought their battles and feel the burdens of many wars
Opened a few windows and slammed their share of doors
But I wouldn't be even half the man I am
Without the aching numbness I feel with these hands
With these hands I felt my best friend die
His blood covered them skin tight, fate
Designed gloves
With these hands I held his sister as she cried
And clung to her mother when I cried too
With these hands I held the whole world as if I would never put it down
And clung to stones in angry tides knowing that I might drown
With these hands I found sorrow, lies, truth, and love
With these hands I found what living really was
So when I tell you baby I hope you can understand
I couldn't love you like I do
If I didn't have these old hands
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With these hands I've held many tears
With these hands I've sheltered many fears
They've carried these scars and lived far past their years
They've fought their battles and feel the burdens of many wars
Opened a few windows and slammed their share of doors
But I wouldn't be even half the man I am
Without the aching numbness I feel with these hands
With these hands I felt my best friend die
His blood covered them skin tight, fate
Designed gloves
With these hands I held his sister as she cried
And clung to her mother when I cried too
With these hands I held the whole world as if I would never put it down
And clung to stones in angry tides knowing that I might drown
With these hands I found sorrow, lies, truth, and love
With these hands I found what living really was
So when I tell you baby I hope you can understand
I couldn't love you like I do
If I didn't have these old hands
How's marriage coming along?

Glad to see you're back, ghost.
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Not married YET but we're doing great! Little to no drama, so much passion even when we argue.... And we're making up 10 minutes later. I'm where I belong. thank you for asking mija!
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Not married YET but we're doing great! Little to no drama, so much passion even when we argue.... And we're making up 10 minutes later. I'm where I belong. thank you for asking mija!
^^It's ALL GOOD APA!!

Keep that FIRE burning ALWAYS!! Much luck to both ya'll.

but please.....DO KEEP POSTING, yes?
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Lol I can't very well turn down a beautiful lady now can I?
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LMAO..

You sure you got the right chick holmes?
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LMAO AYE COCHINO! she gonna jack you up at the next get together ese...and I'm not going to burn up another of my firme shirts smoking her off your ass! Already had to smoke her off Demon with my last zoot suit!....OYE MANO THAT WAS SOME SERIOUS EXPENSIVE POLYESTER!
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LMAO AYE COCHINO! she gonna jack you up at the next get together ese...and I'm not going to burn up another of my firme shirts smoking her off your ass! Already had to smoke her off Demon with my last zoot suit!....OYE MANO THAT WAS SOME SERIOUS EXPENSIVE POLYESTER!


Guaranteed if there is ever another SC get together (Highly doubtful) She most certainly will be the last member to get the invite .. if she gets one at all..

Second I fear her not..

and third...

Get your eyes checked brother..
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fuck it eh she can roll with me. EVERY woman has something beautiful about them...except my ex.....she got in the passenger side of my ride mano.....driver side wheel cover shot off and killed a dog...it was horrible man
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^are you saying that she's dead?

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